Slytherin!
Sequel to Hide Yourself Away! Please read or skim that first before you read this one, or else you’ll be quite lost.
Harry and Severus return to Hogwarts to finish out the third year, and encounter more problems, in the form of an escaped convict and a meddlesome Headmaster, but are aided by new and old friends to discover a truth that was hidden away.
Takes Place: 4th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by DaughterOfAres
Rated: T
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Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 26 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Apr 2008 / 27 Mar 2008
Series: Hidden Away - Challenges: None
Chapters: 26 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Apr 2008 / 27 Mar 2008
Series: Hidden Away - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 24: The Consequences of Disobedience | 18 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) |
- The consequences were fair. No worries. Though Aria seems to be in more trouble then Harry. Harry just has to deal w/ Severus. Aria has to deal w/ him + Lupin. Prehaps an added scene involving a scolding from Lupin for Harry?
Great chapter as always and I can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: Actually, Harry will endure a scolding from his godfather as well, once Lupin returns from the shack.
| Title: Chapter 26: Back Where We Belong | 20 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) |
- Great ending to a great story.
But now you have more time for Never Again! *grins*
Awesome story!
Author's Response: Yes, I do, though I don't think it will be quite as long as this one! Then again, one never knows!
After a bout of accidental magic and a rescue in the summer before his third year, Harry begins to develop an unlikely relationship with one Severus T. Snape.
Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 29 Mar 2008 / 29 Mar 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 29 Mar 2008 / 29 Mar 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Corpus Vile | 29 Mar 2008 |
| Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) |
- Yay! You posted here! I'm so happy.
This sounds really, really, horrible but I just saw you posted the story here and had to say something. I can't remember exactly what happens in this chapter, but I think I reviewed it on ff.net. Anyway, I have to be at work in like five minutes, so this isn't really a review (in case you hadn't figured that out it) but I wanted to tell you how wonderful it is that you posted here.
Thank, so, so much for posting here and I swear I'll give a real review for the next chapter.
Anyway, go to go.
Thanks again!
Author's Response:
Yeah I know, don't worry, I review and dash all the time XD
Oh yeah and thanks for making the suggestion - I've been on this site for ages but only as a reader, and I didn't really think about uploading because I am made of the most awesome brand of laziness out there. No seriously I am. It's a wonder I actually managed to write 10 chapters of this story and not let it fester in my document folder (which has been the fate of a lot of my other stories, let me assure you). But don't worry - I like this story enough to continue it definitely XD.
Anyway thanks for the nice review and the next chapter on P&S will probably be up in like a week or something. One needs to draw out the experience C: (and anyway it gives me time to actually write chapter 11 too
Near the end of 4th year Dumbledore notices that Harry is not coping well with the events after the third task. Therefore he decides to send Harry to stay with Severus Snape, for protection from both himself and others. NO self-harm.
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 2 - Completed: No - Updated: 25 Apr 2008 / 30 Mar 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 2 - Completed: No - Updated: 25 Apr 2008 / 30 Mar 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 | 30 Mar 2008 |
| Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) |
- Kinda short, but a great begining. Hope for more dialogue in the next chapter.
Please update soon! I can't wait to see where this story goes!
Author's Response: I'm afraid updates to this story will be slow but I'll write a longer chapter next time, I hear around 5000 words is best. Not to worry, the next chapter will have far more dialogue. Thanks for the review.
Mr. Potter, did you kill your relatives? Harry: Yes
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect
Chapters: 2 - Completed: No - Updated: 05 Apr 2008 / 01 Apr 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 2 - Completed: No - Updated: 05 Apr 2008 / 01 Apr 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 | 01 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) |
- Interesting begining!
I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks
Harry has finally had enough of his relatives' abuse and has locked himself in the chamber of secrets. To keep up appearances, Snape has been sent to take Harry's place for the summer.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Physical Punishment Spanking, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 7 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 20 May 2008 / 13 Apr 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Wake up Call
Chapters: 7 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 20 May 2008 / 13 Apr 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Wake up Call
| Title: Chapter 1: Meeting With the Headmaster | 13 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) |
- Okay, you've got a really good story going here. The plot is wonderful and you immediantly jump into the action.
However, you do need to work on a couple of things. First at the very end you suddenly start referring to Severus as Sev for no reason. This would be okay if we had some background (maybe have Albus or Minerva call him that, to show he accepts the nickname from some people).
Also, you need a bit more detail about the setting. For example, in the opening scene jump right into some conflict and dialoge with Dumbledore, which is wonderful, but out of no where McGonagall pops up. Try working in a line somewhere to let us she's there before she starts speaking.
You should try to aquire a beta. They are lifesavers. Beta's can tell you specifically when you need more detail or less and fix any common errors you may make.
Overall, you're off to a good start and I can't wait for an update. I'm really curious as to whats going to happen to Snape.
Author's Response: yes my lady...you are right! unfortunitely the betta i have is out of action for the moment and i don't know when she will be available again, however if you are offering to help me out, i will greatfully accept! i wlll endevor to work on the problem! thank you so much for the review!
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When Severus adopted 6 year old Harry Potter, he vowed that Harry would never know the abuse he had suffered as a child. But what happens when Severus is attacked and falls into a coma and the Ministry decides to turn Harry over to his next of kin—Tobias Snape! Will Harry survive?
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Healer Snape
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Healer Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Alcohol Use, Character Death, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 20 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 May 2008 / 14 Apr 2008
Series: Never Again! - Challenges: Tobias Snape
Chapters: 20 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 May 2008 / 14 Apr 2008
Series: Never Again! - Challenges: Tobias Snape
| Title: Chapter 1: Wake Up, Daddy! | 14 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) |
- Very interesting. I can't wait for more.
So is Tobias going to be abusive or try to make up for Sev's crappy life by being nice to Harry? You've got me wondering, because you said he checked into a clinc and is now sober yet Matt called him a bastard. I suppose I'll find out in the next chapter.
*squeel* I'm so excited someone answered my challenge! Great start and I can't wait to read more! Please update soon.
Author's Response: You will, but just remember, rehab ain't a cure all--look at Lindsey Lohan and about a dozen other Hollywood people I could name. I should be posting the next chapter of this & priosner tonight! Thanks!
| Title: Chapter 2: The Unwanted Brat | 15 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) |
- I still don't know what to think about Tobias. I mean he's definitaly an ass, but I don't think he'll be abusive to Harry like he was Severus. Harry will worm his way into the mans heart as horridly cliche as that sounds.
Also, please don't leave Severus in a coma for to long. a month or two or maybe three, but please not a year.
Great chapter and I'm eagerily awaiting the next one!
Author's Response: I won't leave Severus in a coma for a year, he isn't as badly hurt as all that. I was thinking maybe three months, but no longer than six. Glad you're enjoying this! I've also updated my other story tonight as well!
| Title: Chapter 3: Snape House Rules | 15 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) |
- *sniff* poor Harry.
great chapter and I can't wait for the next. Did I mention how thrilled I was that someone answered my challenge?
Author's Response: You did and I'm glad you're liking this so far!
| Title: Chapter 4: Boys Don't Cry | 16 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) |
- Do I since Tobias warming up to Harry? What will Sev do when he finds out? I can't wait till the next chapter! You're frequent updates are amazing!
Author's Response: Yes, you do and Sev will find out eventually as you'll see.