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I'm Moriyah, a 28 year old lover of words who discovered fanfiction at 14...14 years ago, dear Lord.  Though I love writing, procrastintaion and a tendancy to get wrapped up in work means that several stories have been on hold for years. Getting back into it is so difficult when you've been away. I'm currectly an Advanced EMT, Firefighter and on a Covid Taskforce in West Virginia while in Paramedic Class. This has been the busiest year of my life, and reminded me how much I missed the quiet joy of sharing what you love with others, in particular, stories. 

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After Harry is caught for exploding a cauldron in 2nd year Potions, Snape insists he keep a firm hand on the boy he must secretly protect. However, he discoveres that there is more to the twelve year old than unruliness and disrespect. Similarly, Harry learns from and gains a new perspective of his professor.

Takes Place: 2nd Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Stern
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Profanity
Chapters: 32 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 17 Jun 2008 / 25 Sep 2007
Series: Emerald Eyes - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 01 Feb 2008
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
    I laughed at poor Harry the first time I read this chapter, finding the potion vial's in his pocket is the icing on the cake! Lol, I am SO mean to Harry.
    And the way Harry handled the sitouation was perfect! :)
    Scorpia

Harry has been depressed for weeks until one day during a potion's exam he finds out that Snape has taken matters into his own hands...

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Self-harm, Suicide Themes, Violence
Chapters: 8 - Completed: No - Updated: 16 Jan 2009 / 09 Oct 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: The truth in pen and ink 28 Feb 2008
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
    Chocalate chip or oatmeal? Lol, I had this cookie one time that was called pumkin, it had white chocalate with walnuts, (drool) But enough about cookies. That was an amazing chapter! I loved Severus for how he acted towards Harry!! I am going to read the next chappie now! Great first chapter, I hope it will be one of many! :)
    Scorpia

Title: Chapter 2: Speaking but not Listening 28 Feb 2008
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
    Yuck, don't like skittles (taste the Rainbow) & all that, Lol. Another great chapter! (Claps) I can't wait to read #3 then #4!

Title: Chapter 3: Understanding the Problem 28 Feb 2008
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
    Please update soon!! It would of been funny if Severus had said, "This is not a dream Potter--It's a nighmare." Lol, Sev & Harry were great in this chapter. Can't wait to read more!

Title: Chapter 4: Whispers 03 Mar 2008
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
    I hope Harry doesn't try to drown himself, :( It would be kind of cool to see Snape's & Taki's reactions though. I love Taki! I can't wait for more! So please update soon! :)

Abandoned on the streets, then placed in an orphanage, and finally adopted by a loving woman. Things are finally getting better for young Harry… or are they?

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Child fic, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 22 - Completed: No - Updated: 30 Aug 2008 / 18 Oct 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 28 Feb 2008
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
    The famous Harry Potter haircut! I can't wait to read about Petunyah's expression, lol. I loved the length of your first chapter. Not to long not to short. Very well written! I love that Harry's teacher is worried about him? Will she be the one to adopt Harry? I'm sad to say that I've never seen this story before now. It looks promising and I've only read the first chapter!
    Scorpia

    Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the first chapter! Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 28 Feb 2008
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
    Poor Harry, he can't even hum in peace! Hopefully when Snape comes along he will give him a hug. :) But--that probley won't happen if I know Snape.
    You had me scared when Harry's aunt tried to wake him and he wouldn't wake, (Anything important about that by the way?) If Harry had gone into a coma or something I would of screamed! Vernon is getting rid of Harry, the poor dear. I'm going to R&R the next chapter now!
    Scorpia

    Author's Response:

    The reason Harry wouldn't wake was because he had used magic by messing around with his hair color. Everytime he tries something new, such as changing hair color, style, ect., he will be tired after doing it until he has done it enough times that it occurs without much effort. Thanks for another review!


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 28 Feb 2008
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
    I like it when Harry meets strangers, or at least the ones who are nice to him. I don't see it a lot in the fics I have read. I can't wait to read more! :)
    Scorpia

    Author's Response: I'm glad you like this so far and I hope you continue to do so! :)

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 28 Feb 2008
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
    (Smile) Has Harry finally found somebody that will love him? (cheers) :) I sure hope so! Catherins seems really nice. It would be cool if she married Sev later wouldn't it? (Sigh) But, that's just my thoughts. I thought this was a great chapter. (Whispers)Don't tell anyone but I almost cried when Harry met Catherine!
    Great chapter!
    Scorpia

    Author's Response: Wow! So many people have suggested that Snape and Catherine hook up! Even I am starting to consider it...

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 28 Feb 2008
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
    It's funny that you mentioned the house in your story & AN, because my mom & dad have always gone on sbout how they want a white brick house. I just thought that was funny. I was kind of surrised that Catherine adopted Harry so quickly, I thought for sure that she would of talked to him for severall more days before doing something so major. But I am glad that she adopted him! :)
    Scorpia

    Author's Response:

    I'll admit the whole adoption process was kinda skimmed over and happened pretty quickly. At some point, I hope to go back and add more details and such about all of that. But hey, who can resist those innocent little green eyes looking up at you?



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