Hufflepuff!
Snape and Harry are locked in the Room of Requirement by Dumbledore. Harry's magic works, and Snape's doesn't. Will they kill each other? In response to the 72-Hour Challenge.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by snarky Beth
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Violence
Chapters: 28 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 May 2011 / 30 Jun 2007
Series: None - Challenges: 72 Hour Challenge
Chapters: 28 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 May 2011 / 30 Jun 2007
Series: None - Challenges: 72 Hour Challenge
| Title: Chapter 18: Judgment Day | 24 Feb 2008 |
| Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) |
- Oh my God! That was so horribly sad and so anghsty, I think I'm actaually crying. You know, I was incredibly upset with Dumbledore for all the suffering he put Severus and Harry though and I was kind of rooting Harry on (guilty ^^) but I felt so bad for Dumbledore at the end! You make my heart flip-flop, you've got such a tallent! I LOVE this story, it is so emotional. PLEASE post again soon! It's one of my favorite stories. PLEASE update!
| Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 | 20 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) |
- Wow, you finally updated! Though it took you quite a time, it was a very nice lenghthy chapter, so it makes up for it ^^.
This story is full of intence emotions, the deep wounds and sad memories really make it quite an emotional story. I love they way you capture the character's emotions, you can understand how they are feeling and it really makes me attached to the story. It makes me glad that Snape is trying to help Harry, they both need something to look forward to. I can't wait to read the next chapter, please post it as soon as you can! Beautiful work, I can only hope there is some lightness in this story's furture ^^.
| Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 | 20 Jul 2008 |
| Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) |
- Sorry this review is so late, but life's been busy so until now I've had no time to stop in at the site.
This chapter had several topics brought up and I found it interesting to read. I actually found the fighting to be pretty funny, it was so petty, and I found myself smirking at their banter.
Poor Harry though, he felt a lot of frustration in this chapter. I loved the end though! Those last few comments were kind of cute/sweet :) Glad to see that they stopped arguing and got to neutral ground. There has been a lot of angst so far, and a lighter atmosphere was good.
I'll keep an eye out for your next chapter! And congratulations on your story got a tag, I enjoy reading it.
| Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 | 05 Aug 2008 |
| Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) |
- It was nice of Snape to give Harry a copy of that photo, but it seems things are always turning between the two. Things flip from neutral to war-zone real quick, poor Harry feels confused about where things stand.
Harry's talk with his friends seemed to help though. Ron cracks me up, his comments are too funny ^_^ Hermione shocked me with ripping the photo, but she was making a point and the photo could be repaired, so it's alright I s’pose.
I still have to wonder what's up with Dumbledore, where'd the old coot disappear to? lol.
P.S. So long as you say it's not turning into slash (thank goodness, since that's not my cup of tea!), I believe you :)
| Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 | 02 Sep 2008 |
| Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) |
- Well, it's good Harry got all this off his chest and that Snape now understands how Harry was feeling the other day. I definitely can see why he was feeling so irked, now that he’s explained himself. Hopefully, things will go a little smoother now, at least for a while. Though, it seems Harry still feels some conflicting emotions regarding Dumbledore.
Please post again when you can!
| Title: Chapter 23: Pandora's Box | 21 Dec 2008 |
| Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) |
- Glad Snape snapped out of that craziness and realized what he was doing. That would probably have been the greatest regret of his life, harming Harry like that. And rightly so.
I can see what Harry means, about some things hurting more then others, emotionally. And the significance of Snape stopping was a big deal to him. Once again, Harry and Snape have reached another level of understanding each other. Hopefully things will be cooler between them now, but I'm not holding my breath since things are ALWAYS going awry for Harry -_-; That kid needs a break sometimes, I swear!
The closing thought was both eerie and oddly funny, actually... Anyways, until next chapter :)
Summer after fifth year...Harry's living with his father, Severus, dealing with awful nightmares, his friends, Draco, and a growing threat. Harry's in for a very full summer.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Rape, Violence
Chapters: 19 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Aug 2007 / 05 Jul 2007
Series: Somewhere I Belong - Challenges: None
Chapters: 19 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Aug 2007 / 05 Jul 2007
Series: Somewhere I Belong - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 19: Somewhere I Belong I | 17 Oct 2007 |
| Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) |
- This whole series has been a true joy to read. I loved both the first and second stories, but this one gave me some grief and desturbed me when I read what Harry's uncle did. I did end up loving it as well though, there was plently of emotion and humor like the other parts, and I just really love the whole thing. Keep up you're great work and continue to create more brilliant stories.
Beth
Voldemort's forces are growing stronger and more organized. Despite warnings of this by the Order's spy, Harry Potter is captured. When he's rescued, will Snape be able to prove that he is useful as more than just a spy to the Order?
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Violence
Chapters: 23 - Completed: No - Updated: 24 Oct 2007 / 19 Jul 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 23 - Completed: No - Updated: 24 Oct 2007 / 19 Jul 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: So...You Don't Trust Me? | 21 Sep 2007 |
| Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) |
- I totally agree, Snape should be an actor. I love him! And I am loving this storey, it just getting really good.
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the review. Maybe he’ll take to the stage after everything. lol Glad you’re enjoying this so far.
| Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Rules | 22 Sep 2007 |
| Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) |
- I thought the inner thoughts were very good, don't doupt yourself validego!
much love,
Beth
Author's Response: Thanks Beth! It’s hard to know if I’m stepping out of character when I write, so it helps a lot to have feedback on that. It’s encouraging. Enjoy!
| Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Zap | 22 Sep 2007 |
| Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) |
- I love Snape's humor! He's so cute sometimes. When I fianly finnish reading this storey, I'm gonna go look for other stories of your's because I'm really enjoying this so far.
Author's Response: Hi! I don’t have any other stories here yet because the only other one I have posted anywhere is a first war fic about Snape. It’s on fanfiction.net. I have the same name there, Validego, and both Word Up and Bad Ass (my other story) are there. Bad Ass is only three chapters but will be continued. I’d love to hear from you if you go over there to read it. Thanks! And enjoy!