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After a failed spell is used on Harry, he is accidentally deaged. Voldemort, angry with this failure, orders Snape to get close to the boy and then bring him to Voldemort. With Dumbledore telling him to follow along for the moment, Snape has to deal with a 7-year-old. But no one could possibly foresee what fate has in store for Harry Potter and Severus Snape.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Deaging, Kidnapped, Snape-meets-Dursleys, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Profanity, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 5 - Completed: No - Updated: 14 Jun 2009 / 30 Dec 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Of Beginnings 30 Dec 2007
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed)
    So I think from what we've seen so far that Harry will be de-aged in the next chapter or so. I like deaged fics so I'll be watching for the next update.

Title: Chapter 2: Of Youth 03 Jan 2008
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed)
    So this is permanent? This is really good by the way.

    Author's Response: They're still trying to figure out if it's permanent or not. There's no telling at this point. But Snape and Pomfrey are going to try and find a cure. Thanks so much for the review!

Title: Chapter 3: Of Meetings 07 Jan 2008
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed)
    Harry is smart so will he figure out that Snape's voice is the one he herd from Voldy?

    Author's Response: Yup,  : D  thanks for the reivew!

A near tragedy and a shocking discovery lead two bitter enemies to much soul searching and eventual acceptance of each other. Much angst along the way though. Some Ginny and Harry.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Character Death, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 43 - Completed: No - Updated: 01 Aug 2010 / 14 Jan 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Pickled brains and Sauteed Liver. 20 May 2008
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed)
    Hey, just to let you know I tried to reveiw this on ff.net and it wouldn't allow me too. Sooo, I just wanted to let you know that it was another fantastic chapter and I look forward to when Harry finally does call Snape dad or what ever. Keep up the great work.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks Phoenix1 for taking the time to come over here to review. FF was down for quite a while. I imagine I will have missed out on a few reviews because other than yourself, I doubt anyone would have made the effort to review over here. And if anyone tried to review and couldn't, chances are they won't go back to do it. Oh, well.

    I am very glad you enjoyed the chapter.

    ~Lesley~


Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Setback. 30 Jun 2008
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed)
    Oh man, that last line .... Harry and Severus are both hurting. Please let Severus tell him that he isn't distancing himself from Harry.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for your review, Phoenix1. I hope you enjoyed the chapter.

    Can't tell you waht is going to happen. What would be the point of leaving you hanging if i answered all your questions here? Heehee.

     ~Lesley~


At the end of third year Professor Snape makes a discovery about Harry. Harry's life will change and probably he will get the family he never had.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 24 Jan 2008 / 24 Jan 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 24 Jan 2008
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed)
    That was a good first chapter, you've got me wondering what will happpen in the next chapter so don't keep us waiting to long.

A duel with Draco leads to drastic and permanent consequences for both Harry and Severus.

Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Master Snape > Slave Harry
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Self-harm, Suicide Themes
Chapters: 79 - Completed: No - Updated: 17 Nov 2011 / 27 Jan 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 25 Feb 2008
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed)
    That was really emotional, poor Harry and I like the house elves I think they will keep Harry from losing his mind.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, Norie and Zan will help Harry a lot, especially in these first weeks, when Severus is still hostile.

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 18 Jun 2008
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed)
    Is Harry always going to be a slave? I know it creates angst but everyone needs a little hope, he's so depressing it's hard to keep reading.

    Author's Response:

    Aw, the million dollar question...to be honest, I haven't completely decided on an answer yet.  When I began the story, I intended for Harry to remain a slave, because I said he was example of how a person's life could be changed by an accident or a disease, and how they have to adjust to it, but can still live a full and rewarding life.  That's how I'm seeing Harry's case, and I thought (and still do think) that it could be life-affirming to write the story that way.

    But lately I've also been thinking that maybe I would find a way to free Harry either in this story or in the sequel, and give it that perfect happy ending. 

    As for Harry being depressed, yes, he is right now.  This is a really hard time for him...it's only been a few weeks since Sirius died and he's grieving and blaming himself. He's fallen victim to the slavery spell, which has had a profound effect on his life and the way he feels about himself, and he's facing the fact that he's the only person who can defeat Voldemort.  So yeah, poor Harry really does have a lot on his shoulders.  It's hard for me to write him like this sometimes, but I am trying to imagine how he would feel at this point in time, trying to deal with these heavy burdens that have fallen on him. 

    Things will get better for Harry.  It helps me to know all the things I have planned for him in the future, but I want "Slave Child" to be a long story so I'm trying to take my time and show all the details of his daily life with Severus and it's important to show how Severus is slowly changing and learning to care for Harry, or their future relationship won't be as believable, imo.  So even though Harry is very unhappy and depressed now, and will be for a while still, I do hope that if people hang in there til the end of this little saga, they'll be satisfied with the ending, I hope!        


Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 08 Jul 2008
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed)
    What a horrible place to leave us, please update soon. Awesome story by the way.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'll try.

Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 02 Sep 2008
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed)
    Ah that was wonderfully done! I look forward to the reporters stories the following day.

    Author's Response: Oh, thank you!  I'm glad you liked it. 


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