Slytherin!
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As Harry enters his sixth year at Hogwarts, Voldemort's lengthening shadow stretches across the wizarding world and Harry is tormented by the knowledge that he alone can end this reign of terror. Worse, his mysterious mental link to Voldemort is stronger than ever and threatens to overwhelm him. Only Snape can teach him to control the nightmarish visions, but can Harry and Snape learn to trust one another, or will an old grudge that refuses to die destroy the wizarding world's sole hope of defeating the Dark Lord?
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Sweartoad
Rated: T
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Warnings: Character Death, Violence
Chapters: 20 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 27 Mar 2007 / 28 Feb 2007
Series: Harry Potter and the Enemy Within Series - Challenges: None
Chapters: 20 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 27 Mar 2007 / 28 Feb 2007
Series: Harry Potter and the Enemy Within Series - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Prologue | 10 Sep 2007 |
| Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) |
- So I am one of those people who read this story [many] times on ff.net, but found myself to be so lazy that I didn't review (which was really quite stupid of me, because this story is like one of the best Harry and Snape gen fics I have ever come across XD)
So here I am XD
"McGonagall smiled slightly. “No, but as Deputy Headmistress, I can make your life quite miserable, you know. It’s only two more years, Severus and then he’ll be gone. I will not be. Do you really want to make an enemy of me?”
That's it, Minerva - open a can of WHOOPASS! on Snapey XD
Snapey - I can't decide if I should take points off of you for being an evil git, or give you points for being an evil git. Hmm. I shall have to ponder ...
Did I mention this story is awesome? XD
| Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Summer | 10 Sep 2007 |
| Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) |
- "You need to think long and hard about how many more lives you’re willing to sacrifice to this hatred.”
HARSH, Remy. Very harsh. But necessary nonetheless XD
I like the description of Weasley's Wizard Wheezes - very nice and colourful. I have much love for the tongue, too XD
| Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: School Starts | 10 Sep 2007 |
| Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) |
- OH MAH GAWD SNAPEY YOU ARE A BASTARD XD But, you know, in a nice, cuddly sort of way XD
I want to commend you on the fact that your chapters are like awesomely long and whatever. Plus all of your characters, not just Harry and Snape (and possibly Dumbledore) are really IC. I luff it when everyone looks and sounds like they're supposed to XD
| Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Occlumency and Legilimency | 10 Sep 2007 |
| Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) |
- “Had you been expecting to?” Dumbledore asked mildly."
Dumbledore owns every scene he's in. He's sort of like Johnny Depp in Pirates of the Caribbean - there would be no Harry Potter without Albus Dumbledore XD
I'll start on reviewing the rest of the chapters tomorrow, because I am really tired xD
This remains one of my favourite stories C:
| Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Love and Hate | 11 Sep 2007 |
| Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) |
- Snapey Snapey Snapey ... you are not my favourite character for nothing XD
I can completely relate with how Harry is feeling with the whole Ron/Hermione thing, but I'm happy that Snape is like SUCK IT UP, BIATCH. Plus nice Snape/Harry interaction XD I always wanted the whole Snape/Harry luff thing to happen, but I think that your way is also just as good - not exactly friends, I think, but probably more like family or whatever, with such a deep connection and the fact that (later on) they are going to start to depend on each other.
I luff XD
| Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Christmas at the Weasleys's | 11 Sep 2007 |
| Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) |
- Yay, I love epistolaries! You know, even if you only see two letters and the rest are just referred to. It still rocks XD
Plus, I get the feeling that Minerva is being amazingly interfering, what with telling Snapey that Harry expects a reply back. NAUGHTY NAUGHTY MINNIE. IT'S NOT NICE TO TAKE ADVANTAGE OF SNAPEY IN AN AREA HE'S SO OBVIOUSLY NOT ACCUSTOMED TO. No no no XD
| Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Defense Against the Dark Arts | 11 Sep 2007 |
| Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) |
- Yay XD Occlumency and Legilimency are awesome XD
Plus Snapey really is a bastard. And Ryan ... I don't really know what to make of him. Hopefully he'll say something outside of the classroom and his aforementioned feud with Snape, and I can start figuring him out XD
| Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Potions | 11 Sep 2007 |
| Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) |
- “Maybe they plan to impersonate you and Harry,” Hermione said with a remarkably straight face."
LOL. Hermione you pwn everyone XD
Plus the whole I-can't-help-you-if-you-don't-trust-me thing is a nice touch. Harry and Snape and like everyone else are so believable! I heart XD
| Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Flying | 11 Sep 2007 |
| Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) |
- OMG! Who is using polyjuice to impersonate Crabbe?!?! Is Goyle an imposter too? Where is Lucius Malfoy???
Lol I bet he's the one infiltrating Hogwarts.
Also, Harry, you are a bit of a coward but no matter, I still love you XD
| Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: The Dark Mark | 11 Sep 2007 |
| Reviewer: Sweartoad (Signed) |
- OMG DUMBLEDORE YOU ROCK.
Plus I'm very glad that Harry and Snapey had a ... er, "reconciliation". I'm not quite sure what you call a reconciliation between two people who can't really stand each other. Ah well XD
But Mr. Weasley saying all that stuff ... hopefully he doesn't get into trouble X(