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Harry and Hermione are de-aged to four year olds, and Snape is stuck looking after them.

Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Loving
Tags: Adoption, Child fic, Deaged!Harry, Deaging, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Misc > All written in Snape's POV, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 15 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 31 Oct 2010 / 14 Aug 2010
Series: Days We Learn From - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 6: Invasion of the Sickies! 14 Sep 2010
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
    Oh, I just have to draw Sev with the two little kids tucked up under his hippogryff quilt! The image is too sweet!

    I'm glad you are feeling better and have survived the frst fortnight of lasses. My classes started last Tuesday and I feel like I'm preparing for my NEWTs, I have so muh work! Thank you for a lovely break from algebra and personal finanial management homework.

    Bravo!

    Danngkatz

Title: Chapter 10: Fires of Change 04 Oct 2010
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
    Wow! an exciting Christmas Eve! I do hope that Draco will be all right. I really love the idea of him and Harry becoming "siblings". Three cheers for Severus!

    I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

Sequel to Common Ground. After Halloween, Snape and Harry begin to bond even more as they discover some common interests. But will it stand the test of time... and can Sev protect Harry from the evil that stalks him? AU, Sev and Harry mentor/guardian story

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Kidnapped
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Profanity
Chapters: 50 - Completed: No - Updated: 27 Apr 2013 / 18 Oct 2010
Series: Something In Common - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 16: Harry's First Real Christmas 10 Aug 2011
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
    Wonderful!

Title: Chapter 27: Awakening 29 Apr 2012
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
    Oooh, what a place to leave us! An excellent chapter. I'm glad that Madam Pince is alright.

    I'm still reading and I hope that your mother's recovery is quick and as pain free as possible.

AU. Time Travel. Snape goes back in time, holding the knowledge of what is to come if he fails. No longer holding a grudge, he seeks to shape Harry into the greatest wizard of all time, starting on the day Hagrid took Harry to Diagon Alley.

Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys, Time Travel
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 34 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 09 Feb 2015 / 14 Nov 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 13: National Treasure 20 Jan 2011
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
    Excellent read; not dry at all. I really love this story and am so pleased when you update. Bravo to you and your muse for a great job!

Title: Chapter 14: Curse, Be No More 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
    Oh, dear! This sounds so very worrisome. Are the people who were there when Harry did the first two cures getting sick, too?

    I'm continuing to enjoy this story very much and am looking forward to the next chapter.

Harry has no idea what is happening to him or why he cannot remember anything from the past year. But Snape knows what is going on, and he can't tell Harry.

Takes Place: 6th Year, 9 - Post Epilogue (middle aged Harry) - Snape flavour: Snape is Secretive
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 14 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 15 Jan 2011 / 04 Dec 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: If Memory Serves 04 Dec 2010
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
    Well, you certainly have my curiosity piqued! I am wondering whether everything in this chapter is really happening and Harry's been hit by a curse or been poisoned or if this is all essentially a figment of his imagination (either from dreaming, or being the effects of a curse or poison, etc). In either case, things certainly don't look good for our hero.

    You have a nice writing style and the characterizations are quite good. Yes, you had a lot of things going on in this chapter but it didn't feel like it was crammed in with a shoe horn. You made efficient use of the length without resorting to dropping anvils to get the clues across to the reader. And bless you for not falling into the laundry list/unnecessary use of excessive adjectives form of descriptions. I had no trouble identifying time, place, what the characters were feeling. Your style here is eminently readable. Bravo!

    I'm really looking forward to the upcoming chapters.

    Author's Response: Ooh, I'm liking the theories. Glad you liked it!

Title: Chapter 5: Lily's Pendant 14 Dec 2010
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
    This was a fabulous chapter. I'm not sure if I've figured out what is really going on yet, so I shan't say anything here. However, I really like the relationship you have developing between Harry and Severus. And the dialogue is great. Good luck on the homeork and I look forward to the next chapter when you get it posted. Happy Christmas!

Harry and Snape need to find a new home for the summer.

Takes Place: 2nd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 3 - Completed: No - Updated: 06 Jun 2013 / 06 Dec 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 23 Aug 2011
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
    Tobias is an intersting man. I like his rules. :) I loved what Severus did for John Whicher. I look forward to the what happens next.Great job!

    Author's Response: Thank you!

Just before Christmas, Harry hears the basilisk again and believes he's going mad. Why else would he hear a voice that no one else can, talking about blood and death? Unable to take the stress, he flees the castle in the middle of a blizzard. Severus Snape follows him and they end up trapped in a cave, along with a very rare creature. Will they survive to see Christmas morning? Will they finally learn to set aside old grudges and impressions and learn the truth about each other? Christmas 2010 fic! Sick!Harry and sick!Severus, AU, mentor/apprentice, COS.

Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Runaway, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Profanity
Chapters: 18 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 04 Feb 2011 / 07 Dec 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 5: Tell Me No Lies 14 Dec 2010
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed)
    I really like this story, especially as you are so good at depicting three-dimensional characters and write such natural sounding dialog. I look forward to reading more.

    I love The Wise One. I hope that Harry will talk to her about things. I keep thinking that if he would only slip up and say something like "I can't tell anyone, Dumbledore says I have to go back every year!" then Sev could do something about the situation. Of course, Harry would need to talk about the details eventually, to
    help him heal. Unfortunately, he is only a kid still and seems to think he has only two choices: stay nothing at all or to tell every last detail. I'm sure, however that between the Ruffled Serpent and Sev, things will be sorted out.

    I hope your ankle gets better soon (been there, done that, have been trying to return the t-shirt ever since) and you have a Happy Christmas and New Year.

    Author's Response:

    Ah that slipup is coming in the next chapter! So keep reading!

    Yes, unfortunately that's how it is with a lot of abused kids, they have major trust issues (and no wonder), and tend to believe it's all or nothing. The Wise One will give Harry some good advice, however.

    Thanks, one of the reasons my ankle is in such bad shape is the multiple tears and sprains it has had, plus my FM does not help anything.

    Next chapter is up!



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