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| Nothing interesting about me, really. I like drawing, reading and writing. And as you can see I like Snape and Harry. I also have a learning disability, I would saw its Dyslexia but I don't have the certificate. [Report This]
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Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
| 25 Aug 2007
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Reviewer: Into The Depths (Signed)
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Oh Gods, I'm crying (well my version of a cry), I've hardly ever cried for a story. It was so sweet though. I like it better than A Year Like None Other if you've read it and how Harry reacts to the torture. I like your version better of his struggles. The diary is neat too and I can really see how you plan to show his progress.
I hope you don't kill off Snape 'cuz (would that be a banned word?)I saw mentions of DH. I don't think I would be able to handle anymore tear jerking emotions.
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
| 12 Sep 2007
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Reviewer: Into The Depths (Signed)
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Oh man! How come you torture me yet I keep coming back? I'm jumping up and down with excitement, please hurry onto the next chapter!
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
| 13 Sep 2007
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Reviewer: Into The Depths (Signed)
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Really, you think we hate cliffhangers? Noooo, not at alll. Destroy Harry's well being? I though he was supposed to get better not worse!
Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
| 25 Oct 2007
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Reviewer: Into The Depths (Signed)
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I think that Hermione's reaction, although pretty dramatic, was fine for her character. I remember that she cried after Harry had just yelled at them and had flung herself at him in pity, so nothing new here!
But, I bet Hermione is just going to search up PTSD anyways!
I think that...I want to read more and that I'll be counting the days until you update...and that it as very well written.
It says self harm in the warning. Is that because of what he did under Imperius or what he will do later (I am not partial to either)?
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I have the next two chapters finished, but am having trouble uploading them. They'll be here soon. ;) As for the self-harm...You'll just have to see. ;)
After Harry is caught for exploding a cauldron in 2nd year Potions, Snape insists he keep a firm hand on the boy he must secretly protect. However, he discoveres that there is more to the twelve year old than unruliness and disrespect. Similarly, Harry learns from and gains a new perspective of his professor.
Takes Place: 2nd Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Stern
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Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
| 07 Dec 2007
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Reviewer: Into The Depths (Signed)
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Awesome chapter! I loved how you made Snape in character even though he suspected neglect and/or abuse! Now, he checked Harry's wrist. Was that for cutting or just bruises?
Author's Response: Thank you! And actually, he was checking Harry's hands for potion damage since Harry had been working with so many expired onces. I believe the line in the chapter was "checked for potion-irritation". I often miss things in stories as well and things tend to make more sense after a second read-through...so I understand ;) And just so you know, there will not be any selfharm!Harry in this story. Thanks again for reading and reviewing :)
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