Hufflepuff!
At the welcoming feast Poppy notices that eleven-year-old Harry is wearing glamours, Severus looks after Harry during the first year, and together they decide to go on a time travel – will they be able to change something? AU, partly OOC.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st Year
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Resorting, Slytherin!Harry, Time Travel
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Kristeh
Rated: K
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 31 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Mar 2008 / 02 Sep 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 31 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Mar 2008 / 02 Sep 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 14: Meddling and Planning | 28 Nov 2007 |
| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) |
- Oh, Teddy, I'm sorry I've gotten behind! I've been quite busy with the holidays and writing, but I didn't mean to let your wonderful story slip!
I loved this chapter because we get to see Severus' plan for time travilling, and of course, the big shock about Harry's parentage. Great writing, as usual!
| Title: Chapter 15: A Significant Birthday | 28 Nov 2007 |
| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) |
- Oh, the adventure begins! I'm glad that Harry got a real birthday party with his friends, and now he knows the truth about Severus, too. It's so wonderful that they've got each other, especially now that they're heading back to a very dangerous, but exciting time.
| Title: Chapter 16: Another Birthday | 07 Dec 2007 |
| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) |
- Hi, Teddy,
Great chapter! It was so much fun reading how Harry and Severus/Salazar (I understand your decision on his name, that could get confusing real fast!) arrived in the past and how Harry finally got to meet Lily and James.
I'm anxious to see how things are going to develop for them all now, but I do hope Sirius' innocence can be proven. Once again, I really loved the chapter!
Author's Response:
Hello Kristeh,
thanks for your review :-)
If you have time to beta again and feel up to do so, please drop me a note :-)
| Title: Chapter 17: Summer Studies | 16 Dec 2007 |
| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) |
- I'm so sorry I missed a chapter, Teddy! It was great! It's wonderful to see Harry becoming friends with young Lily, James, Remus, and Severus. I was glad he persuaded Remus to tell the others about his lycanthropy, and it's nice to see all the young people getting along and not feuding.
Harry does need to be careful about trying out new things with his magic, but he is still just a kid, despite being very mature and powerful so it makes sense that sometimes he doesn't think about all the possible consequences.
It sounds like being back in the past is helping already, but what a cliffhanger! The good part is that I can just go on and read the next chapter already!
| Title: Chapter 18: Visions | 16 Dec 2007 |
| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) |
- Oh, I loved this chapter! What a great thing that Harry was able to warn Dumbledore and the others about Voldemort's plan to attack the Hogwarts Express. It would have been such a catastrophe if he'd succeeded. It really helps you to understand what a dangerous time it was during the first war, too.
Harry gets so sick after these visions, though, and his health isn't perfect to start with. I'm still concerned for him.
On a related note, it was cute how Severus and Lily understand about Salazar being so protective of Harry. I don't blame him a bit either. Harry is in danger a good bit, his health seems a bit precarious, and Harry is really all Salazar has.
Now I'm wondering if Lily picked up on Harry calling her 'mum'...
Author's Response:
Of course she did - she istn't stupid either *lol*.
Thanks for your reviews, I really appreciate them. I'm still missing your betaing though :-(
Hope to hear from you soon! Greetings teddy
| Title: Chapter 18: Visions | 16 Dec 2007 |
| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) |
- Hi, Teddy,
I just sent you a message about beta-ing. I'd love to!
| Title: Chapter 20: The Chamber's Secrets | 07 Jan 2008 |
| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) |
- Lovely chapter, Teddy! I adore the bit with the friendly basilisk! And it's wonderful for Hagrid to be proven innocent!
You sure know how to leave people on a cliffhanger, don't you?
| Title: Chapter 21: Death Eaters | 07 Jan 2008 |
| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) |
- I'm really glad that Harry caught the Snitch: That'll show Sirius! And now the plan is underway...I sure hope it'll all turn out well!
And it's so sweet and wonderful to see Harry bonding with his future parents and friends!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing - and for beta-ing of course. Yes, they should have thought about the possibility of Voldemort not showing up ;-)
| Title: Chapter 22: The Snake's Den | 14 Jan 2008 |
| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) |
- Yay, Voldemort's gone! I'm so happy the plan worked, and it's mind-boggling to think how many lives will be spared or improved because he won't be around in the future!
Good thing that Harry and Severus are all right, too, and I'm glad that the truth about the relations between Albus, Minerva, Lily, and Harry have all come out!
Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Maybe the way they finished Voldemort was a bit too easy but I just wanted them to do it the unusual way ;-)
Thanks for reading, beta-ing, and reviewing :-)
| Title: Chapter 26: Dragon Talks | 17 Feb 2008 |
| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) |
- Wonderful chapter, teddy! I love that Harry and Salazar were able to cure Remus!
It was very clever of Harry to think about talking parseltongue to the dragon, and fortunate that she did understand it. I'm glad she was able to get her egg back and everything ended peacefully.
You know, I hadn't really thought about how it might be when Harry and Salazar go back into the future, with their 'new' selves being affected by the new timeline. That could be really interesting. I almost think I'd be a little frightened if I were Harry.
Great chapter again!
Author's Response:
Hmm. I think I'd be much more frightened if I were Severus as he is older and has much more experience. I can imagine that Harry just relies on him and doesn't think so much about everything.... Let's wait and see :-)
Thanks for reading and reviewing :-)