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Reviews by snarky Beth
Harry gets some surprising news. He was adopted. His father is alive and he has a brother; named Severus Snape. Beta'd by breannatala
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe, Deaging Categories: Big Brother Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 23 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 22 Aug 2007 / 23 May 2007 Series: Brothers - Challenges: None
I was so upset near the end of chapter 16. *wipes eyes* I felt so bad for poor little Severus, all he wanted was for his mommy to love him. I actually cried, I usually can hold myself back so that my tears stay in my eyes when I read something really sad and heart-breaking, but that just made the tears flow. Poor little Severus! *sob* Someone hug the poor little bugger! Eileen is a sad excuse of a mother, she doesn’t care about her kids at all. She is so heartless. When I first read you’re Eileen, I was very disappointed in her. I thought that she was a very irresponsible mother and that it was very sad that she left poor little Severus. As I read more about her, and she was introduced, I totally loathed her! Eileen is a skanky b***h, she totally doesn’t deserve any ones time or love. Serenity rules! She totally put Eileen in her place! It was really eerie when I read how Serenity and Severus met in you’re story though. I had made two different characters named Serenity a couple years ago, one girl was in a Fan-fic named Serenity that had met Severus, and the way they met sounds so alike its creepy! Yeah, I’m not going to give any more info away, because I’m planning on posting the story as soon as I find it. I need to clean my room darn it! hehe. The other girl was a character I created at an RPG site, whom was best friends with Lily at Hogwarts, whom secretly loved Severus. It really sucks that they closed the site. *pout* They closed it a little while after the fifth book came to stores, apparently the admin couldn’t keep up with the site and just deleted it. No one had any notice whatsoever, it sucked. I think Tobias is a harsh but far person. He is also funny, and very wise. He is a great father, I love how he cares deeply for his sons, it’s so sweet, yet he knows how to handle them so that they are terrified, it’s really funny. I’m so glad that Tobias finally ditched that woman. I love the Harry and Severus brother interaction, it’s cute and funny. That one scene where Severus hugged Harry, when he was feeling down and betrayed, was so sweet! Severus always tries to seem indifferent, but he really has such a beautiful soul. I thought the end was so cute and funny. Poor Harry! Hehe. Note: I think you did a good enough job on Voldemort, but next time you have issues with him, think of an evil, smarmy, sneaky arse. When you’re writing him, think of things in his point of view, how pissed he would be if something happened that would be very bad for him. Have the anger build, the evilness show, and keep his smugness when he thinks he is going to win. Hope that helps! Much love, Beth P.S. I’ll go check out the sequel now. Author's Response: Wow! Thanks for the awesome review! I'm really glad you like it! I have to say that the scene in chapter 16 was my beta's idea though I did all the writing. (I cried when I wrote it, but don't tell anyone:)) Eileen is actually my favorite character. I mean yes she's a b***h but she's a good character. Serenity...well, read the sequel. Have fun cleaning your room. Tobias is another of my favorite characters, but I find he's harder to write then Eileen. I laughed at when I wrote the scene when Severus hugged Harry. Thanks for the tips on Voldemort. I'll put them to good use. Thanks for the review, hope you enjoy the sequel just as much. DaughterOfAres. An AU set in Harry's fifth year at Hogwarts. What happens when Harry and Ron get tired of studying and look for a way around it? Chaos ensues of course. And who will ultimately bear the brunt of things? Why none other than our favorite Potions Master. Just what he will do with his new responsibility is anyone's guess however. A Harry de-aged fic because I, unlike some people, can not resist a pair of soulful green eyes which is exactly what this little plot bunny had.
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: None Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic, Deaging Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 11 - Completed: No - Updated: 23 May 2008 / 24 May 2007 Series: None - Challenges: None
Author's Response: So sorry for the late response. Thank you very much for your review and I'm glad that you are enjoying the story. Considering that little Harry decided to play a lot lately an update should be posted shortly. :)
Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying the story! It's fun to write and little Harry usually comes up with someting that I hadn't planned, but what's an author to do? No way am I strong enough to resist that cutie. :D Thanks again for reading and reviewing.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked this chapter. It was fun to write and I couldn't resist a bit of mush at the end. :)
I loved the reunited scene, it was too cute! Harry loves his 'Nape, and he loves Harry ^^. I'll be waiting for your next chapter! Life as a double agent begins to take its toll on Snape. Can Harry really trust his most hated professor?
Takes Place: 6th summer, 5th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Suicide Themes
Chapters: 16 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 29 Jul 2003 / 19 Dec 2003 Series: None - Challenges: None
Harry has a tougher time than anyone thought. Not only is he caught up in the war between light and dark, but the on going battle between the realms of magic and science as well. What can a young boy and a tetchy Potions Master do to help one another? And what is said Potion Masters fathers’ role in this?
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe Categories: Master Snape > Apprentice Harry, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Violence
Chapters: 17 - Completed: No - Updated: 12 Oct 2007 / 26 May 2007 Series: None - Challenges: None
This story is amazing. You have such creative and original ideas, they are really entertaining to read. I love the humor, Snape's thought cracked me up! lol. ^_^ I can't wait for the next chapter! Please, please, please update soon! *puppy dog eyes* As for Halloween, I have given this some thought, and I have concluded that I don't think Wizarding children would dress up for Halloween. They would enjoy the mischief and the festivities, but I just think that dressing up would be over rated. You see, in our world, vampires, werewolves, unicorns and the lot are all fantasy creatures, whereas for them they are all normal creatures of there world, as common as say cats and dogs, ya dig? That's just MY thoughts on the matter though… If you are determined for them to dress up though, I think Hermione would dress up as someone she looks up to that was important to the community, Ron would do someone famous and exciting, and Harry would want to do something common, so he doesn’t stand out the most. He can hide in the crowd! I really hope you update soon, Ttyl Beth Author's Response: Thank thee kindly chuckyhun ^v^ Hmm, maybe you have a pont about Halloween. I know that I could come up with reasons for dressing them up (ie - Hermione/Sirius drags them off to the Muggle world, or, it is a sign of respect to the different species or something) but I have had another idea for Halloween given to me from someone over on ff which might work a whole lot better. ^-^ But thanks so much for the input hun xXx It's really difficult to know where to take a story if people don't tell me what they think so you opinion was very much appretiated. <3 Thanks again, Amy P.S: what does 'ttyl' mean? O_o
Author's Response: Blast! She did the puppy dog look! >_< How do I resist that? Yes! Severus will be in the next chapter, causing trouble and being mean and winding Sirius up. Heh heh heh. Thanks for the review and free advertisment! ^v^ <3 Snape and Harry are locked in the Room of Requirement by Dumbledore. Harry's magic works, and Snape's doesn't. Will they kill each other? In response to the 72-Hour Challenge.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Violence
Chapters: 28 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 May 2011 / 30 Jun 2007 Series: None - Challenges: 72 Hour Challenge
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