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| Shellie [Contact]
| Better be Slytherin!
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| Member since: 14 Jun 2007
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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Falling
| 06 Aug 2017
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Reviewer: Shellie (Signed)
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Eeks, as others have said you have a literal CLIFFhanger here! I hope you continue it soon and that someone notices the poor kid is starving!
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Ultimatums
| 08 Aug 2017
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Reviewer: Shellie (Signed)
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I know you have a life but I would love it if you could update this more than once a day. LOL
Time for Harry to admit what is going on, poor kid.
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Hypocrisy
| 04 Sep 2017
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Reviewer: Shellie (Signed)
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So obviously she has forgotten he could just obliviate her and Vernon. Wow, pretty stupid. Hope you update soon!
Title: Chapter 3: The Headmaster
| 25 Sep 2017
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Reviewer: Shellie (Signed)
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This is a really good story. I am interested to hear about what the wand means and read about a Harry Potter that nobody expected.
Title: Chapter 4: Accidental Magic
| 11 Nov 2017
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Reviewer: Shellie (Signed)
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I am really enjoying your story, hope for an update soon. Shouldn't he have someone check Harry's head if its been weird since it was smashed?
Author's Response: He should, but Severus isn't aware that its been weird or smashed. Don't worry, it'll all be attended to. Thanks for your review and I promise to update soon!
Harry Potter has created the perfect Boy Who Lived persona. He's learned to hide behind the mask, but what happens when it starts to crumble? Harry is determined not to find out especially not now that he's been forced into Occlumency lessons with his least favorite professor. Will Snape be able to see through the cracks to a boy who is just barely hanging on?
Takes Place: 5th Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 7
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Completed: No
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Updated: 12 May 2021 / 10 Nov 2017
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Unfortunate News
| 11 Nov 2017
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Reviewer: Shellie (Signed)
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My only advice to you is write faster. I can't believe this is your first try at writing. Both characters are very believable as you have written them. I look forward to reading more of this story.
Title: Chapter 1: The Wise House of Ravenclaw
| 01 Dec 2017
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Reviewer: Shellie (Signed)
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I am firmly convinced you cannot write a bad story. LOL This is your usual awesome standard and I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Title: Chapter 3: The Fair House of Hufflepuff
| 09 Dec 2017
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Reviewer: Shellie (Signed)
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Loved the beds in Hufflepuff! I want one now. lol I can't wait till Snape reads the court discussion. And of course Harry getting in to Slytherin.
Title: Chapter 2: Consequences
| 26 Jun 2018
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Reviewer: Shellie (Signed)
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I totally disagree with your statement. This is some of the best HP fan fiction I have read and I hope you post Chapter 3 soon. I don't think you need to include the text of the letter as long as you kind of go over the gist of it. But of course, you are the author and I would read it either way.
Author's Response: Thanks! I've been hesitant about it for a long time, but a few people here finally convinced me to post so here it is! I'm glad you like it.
Title: Chapter 2: Consequences
| 26 Jun 2018
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Reviewer: Shellie (Signed)
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ETA: I mean your statement that you don't think you can do HP justice. I disagree with that. :)
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