Slytherin!
Sequel to "Harry's First Detention" - read that first, please!
Takes Place: 1st Year
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Snape flavour: None
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Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Poirot
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 64 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 21 Nov 2009 / 24 Sep 2008
Series: Harry's First Detention - Challenges: None
Chapters: 64 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 21 Nov 2009 / 24 Sep 2008
Series: Harry's First Detention - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 | 06 Feb 2009 |
| Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) |
- Absolutely amazing.........I wonder if Severus will help prove Sirius' innocence, then try to convince himself that he is just being Slytherin and didn't do it for Harry.
Great Chapter!
Author's Response: LOL! Funny you should mention that! Stand by...
| Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 | 03 Apr 2009 |
| Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) |
- I believe this may be my favorite fan fiction of all time. Thank you again for sharing your amazing talent.
Author's Response: Wow! Now THAT is a compliment!! Thank you very very much. :)
| Title: Harry's New Home | 10 Apr 2009 |
| Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) |
- great chapter, or should i say chapters? I absolutely love your gift for dialogue, and picturing Snape in a faint almost made ME faint!
| Title: Harry's New Home | 10 Apr 2009 |
| Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) |
- Still getting notices about the same chapter being posted. I don't mind rereading such fabulous writing.
Can you write a scene of Severus in Gryffindor colors.............preferably boxers?
| Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 | 11 Apr 2009 |
| Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) |
- I am so amazed by your talent! Great chapters and well worth the wait!
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate your patience!
When Harry and his new, pretty neighbor are rescued from Privet Drive on the eve of a Death Eater attack, Severus becomes Harry's reluctant guardian and healer in the weeks following. Old prejudices are challenged as Harry's new friend casts her own spell over Hogwarts' Potions Master.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 28 - Completed: No - Updated: 06 Dec 2008 / 10 Oct 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 28 - Completed: No - Updated: 06 Dec 2008 / 10 Oct 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 | 09 Dec 2008 |
| Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) |
- Great chapters Lesley! I really hope Harry doesn't find out about the other boys. He certainly doesn't need more guilt on his shoulders.
Author's Response:
Hi, Donna.
I'm afraid that your hope as far as Harry finding out about the boys is doomed. Of course he has to find out...this is Harry. He already suspects strongly that there is something going on.
Thans for another review.
Lesley
| Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Harry's Champion | 13 Nov 2008 |
| Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) |
- I found this story today and am enjoying it very much so far.
Thank You
| Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Muggle Meets Magical | 13 Nov 2008 |
| Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) |
- Another great chapter! I am enjoying your story thouroughly.
One question, isn't the dark mark on Severus' left arm?
Author's Response:
You are quite right Poirot. I went back and checked the chapter where Sev's mark burned. Initially I wrote that it was his left arm and then I changed it to his riht arm...don't ask me what happened there, or why I didn't pick it up when I was going through the chapter before uploading. Anyway, I have changed it now, so thank you for pointing it out.
Much appreciated.
Lesley
| Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: The Light of Day | 13 Nov 2008 |
| Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) |
- Great chapter...............and the last line was the best by far!
Author's Response:
Thank you. So glad you enjoyed it.
Lesley
| Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Harry's Horrible Day | 18 Nov 2008 |
| Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) |
- A very good chapter, again! I am curious as to why you broke the chapter there, though.
It's not exactly a cliffie, just unbearably sad.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review. I probably broke the chapter there as I did not want to write HArry's emotions, nor the reactions of the various people around the bed.
We know how Harry would feel, so we don't need it spelled out. Sorry if you felt deprived. Of course, it will be addressed in the next chapter, but briefly.
Lesley