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I’ve been a Harry Potter fan since the late 90's; both to the books and the movies. I hope to someday create some enjoyable fics and will be a respectable member. Cheers!

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Sequel to A Time and Place to Grow - After spending a summer with Snape, Harry begins his sixth year at Hogwarts. But Snape is keeping an eye and a firm hand on him, and a new teacher, split loyalties and a looming fight with the Dark Lord await Harry.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking, Violence
Chapters: 23 - Completed: No - Updated: 13 May 2010 / 02 Apr 2007
Series: A Time and a Place - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Hairbrush in the Dungeons 23 Nov 2007
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed)
    Yeah! It was so wonderful for me to find this update. I love this story, please keep updates flowing!

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Squabbling 23 Jan 2008
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed)
    Oh no! Not that crazy b***h again! I hate that Moretta woman, she's just..gluck, lol. I'M SO HAPPY YOU UPDATED! I love reading this story it's very entertainig and interesting. When Harry was fighting with Malfoy I laughed at Harry's teasing ^_^ I don't like Draco at all but I had to laugh at some of his comments. As for Ron and Hermione's reactions, I think Hermione is overreacting and that Ron has a point for one, lol. PLEASE POST AGAIN SOON!

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Faking 24 Feb 2008
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed)
    I'm so happy you updated! God, it's been forever. Excellent chapter, I loved the scene where Harry was faking scar pain and everyone was panicking, I had to laugh! Can't wait to see what's in store for Harry with this new training, and I hope Harry's hair is saved from a stupid hair-cut, lol. Excellent work, I love your sense of humor in this story and it is very interesting to read. I still don't like that Moretta woman, theres just something about her that miffs me, not sure what. PLEASE post again soon!

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Guilty 06 Mar 2008
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed)
    I am so incrediably happy you updated this story! You did a really good job making the characters sound cannon, and you added both humor and some seriousness. Ron made me laugh when he was going on about Draco's punnishement, I felt like Harry's reaction. Draco does diserve some embarrassment because he is so bloody awful to the Weasleys, but I have to admit that it was bad of Harry to tell them of his punnishments. I had to laugh when Harry was chased, poor bloke was in deep trouble. Severus's comments made me smirk in amusement. This new training room sounds interesting, cant wait untill they try it out. Wonderful work with this story, you've gone a really great job so far. PLEASE post again soon!

As Harry comes of age, he must discover the secret of how Voldemort cheated death and find a way to defeat this evil once and for all. Along the way, he will have to contend with Death Eaters, shadowy Ministry officials and suspicions that threaten to tear his own allies apart. And he will need to delve farther than ever before into the mysteries of the mind where victory can only be won by freeing the chained souls.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 31 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 Jul 2007 / 16 Apr 2007
Series: Harry Potter and the Enemy Within Series - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Endings and Beginnings 17 Sep 2007
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed)
    Dear Theowyn,

    I LOVED, LOVE, AND WILL CONTINUE TO LOVE THIS STORY!!!! Forever. I mean it. This, I SWEAR to it, is one, if not THE best Harry Potter and Severus Snape fan-fiction story I have ever read. There was so much emotion, mistery, action, adventure, angst, and humor in this one story. I laughed, cried, and whooped in victory that the ending was how I was wishing it to be. Perfect, you made Snape and Lupin friends, saved almost all, but the most important to me, characters I was praying Rowling to keep in the last book. I don't plan on reading the last two books until the sixth movie comes to theaters, so if ANYONE dies PLEASE don't tell me. It would kill me if you did, so please don't tell me. Thanks. I love this storey, you are an amazing author, if Rowling kills anyone I love, I will complain that YOU should have re-written the last books. I mean it, this is realy amazing work! Now I just need to see if you wrote any other stories and read them if so. AMAZING WORK! Keep it up.

    much love,

    snarky Beth

    P.s. so far, this is the best story i've read at this site. Just so you know. Oh, and if I find you havn't wrotten any other stories then the Harry Potter and the Enemy Within Series, please do so now! Thanks again.

When Harry finds an injured Snape on his doorstep and must hide him from the Dursleys, he has no idea that this very, very bad day will be the start of something good.

Harry and Snape are thrown together by annoying relatives, a series of strange dreams, and Voldemort's latest hunt for Harry, but their greatest challenge may well be surviving each other. This will be a long summer unless the two can find a way to work together. A slow-burn enemy-to-mentor story.

Alternate 6th summer (and part of the school year): post-OotP; ignores HBP and DH.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 61 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 08 Mar 2021 / 30 Apr 2007
Series: None - Challenges: Battered Snape for Breakfast
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Squinting at Snape 03 Nov 2007
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed)
    No! You can't leave it there, are you mad?! That scene was the perfect amount of excietment, anxiety, emotional-ness, and funny-ness all mixed together, that it's pure torture to not have more! I love you're ideas for this chapter, if they do indeed all come from you're head or come from something of Rowling's remains to be seen, but I loved it anyway. Please, please, please update soon! *Puppy-dog-eyes* I love this story, it's very interesting and entertaining to read. ^_^ Update please.

    Beth

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - The Scent of Safety 06 Nov 2007
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed)
    Yes! Go start the next chapter ASAP Kirby! I LOVE reading this story, it is so entertaining and enjoyable. I hope you make a sequel when you finnsh this one. Please!

    Author's Response: Yes, ma'am! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! Thanks for the review!

Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - A Lesson in Being Gryffindor 23 Jan 2008
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed)
    I'm so unbealivably happy you updated! I LOVE reading this story, it's so entertaining, emotional, thoughtful, deep, interesting, and exceiting. It's also very realistic, I can imagine J.K. Rowling putting this in her books. You keep everyone so extreamly well in character, and thier revealing thoughts fit them so well. You are an amazing writer, I envy you! That thing about Snape seeing Harry as a bay was both funny and cute! I'd LOVE for you to make a sequal, your plans for it sound great. PLEASE POST AGAIN SOON!

    P.S. Are you interested in RPing? If so, there is this site I go to and I think you'd make a wonderful Harry. Maybe Dumbledore? Just let me know and we can discuss it ^_^

Snape and Harry story in which they discover a special connection between them. Takes place in the first year when Harry is 11. Some chapters will contain corporal punishment. Mentor/adoption fic.

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 12 - Completed: No - Updated: 21 Apr 2008 / 09 May 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Change of Plans 26 Nov 2007
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed)
    I love this story! It's so cute and entertaining. I want more! Please?

    Author's Response: More? Hmm...I'll see what I can do. *grin* Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. Even if I'm slow responding, I do really appreciate it and I'm glad that you like the story. :)

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Choose Your Weapon 21 Apr 2008
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed)
    I'm so happy you updated this story! I find the interaction between Severus and the boys to be really sweet and amusing. Even though I don't really care for Draco, I felt the scene between him and Severus enjoyable to read, and you seem to be keeping him well in character (a spoiled, jealous little brat). I can't wait for the next chapter, I wonder if Severus plans to do something with this new knowledge. Poor Harry, he's such a sweet child ^^. Please post again soon!

    Author's Response: Glad that you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I love Sev and his boys (like you can't guess that, lol) and it is fun to write about them. Thank you for your kind words regarding the scene with Sev and Draco. I think that kiddo is misunderstood a lot of times. No promises on when the next chapter will be ready, but I think it will contain a few surprises. Thanks again for your feedback. :)


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