Unsorted!
In a story that spans two decades, Lily and Severus look for a way to control the powers of the Dark Mark after Lily's life is threatened by Eileen Prince. Seventeen years later, Harry realized he has no idea who he is. SS/LE H/G RL/NT
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by graynavarre
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Character Death, Profanity, Romance/Het, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 55 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 14 Apr 2008 / 18 Nov 2007
Series: Lily's Charm - Challenges: None
Chapters: 55 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 14 Apr 2008 / 18 Nov 2007
Series: Lily's Charm - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44: Desperate Times | 02 Mar 2008 |
| Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) |
- Oh gosh, that was so good. And so much fun after last one's drama. It was nice to see Severus showing Harry how much James was appreciated.
I feel so sorry for Draco. And I don't like Moody too much. Hit him for me.
Author's Response:
LOL I would waaaay too scared to hit Moody. He'd kill me. LOL
I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. And yes, James was appreciated way back then...
Thanks for reviewing! I really appreciate it! :o)
| Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46: Shattered | 08 Mar 2008 |
| Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) |
- Just a quick review - this is going to have a happy ending - right, hmmm, please right.
Author's Response:
Hmmmm.....
| Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48: He Knows Not | 16 Mar 2008 |
| Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) |
- Whimpering - to quote you "you're killing me."
I am glad that someone started talking about living instead of giving up and dying.
Author's Response: Yeah it is about time for the subject of living to come up. And I am very happy I'm killing you. :o)
| Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51: Silence | 02 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) |
- You left it there - woman, you are evil.
("sent to room for cheekiness" - is cheekiness a word?)
Author's Response:
I don't think so but Harry apparently doesn't realize it! ROFL
And yes, I do enjoy my evil ways. Yep, I do. :oP
| Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52: Frozen | 05 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) |
- Nooooo, no green light. You can't leave us like that.
Maybe, deep breath. I love protective but sensible Severus. I enjoy how well he can read people to know that Harmonie would not feel comfortable now (and maybe never) calling him Severus.
Harry is beginning to grow up.
But, noooo green light at Remus
Author's Response:
Sorry, but a chapter's gotta do what I chapter's gotta do. I'm glad you enjoyed Severus in this. It was very fun to do. I love Sev and Harry together. I just love 'em. Harry IS beginning to grow up and that's fun as well.
Remus? Well... Chapter 53 won't be too long hopefully. ;o)
| Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53: Connections | 08 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) |
- I have no idea how this charm is going to work. I have no idea whether or not Lucius and Draco are on the side to your soon to be hubby (unless you off him) or on the side of our beloved Severus. But I know that this is great (as I read through my fingers.)
Remus - nooooo.
Update soon - before you and his lord of Snakeface go on your honeymoon. (Well, you two have conquered the world - what are you going to do now - Disneyland!)
Author's Response:
No idea about the Malfoys, eh? Hm...
Remus..... Ah, Remus.
Hee hee. How DID you know we were going to Disneyland? LOL
Glad you enjoyed the chapter. It was fun. Especiallly as I know all my secrets. ROFL
| Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55: Echoes | 14 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) |
- Tabitha,
That was wonderful. I am so grateful that I stumbled upon this story. I love it that Remus isn't dead (you sneaky devil you) and that although Draco snitched to save his life, Lucius still stayed on the good side (if only to save his and his family's skin).
I am looking forward for more to come, but for now, I will just relax and enjoy our boys being safe and happy and Remus and Tonks making wedding plans - well, Tonks making wedding plans and Remus saying "yes, honey, whatever you want."
I wish I could give this an 11.
Author's Response: Thanks!! Of course, Remus isn't dead. Nope, love him too much. I was evil though, wasn't I? Hee hee. Draco is a snitch, but hey he's just a kid. And Lucius did what he had to do to keep his family safe, just like Severus did. Interesting, eh? I am looking forward to the sequel as well, so I am happ you are as well. Thank you so much for all your reviews and for your fun on the board! And yep, I do have plans for Remus and Tonks! YAY Thanks for the compliments. *blushes*
What if Lily and James survived the confrontation with Voldemort yet still gave Harry to the Dursleys? What if Harry was adopted after only 9 months on Privet Drive? Alternate Universe and OOC. Severus adopts Harry.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 14 - Completed: No - Updated: 01 May 2009 / 27 Nov 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 14 - Completed: No - Updated: 01 May 2009 / 27 Nov 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 8: Birthdays | 19 Feb 2008 |
| Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) |
- I have been reading this one over on ff and just noticed it here. I really enjoy the side of Severus being a good and kind Daddy. And Lucius being a spy was a shock.
Thank you for the story
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! Lucius being a spy was a shock....is that a good shock or a bad shock?
| Title: Chapter 8: Birthdays | 20 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) |
- I really love this story. I have been reading on fanfiction net. I have one question - when Harry was adopted and his appearance changed, did the scar go away?
Author's Response: Thank you - I'm really glad that you like it. Yes, when Harry took the Paternitas potion the scar disappeared. Don't ask me how (I haven't quite figured that bit out!)
After the final war, Harry has to make decisions about where he will go and who he will let into his life as he begins to reexamine his judgements about people. This story takes place at the end of the Seventh book, but before the Epilogue. SPOILERS for Deathly Hallows! Interaction with Snape is not in the first few chapters, but he will be a prominent firgure in this story.
Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
| Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Searching Alleys | 20 Jan 2008 |
| Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) |
- I love the snippy conversation between Harry and Snape. - Making someone angry is a great way to keep him awake.
Surely the government knows that Snape was a spy?
Snow in Atlanta - yep, looking out my window (here in Lithia Springs) and I still see the white stuff. Of course, since I spent years in Maine, Maryland and Alaska, I really hate the white stuff.