Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
| 28 Jan 2008
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Reviewer: PadyandMoony (Signed)
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Great chapter! I'm awaiting eagerly for Snape to hex Connor though.
About Blaise, I have to confess I don't like when author's make him a girl because it gets confusing. I'm used to thinking of him as a boy. It's always good to remember when we write that most readers have tons of stories in alerts. I usually try to do things from my experience in fanfiction. There are just a few stories that I actually remember the name when the alert comes without having to read a little of the chapter. Sometimes depending on how often the author updates I even have to go back a few chapters to remind myself. So, when a story has a female Blaise it can take a while to situate myself again when I'm reading.
I don't think that's much your case because you update quite often and your stories are actually between the few that I know from just seeing the title what story I'm reading and have it fresh in my mind. But it's always good to consider how different reading fanfiction is from reading book.
If the problem is that you want a Slytherin girl that wasn't very prominent in canon there is Daphne Greengrass. I really don't remember her much from Canon apart of the sorting.
Anyway, keep up the good work and lets slip a potion in Connor's juice. What? no, I didn't say anything like that, I said lets add sugar to Connor's juice, to make it sweet, since he is such a sweet *cough*jerk*cough*, I mean person.
Author's Response: First off, thanks for your opinion on the Blaise's gender. I still haven't decided what I want to do yet. I had thought about using Daphne, but (feel free to call me picky) I don't really like her name. And the whole Snape hexing/poisoning Connor thing? Would he ever do that? Noo... Oh wait. Yes he would! In fact, there is a little teaser on my site about the next chapter and it involves Snape meeting Connor...