Hufflepuff!
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Abandoned on the streets, then placed in an orphanage, and finally adopted by a loving woman. Things are finally getting better for young Harry… or are they?
Takes Place: 1st Year
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Child fic, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Scorpia
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 22 - Completed: No - Updated: 30 Aug 2008 / 18 Oct 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 22 - Completed: No - Updated: 30 Aug 2008 / 18 Oct 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 | 28 Feb 2008 |
| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) |
- I think that you are doing Harry very well! Nick's atttitude made me kind a wary, but I guess it's understadable since he was in the army. I can't wait for Snape!!
Loved this chapter!
Scorpia
Author's Response: Nick will have a good influence on Harry, despite his stern manner. I'm glad you like this and thanks again for reviewing!
| Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 | 28 Feb 2008 |
| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) |
- I like the job you chose for Catherine. She seems like the patient, kind type that would have that kind of job. I don't think you over did Severus, he was very in character, sarcastic, smart, sunny...ok, maybe not sunny! Lol, :)
Scorpia
Author's Response: Snape sunny? Hmm I cant see a yellow sunny Snape but maybe if it was a black sun, it would better suit his taste? :p
| Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 | 28 Feb 2008 |
| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) |
- YAY! Acidental magic is so fun! Great chappie! I can't wait to see what Nick will discover! You Rock Alexis!
Author's Response: You know, I almost forgot to add in some accidental magic! Thanks so much for all the reviews!
| Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 | 28 Feb 2008 |
| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) |
- I screamed out loud and almost scared my cat to death when I read the first mention of the Dursleys. LOl, I loved Nick's reaction to Harry's abilty. It was a great chapter. I want to go ride a roller coaster now! Lol, :-)
Scorpia
Author's Response: When I wrote that, I too wanted to go on a roller coaster ride! :)
| Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 | 28 Feb 2008 |
| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) |
- The car crash was unexpected, I was like WOW! Lol, I liked Conner for about six sentences but then He wasn't very nice to Harry. So now I hope Snape, Nick, Devil, someone like that get's a hold on him, lol. Catherine had better say "NO!" Lol, Don't do it Catherine! He's a fake!!
Great chapter, very satifying.
Scorpia
Author's Response: I do try to add in something unexpected once and a while! :)
| Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 | 28 Feb 2008 |
| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) |
- Catherine how could you say yes? (sniffle) She should of listened to her Dad, (shakes head)
I was REALLY HAPPY to see Severus! I wonder what Severus would think if he knew who the little boy he talked to was HARRY?
Scorpia
Author's Response:
Chapter 15, the one I'm working on now, will have the long awaited scene where Snape finds out who this boy really is. And Snape is (finally) entering the story for good. Shame on me for getting a bit carried away with all the little stuff I wanted to add in. :)
| Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 | 28 Feb 2008 |
| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) |
- Aww! Sev liked talkin with Harry! Hehe, :) Great Chapter, Great story!
Scorpia
Author's Response: I'm very happy to hear that you are enjoying this so far! Thanks for all these reviews too!
| Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 | 28 Feb 2008 |
| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) |
- He must be friends with Draco, I think that would be cool! Also, Fred, George, Hermione, I don't really mind if Blaise is a girl. I don't really care what you do with Ron, (Ducks fruit throwing, Ron lovers) Lol, He would make a good friend or enemy.
Scorpia
Author's Response: Draco... well chances are he will remain neutral for the time since Harry is (or will be) a fellow Slytherin. As for the other characters, I still haven't fully decided on what to do but I do love Gred and Forge so they should make an appearance somewhere.
| Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 | 28 Feb 2008 |
| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) |
- AHH! How could you leaveit there?
Snape & Nick better get a hold on Connor quick or I'll go agter him myself! Loved this long chapter! Great job! I'm wide eyed at the thought of a teaser, OoO! Should I read it or will it make my excitment worse? Of course I'm going to read the teaser, DUH! Lol, :)
Scorpia
Author's Response: Never fear, Connor will get busted but unfourtunately for Harry, it wont happen until later on. Thanks for all these wonderful reviews and I will try to post the next chapter soon!
| Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 | 16 Mar 2008 |
| Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) |
- Great chapter! I really enjoyed Snape meeting Conner. "Punch him Severus, PUNCH HIM!" LOL, You got me all hyper, :) I can't wait for more, this in an AMAZING story and your doing a great job!
Scorpia
Author's Response: Wow... I am really thinking about writing something (maybe a dream scene?) where Severus punches and hexes Connor to make all my readers happy. Everyone wants to see that badly! Thanks for a lovely review and I will try to post another chapter soon! Also- I posted a little teaser on my site if you are interested :)