Hufflepuff!
At the welcoming feast Poppy notices that eleven-year-old Harry is wearing glamours, Severus looks after Harry during the first year, and together they decide to go on a time travel – will they be able to change something? AU, partly OOC.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st Year
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Resorting, Slytherin!Harry, Time Travel
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Kristeh
Rated: K
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 31 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Mar 2008 / 02 Sep 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 31 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Mar 2008 / 02 Sep 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 27: The Shrieking Shack | 09 Mar 2008 |
| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) |
- Loved the idea of the orphanage and school! It sounds like it will really work well for those children.
What a great image of Harry and Lily flying together...I can just imagine it.
Now I'm off the next chapter!
| Title: Chapter 28: Baby Times | 09 Mar 2008 |
| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) |
- Harry certainly was lucky that he was in phoenix form, and Severus was lucky, too. I'm glad the headmaster was able to see Peter Pettigrew for what he was.
It sounds like Harry is having a tough time deciding what to do, and how to do it. I can't wait to see what comes next.
| Title: Chapter 29: The Orphanage | 09 Mar 2008 |
| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) |
- I loved the pranks here...Harry in baby pajamas, and then his revenge on Minerva and Poppy.
It's great how eager everyone is to help with the orphanage, too. It's going to be such a great place!
Author's Response: Thanks, Kristeh - I'm glad you liked the chapters! Only one more and an epilogue.... :-)
| Title: Chapter 30: Returning to the Future | 19 Mar 2008 |
| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) |
- I agree that it was best for Harry for them to return to the future now...six weeks of stress couldn't be good. I can really understand how worried Harry was feeling, and Severus, too, because now they really are stepping into the unknown. While they are hoping (and we are, too) that everything has turned out much better than it was, they can't know for sure until they arrive back in the future.
And it would be hard to say good-bye to say to friends they've made, but the good part of that is that it really isn't good-bye. With a little luck, everyone will be waiting for them in the future.
I loved how Harry made sure that Severus received the Order of Merlin, too. Severus has been really brave, especially for such a young kid, and he deserves the recognition!
| Title: Chapter 31: Epilogue - The Future | 19 Mar 2008 |
| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) |
- Oh, that was a perfect ending to a fabulous story! I loved how everything worked out, with Lily and James still alive, and Harry's little twin brothers. It sounds as if Harry ended up having a wonderful life, surrounded by family and friends who loved him, which is what he always deserved!
Congratulations for completing an awesome story!
Severitus challenge response. On Harry's 15th birthday, a surprising truth is revealed. Now he and Snape must deal with its consequences.
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: T
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 15 - Completed: No - Updated: 29 Sep 2007 / 03 Sep 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 15 - Completed: No - Updated: 29 Sep 2007 / 03 Sep 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Prologue | 22 Sep 2007 |
| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) |
- A very intriguing start! I'm curious to see what's next.
| Title: Chapter 2: Birthday Surprises | 22 Sep 2007 |
| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) |
- I've always loved how the Weasleys just took Harry in and all but adopted him. It's good to see him get to have a birthday party and a little fun. Sounds like he's got a bombshell coming soon, though.
When Harry Potter comes to Hogwarts, Snape is forced to reexamine his initial impressions.
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 24 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 07 Sep 2007 / 04 Sep 2007
Series: Equilibrium and Evolution - Challenges: None
Chapters: 24 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 07 Sep 2007 / 04 Sep 2007
Series: Equilibrium and Evolution - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 | 22 Sep 2007 |
| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) |
- Oh, wow. Poor Severus, and poor Harry. I loved how you took the canon beginning and showed Severus' perspective. It helps explain why he had such an instant dislike to Harry--imagining him to be just like James and expecting to be treated like a celebrity.
But I do hope he'll come to see that he's wrong. Harry is about as far from spoiled and arrogant as a child can get, and he really needs an adult who will watch over and protect him.
Looking forward to more!
| Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 | 22 Sep 2007 |
| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) |
- Well, that first Potions class didn't go so well, did it? I'd love for Severus to realize that Harry was in fact paying attention and taking notes. Hopefully at some point in the future, he will.
I like Severus' and Minerva's good-natured competition about the House points, and the first flying lesson is good. It shows how Severus is already looking out for Harry's welfare even though he doesn't like him (yet?).
| Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 | 24 Sep 2007 |
| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) |
- Boy, I sure hope Harry does win that Quidditch match. I'd love to see Severus' face. Minerva and Severus are both very cute here.
Must be frustrating for Severus for Dumbledore to dismiss his opinions about Quirrell and Harry, if Dumbledore does in fact not take him seriously about Quirrell--he may just not want to say anything in front of Severus. I think Dumbledore knows not to trust Severus' opinion about Harry.