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| graynavarre [Contact]
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| Member since: 01 Oct 2007
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| I am an assistant librarian at a technical college in Georgia. I spent four years in the Navy, where I met my husband, a Senior Chief. We have been married about over 30 years. We have one son, who is in the Army (where did we go wrong??!). I love the HP universe, but my favorite character is Severus Snape. [Report This]
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Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
| 05 Aug 2008
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Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed)
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Oh no, a cliffhanger - that makes four cliffhangers today.
I am glad that Nick gave it to Conner. And I can't wait to see who Harry remembers.
Author's Response: I hardly leave cliffhangers but every writer has to do it sometime... :)
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 : Accio Harry Potter!
| 21 Nov 2007
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Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed)
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I am truly loving this story. And really, what woman in childbirth doesn't wish for a wand in order to destroy the offending "bits" that got her in that situation.
Giggling madly and going back to reread it.
Author's Response: hehe, i would definitely be reaching for a wand to make it easier if it were me... lol. Thanks for reviewing
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 : Accio Harry Potter!
| 21 Nov 2007
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Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed)
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One other thing. Having been in childbirth (over 24 hours of it), it is very true that women don't remember the pain. We can remember that it hurt!!! but we can't recall the feeling of pain (ie, make our body feel the pain again). If we did, we would be a world of only children.
No one can remember pain. We, as a species, wouldn't survive if we could remember pain.
Author's Response: Very true. She would have remembered it, I just wanted to make her exaggerate the contrast lol.
Title: Chapter 6: Outtake: When It Alteration Finds
| 01 Nov 2007
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Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed)
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I really enjoyed this one. Thank you.
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
| 23 Jul 2008
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Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed)
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I sometimes hate Dumbledore (I disliked him in the books as well).
Poor kid took a bad case of the infant measles.
Looking forward to more.
What if: Voldemort was really dead, Harry had managed to change the spell that Voldemort sent to Lily, the wards around Harry failed after only six months and Harry was taken away from the Dursleys? Pairings: Minerva/Albus, Poppy/Aberforth, Lily/Severus, Harry/OC. Warnings: Completely AU, partly OOC, Abuse by the Dursleys
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11)
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Child fic, Resorting
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 20
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Completed: No
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Updated: 18 Mar 2008 / 06 Nov 2007
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 16: A Crazy Birthday
| 12 Feb 2008
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Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed)
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Poor Harry, the child just tumbles into trouble.
Author's Response: That's true - thanks for helping him through it by reading :-)
After the Dobby incident at the beginning of the second book, Harry runs away, and Snape kidnaps him. In an old-fashioned house with no comforts and a huge black dog, Harry finds himself at Snape's mercy as Snape plays mind games and makes Harry live through different scenarios. Though Snape seems crazy and psychotic, Harry begins to see reasons behind Snape's sporadic behavior. There is corporal punishment, but it is different from what I've written before. This is a Mean!Snape story for the most part. If you're looking for a cuddly story, go elsewhere please.
Takes Place: 2nd summer
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Snape flavour: Snape is Cruel, Snape is Mean
Tags: Kidnapped, Runaway
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Chores
| 02 Dec 2007
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Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed)
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Hmmm, this is very interesting. I am enjoying. While I love sweet Snape stories, seeing another side of him is good. Of course, Harry is too blinded by hatred to realize that Snape freed Hedwig
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Bed
| 22 Apr 2008
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Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed)
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Yipes, Harry and Severus - family. That will be some kind of pretending.
Severus is dead right about Dumbledore.
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Fathers
| 09 May 2008
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Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed)
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I am not exciting sure that Snape is living in the land of sanity anymore.
But it is fun (in a strange way)
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - His Mother
| 24 May 2008
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Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed)
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Insane ideas Severus keeps having, but it seems to be working for them.
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