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What if Harry thinks the Dursley's treatment of him is right and he doesn't want to be a freak or go to Hogwarts? What will happen when he gets there and is clearly intent on leaving again asap?

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Resorting, Runaway, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Violence
Chapters: 3 - Completed: No - Updated: 22 Mar 2010 / 30 Jan 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 3: Charms, Transfiguration and Flying. 07 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
    Very interesting premise! I have no idea where you are leading in this story; whether to have Harry eventually accept the magic in himself, or to continue to deny it. And, of course, Severus will have to wake up to what's really going on sooner or later!

    Good job! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Title: Chapter 3: Charms, Transfiguration and Flying. 08 Nov 2011
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
    MORE PLEASE! :) This is a really awesome concept. I do hope that you will be able to continue this tale.

    Well done! (I need to go to bed or this review would be a lot longer!)

"Afterwards, Harry couldn't even remember how he had gotten into the Hospital Wing. He knew there had been blood in his face, maybe on his robes and definitely on his hands. (...) But all he had focused on was the way his heart was beating frantically and how he hadn't been able hear the pulse in his ears that had to be rushing and flowing. He hadn't been able to hear it. He hadn't been able to hear anything. He couldn't hear." - Plays in 3rd year.

Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character, Physical Impairment
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 2 - Completed: No - Updated: 11 Mar 2010 / 15 Feb 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 22 Feb 2015
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
    I really like this! I'm sorry that I never found it on the site before. I like the concept and I hope that you do eventually come back and write more chapters for this story.

How does one measure a man? Is it by the company he keeps? Or by the actions he takes? In whose eyes are you judged? And from whose mouth do the answers ring true to you? In short, how do you make the measurement?

Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Physical Impairment, Snape-meets-Dursleys, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 9 - Completed: No - Updated: 25 May 2012 / 16 Feb 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 5: Three folk and a snidget 10 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
    Whimsy is adorable! And I've enjoyed the whole story so far very much.

    I've always wondered how a mute person would be able to learn magic; I look forward to seeing how Harry does it.

    Your chapters are definitely worth the wait! Well done!

Title: Chapter 7: Music and Mirrors 15 Nov 2011
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
    Bwahahahahahaha! Oh to have that last scene recorded in a moving photo! These kids will be able to dine out on this story for years!

    I really like this tale. But I want to slug Snape for his actions towards Harry. I can't believe that no one mentioned to him that Harry just can't talk.

    The Solar Magic sounds really cool, and I hope that when you eventually update, we'll get to learn more of it. I like the Snidget Whimsy, the magic mirror, and the runaway books. I'm thinking that the book of silent spells is probably trying to get to Harry. It would be invaluable to him, assuming that he can master the spells in it. :)

    I do hope that you will update soon. I like the original characters very much, and I'm quite taken with Pamela--both her care for Harry and her attitude.

    Well done to this chapter and WELL DONE to the overall story so far!

A guilt-stricken Harry finds solace with a mysterious black stallion, never dreaming it's the Animagus form of Severus Snape. But Harry has a dark secret, one that could mean his death unless Snape discovers it in time. AU, no slash! Angsty!Harry Mentor! Animagus! Snape, some Draco too! HP/HG

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Creature!fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect, Profanity, Romance/Het, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 44 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Aug 2010 / 19 Feb 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 38: Midnight Truth 19 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
    First of all, do hope that your hand heals up all right--and not just so you can type up the new chapter!

    Next, thank you for this wonderful chapter with all the excitement and revelations and joy at the end of it. I love the complexity of the tale, and all the neat things that you have woven into the characters. I can hardly wait to read the next part, particularly Ron's reaction.

    Like the other chapters, this one was exceedingly Well Done! :)

Title: Chapter 39: Midnight Consort 20 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
    Oh, this was just exquisitely beautiful!

    The consummations were very tastefully described while still touching the heart and emotions fully.

    I especially thank you for giving Sirius the inspiration he needs to finish growing up... I always felt that Rowling had left him "unfinished" and it was so nice to see him finally start to take responsibility and to truly love someone, not just lust after them.

    And our dear Severus... what can I say that will adequately describe how wonderful your interpretation of him is; how you have through the course of this tale developed him as a character and a person. He has been reborn, and in other ways has finally matured. He is starting to see past the snarky, nasty, lonely image that he had portrayed all those years, and is starting to see what has always been in his heart and soul. He's believing in himself, and his value for himself rather than the tasks he can perform.

    These were two very gorgeous wedding nights, and I thank you for them.

    Well done!

Title: Chapter 42: Midnight Wisdom 13 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
    Becoming a father in blood and not just adoption. :) That's what I think is going to happen.

    Lovely chapter and I particularly liked Severus' conversation with Ron--and the fact that Ron actually LISTENED and absorbed it. The youngest Weasley male might not ever feel even half as close to Snape as Harry and Hermione do, but at least he isn't seeing Severus as the enemy any more!

    Well done!

The war is over. Voldemort is dead. So why is Harry so traumatized?
Dumbledore thinks Harry needs professional help, in fact he's insisting on it.
This fic is going to be unashamedly melancholy - you have been warned.

Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Character Death, Profanity, Self-harm, Suicide Themes, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 02 Apr 2010 / 02 Apr 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 07 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
    WOW!

    Now this is a story I really want to see continued! Intriguing beginning and I really want to know what happened to Severus! What is Culverhay? Hopefully not a cemetery!

    I've really enjoyed reading your posted works and I think you're a darned good storyteller. I've marked you as a favorite author, and look forward to more from your pen.

    Well done!

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 08 Nov 2011
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
    Wow! This is intense! I love all the little hints that you've dropped into this chapter. I do hope that you will continue this story, for I think it's going to be awesome.

    Well done!


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