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Title: Chapter 3: Charms, Transfiguration and Flying.
| 07 Dec 2010
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Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
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Very interesting premise! I have no idea where you are leading in this story; whether to have Harry eventually accept the magic in himself, or to continue to deny it. And, of course, Severus will have to wake up to what's really going on sooner or later!
Good job! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Title: Chapter 3: Charms, Transfiguration and Flying.
| 08 Nov 2011
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Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
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MORE PLEASE! :) This is a really awesome concept. I do hope that you will be able to continue this tale.
Well done! (I need to go to bed or this review would be a lot longer!)
"Afterwards, Harry couldn't even remember how he had gotten into the Hospital Wing. He knew there had been blood in his face, maybe on his robes and definitely on his hands. (...) But all he had focused on was the way his heart was beating frantically and how he hadn't been able hear the pulse in his ears that had to be rushing and flowing. He hadn't been able to hear it. He hadn't been able to hear anything. He couldn't hear." - Plays in 3rd year.
Takes Place: 4th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character, Physical Impairment
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 2
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Completed: No
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Updated: 11 Mar 2010 / 15 Feb 2010
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
| 22 Feb 2015
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Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
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I really like this! I'm sorry that I never found it on the site before. I like the concept and I hope that you do eventually come back and write more chapters for this story.
Title: Chapter 5: Three folk and a snidget
| 10 Apr 2011
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Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
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Whimsy is adorable! And I've enjoyed the whole story so far very much.
I've always wondered how a mute person would be able to learn magic; I look forward to seeing how Harry does it.
Your chapters are definitely worth the wait! Well done!
Title: Chapter 7: Music and Mirrors
| 15 Nov 2011
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Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
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Bwahahahahahaha! Oh to have that last scene recorded in a moving photo! These kids will be able to dine out on this story for years!
I really like this tale. But I want to slug Snape for his actions towards Harry. I can't believe that no one mentioned to him that Harry just can't talk.
The Solar Magic sounds really cool, and I hope that when you eventually update, we'll get to learn more of it. I like the Snidget Whimsy, the magic mirror, and the runaway books. I'm thinking that the book of silent spells is probably trying to get to Harry. It would be invaluable to him, assuming that he can master the spells in it. :)
I do hope that you will update soon. I like the original characters very much, and I'm quite taken with Pamela--both her care for Harry and her attitude.
Well done to this chapter and WELL DONE to the overall story so far!
Title: Chapter 38: Midnight Truth
| 19 Jul 2010
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Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
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First of all, do hope that your hand heals up all right--and not just so you can type up the new chapter!
Next, thank you for this wonderful chapter with all the excitement and revelations and joy at the end of it. I love the complexity of the tale, and all the neat things that you have woven into the characters. I can hardly wait to read the next part, particularly Ron's reaction.
Like the other chapters, this one was exceedingly Well Done! :)
Title: Chapter 39: Midnight Consort
| 20 Jul 2010
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Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
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Oh, this was just exquisitely beautiful!
The consummations were very tastefully described while still touching the heart and emotions fully.
I especially thank you for giving Sirius the inspiration he needs to finish growing up... I always felt that Rowling had left him "unfinished" and it was so nice to see him finally start to take responsibility and to truly love someone, not just lust after them.
And our dear Severus... what can I say that will adequately describe how wonderful your interpretation of him is; how you have through the course of this tale developed him as a character and a person. He has been reborn, and in other ways has finally matured. He is starting to see past the snarky, nasty, lonely image that he had portrayed all those years, and is starting to see what has always been in his heart and soul. He's believing in himself, and his value for himself rather than the tasks he can perform.
These were two very gorgeous wedding nights, and I thank you for them.
Well done!
Title: Chapter 42: Midnight Wisdom
| 13 Aug 2010
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Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
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Becoming a father in blood and not just adoption. :) That's what I think is going to happen.
Lovely chapter and I particularly liked Severus' conversation with Ron--and the fact that Ron actually LISTENED and absorbed it. The youngest Weasley male might not ever feel even half as close to Snape as Harry and Hermione do, but at least he isn't seeing Severus as the enemy any more!
Well done!
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 07 Dec 2010
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Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
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WOW!
Now this is a story I really want to see continued! Intriguing beginning and I really want to know what happened to Severus! What is Culverhay? Hopefully not a cemetery!
I've really enjoyed reading your posted works and I think you're a darned good storyteller. I've marked you as a favorite author, and look forward to more from your pen.
Well done!
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 08 Nov 2011
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Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
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Wow! This is intense! I love all the little hints that you've dropped into this chapter. I do hope that you will continue this story, for I think it's going to be awesome.
Well done!
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