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| My Pet: Scorpia
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Penname:
| Scorpia [Contact]
| Better be Hufflepuff!
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| Moriyah (female)
| Member since: 09 Jan 2008
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About me:
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| I'm Moriyah, a 28 year old lover of words who discovered fanfiction at 14...14 years ago, dear Lord. Though I love writing, procrastintaion and a tendancy to get wrapped up in work means that several stories have been on hold for years. Getting back into it is so difficult when you've been away. I'm currectly an Advanced EMT, Firefighter and on a Covid Taskforce in West Virginia while in Paramedic Class. This has been the busiest year of my life, and reminded me how much I missed the quiet joy of sharing what you love with others, in particular, stories. [Report This]
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Title: Chapter 6: Only Three
| 31 May 2008
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Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Draco!? Will he be a main part of this story? I Would LOVE to see how you portray him, evil or not.
Author's Response: Yes, you will be pleased to konw that Draco has a big part to play in this, so you will be seeing much, much more of him. =)
Title: Chapter 7: Burnt Bridges
| 31 May 2008
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Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Ooh! I can not wait for the next chapter. Please updae soon!
Author's Response: The next chapter is sooooo very nearly ready. Thanks for all the reviews =)
Title: Chapter 8: Forgotten Friends
| 03 Jun 2008
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Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Ooh, this chapter was grim. I loved it. Some stories just seem to have an air around them, this one is dark. Like when yiou write about walking down an alley I imediantly imagine a dark one with no one in sight. It's slightly creepy but exciting the picture your story creates for me. I really enjoy it and seeing Tonks in this chapter was just lovely. Kinda wondering how the obliviate disapeared so quickly so she could see that it was Harry, boy who lived. It seemed rather fast to me but I'm glad she realized who it was. I wonder who the servent was in the end, hhhmm. Great job!
Author's Response: lol, so I have a character stepping from midday sun into an alley, and said alley is immediately dark? Not just well shadowed? Awesome! As to the Obliviate - I didn't consider it a quick disappearance. After all, the spell does remove a memory instantly...why would removing it return the memory just as quickly? I guess I can see why you could argue for a slow reintroduction, with the person gradually coming to terms with something new, but in this case I preferred the outright 'oh bugger' view. Besides, Tonks did have Harry standing right in front of her...which could be said to have been something of a factor in prodding her memory along.
Title: Chapter 1: Cry I
| 06 Mar 2008
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Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Wonderful begining! It's sad that Hedwig's gone but I love the kitten. I hope McGonagall finds a good punishment for Ron & Seamus!! Grrr, there to HORRIBLE to Harry and he doesn't deserve that, :( (I enjoy torturing Harry too sometimes though) LOL< :) Great story so far!!
Title: Chapter 2: Cry II
| 06 Mar 2008
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Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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I don't really like the idea of James being a silly drunk but I love this story to much to be really anyed by it, :) Love the length of your chapters!
Title: Chapter 3: Cry III
| 06 Mar 2008
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Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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WooHooo! Go sev! (claps) He certainly showed the minister! Great chapter i really liked it.
Title: Chapter 4: Cry IV
| 06 Mar 2008
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Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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I can't wait to see what kind of involment Nacissa will have! Great chappie, :) It was really good.
Title: Chapter 5: Cry V
| 06 Mar 2008
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Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Is Cissy messing around with the furture? Really great chapter!!
Title: Chapter 6: Cry VI
| 06 Mar 2008
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Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Aagh! Cliffhanger, love those! LOL, :)
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Of Mothers and Babies
| 28 Feb 2008
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Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Awwww! That was a lovely first chapter Obsidian! (Told you I'd review, didn't I?) I love your banner. Is this going to be a Harry|Ginny story? Scorpia
Author's Response: Yep, Harry and Ginny rule! LOL Thanks. Glad you liked the chapter. You only have 42 more to go. ROFL! The banner is, lovely, isn't. My talented friend Cathyrf made it for me! She's awesome! :o)
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