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After Harry is caught for exploding a cauldron in 2nd year Potions, Snape insists he keep a firm hand on the boy he must secretly protect. However, he discoveres that there is more to the twelve year old than unruliness and disrespect. Similarly, Harry learns from and gains a new perspective of his professor.

Takes Place: 2nd Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Stern
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Profanity
Chapters: 32 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 17 Jun 2008 / 25 Sep 2007
Series: Emerald Eyes - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 03 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed)
    Why did he do that, I would have thought he'd be glad to be out of there with the bottles.

    Author's Response: Well, because he was basically screwed either way.  I suppose I'm trying a Harry-is-attempting-to-be-accountable approach.  :)

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 22 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed)
    So what will Albus tell Harry?

    Author's Response: Well...several things...as much truth as he can without spilling it all :)

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 26 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed)
    Hmm maybe speding time alone with Snape won't make it such a punishment.

    Author's Response: Exactly!  Thank you for reading ;)

Harry has been depressed for weeks until one day during a potion's exam he finds out that Snape has taken matters into his own hands...

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Self-harm, Suicide Themes, Violence
Chapters: 8 - Completed: No - Updated: 16 Jan 2009 / 09 Oct 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: Speaking but not Listening 10 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed)
    I think we should be giving you skittles, say about a "whole bag full". This is really good, can't wait to see how Snape handles him.

Lily always dreamed of a quiet life. However, her status as wife to Great Britain's Premier Potions Master, and Mother of The Boy Who Lived seemed to quash any hope of a peaceful existence.

This is the story of Lily, Severus and Harry as I'd like to imagine their lives would be.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Child fic
Categories: Misc > All written in Snape's POV, Parental Snape > Stepfather Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Alcohol Use, Physical Punishment Spanking, Profanity
Chapters: 8 - Completed: No - Updated: 22 Nov 2007 / 24 Oct 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Let the games begin. 24 Oct 2007
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed)
    I looked at some of the reviews before posting my own because I didn't want to be to hard on this, but I have to say that I just can't think of Lily as the type of mother to sit in the tub when her son was about to get into trouble. In fact I can only imagine she'd be just the opposite. So I agree with everyone else and hope that Snape lightens up a little with Harry.

    Author's Response: I take your point, but I know from experience that some people change after losing their loved ones. I think perhaps that may become more apparent in the next few chapters. Thank you for your review though, it's nice to get feedback. 

After the Dobby incident at the beginning of the second book, Harry runs away, and Snape kidnaps him. In an old-fashioned house with no comforts and a huge black dog, Harry finds himself at Snape's mercy as Snape plays mind games and makes Harry live through different scenarios. Though Snape seems crazy and psychotic, Harry begins to see reasons behind Snape's sporadic behavior.

There is corporal punishment, but it is different from what I've written before. This is a Mean!Snape story for the most part. If you're looking for a cuddly story, go elsewhere please.

Takes Place: 2nd summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Cruel, Snape is Mean
Tags: Kidnapped, Runaway
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking, Violence
Chapters: 18 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 15 Apr 2009 / 08 Nov 2007
Series: The House Which Time Forgot - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Morning Talks 14 Nov 2007
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed)
    Something just is off with this and no it's not because of how you wrote your other stories. Harry is used to people treating him horribly during the summer. He is to much of a survivalist not to figure out how to placate Snape.

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Hurt 18 Jul 2008
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed)
    what did he say?

In a story that spans two decades, Lily and Severus look for a way to control the powers of the Dark Mark after Lily's life is threatened by Eileen Prince. Seventeen years later, Harry realized he has no idea who he is. SS/LE H/G RL/NT

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Character Death, Profanity, Romance/Het, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 55 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 14 Apr 2008 / 18 Nov 2007
Series: Lily's Charm - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Interfering Old Coot 06 Dec 2007
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed)
    where did snape go?

    Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see....   :oP

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Consequences 07 Dec 2007
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed)
    I think she got just what she deserved! Keep up the great work.

    Author's Response: Yes, Eileen definitely did deserve what she got.  Thanks for the review!  I hope you keep enjoying. 

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Progress 28 Dec 2007
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed)
    I reviewed this one on FFnet but I really think Harry got what he wanted after all his DAD made a decision for Harry's welfare which I think he was secretly hopping he would do.

    Author's Response:

    You're right.  That is what Harry wanted...some sort of ackowledgement that Snape is beginning to accept the role of his father.  Snape's reaction to the whole thing is up next chapter as Harry's response is exactly what he was hoping for too.  Just imagine how much easier all of this would be if they would share what they're thinking!  Of course, the story would be much shorter.  LOL

    Thanks for reviewing again.  :o)



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