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| My Pet: Scorpia
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| Scorpia [Contact]
| Better be Hufflepuff!
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| Moriyah (female)
| Member since: 09 Jan 2008
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| I'm Moriyah, a 28 year old lover of words who discovered fanfiction at 14...14 years ago, dear Lord. Though I love writing, procrastintaion and a tendancy to get wrapped up in work means that several stories have been on hold for years. Getting back into it is so difficult when you've been away. I'm currectly an Advanced EMT, Firefighter and on a Covid Taskforce in West Virginia while in Paramedic Class. This has been the busiest year of my life, and reminded me how much I missed the quiet joy of sharing what you love with others, in particular, stories. [Report This]
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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Learning the Truth
| 02 Jul 2015
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Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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I'm never sure what to think about Snape having parental figures around, but I don't dislike McGonagall here. :) Thanks for sharing! Glad the Dursley's abuse has been revealed!
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Back at Hogwarts
| 02 Jul 2015
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Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Good to see Harry has people around that care, but I'd be careful not to let Snape care TOO quickly, unless you don't mind him being out of character. Abused or not, he doesn't change his opinion about people quickly. Thank you for this chapter!
Title: Chapter 1: Dumbledore's Wrath
| 13 Jul 2015
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Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Hey there! This is an awesome story idea, I'm really, really looking forward to more, though the gaps in the chapter were definitely getting on my nerves, you might want to go back and edit it if you can, sometimes P&S can be a pain with uploading new chapters, :) Loved it! You are a wonderful writer! Very original idea, made me really happy to see Harry not treated as a saint, I think the responsibilities will do him a whole lot of good!
Title: Chapter 2: The School Subdued
| 13 Jul 2015
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Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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No gaps in this chapter, yay! It was so easy to read, and I loved it! Thank you!
Title: Chapter 3: The Other Side
| 13 Jul 2015
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Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Title: Chapter 8: Visions and Velocity
| 03 Aug 2015
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Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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When I see that you've updated, I squeal with excitement! I'm curious what the strange look exchanged between Snape and Dumbledore meant, hmm, verrryyyy interesstinggg. >_> Can not wait for more! Hope you are writing for the summer story fest, *hint hint* Take care!
Author's Response: Yay, thanks a lot! I wish i could enter it for the fic fest but it doesn't really fit any of the challanges :( I'm going to write something for it though! Just trying to pick a good one
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 22 Jun 2015
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Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Hey there thank you for posting this story! I'm interested to see where this will go. You may want to separate the sentences little bit more, it's kind of hard to read. Heading off to read the next chapter now, thank you for sharing.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing :)
I'll keep the whole dividing sentences in mind. The sentences in my native languages are usually longer so yeah, that's a bit of a stumbling block for me. Hope it'll be better in the following chapters. :D
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
| 22 Jun 2015
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Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Hey there! I really enjoyed reading about Harry in this chapter, he's matured so much and it is really noticeable! I enjoyed his conversation with Kingsley, he's taking a stand and doing what he believes is right. This chapter makes me want to read more! At the beginning of Snape's letter it says if you are reading this I must be must be death instead of saying dead. I'm really enjoying your writing style, it is better quality than what I've grown to expect from most fanfiction. I'm looking forward to reading about Malfoy's trial that should be really, really interesting!
Author's Response: Hi there, again. :P
The whole mature Harry is a bit of a flickering thing.. it's not there all the time. Though, he's getting much better when it comes to standing up for himself. Which is why he seems more mature. If I'm doing things right, you'll see that side of him more and more the longer the story goes on. I fixed Snape's letter, thanks for that one! :D
As for my writing style; why thank you, that's always nice to hear.
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
| 22 Jun 2015
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Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Thank you so much for writing this and for sharing, I really like how you kept everybody in character, and cannot wait to see when Snape shows up!
Author's Response: Your welcome and no problem. I share for the reviews so thank you for leaving a comment. :)
I'm doing my best to keep them in character, but it's hard. Especially since I'm trying to change Harry and Snape, it just had done be done very, very carefully. Hopefully, you'll never even notice. :P
As for Snape, well, you've seen him by now. Bit late commenting on these reviews..
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
| 22 Jun 2015
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Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed)
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Cliffhanger! I'm really enjoying the story I hope you keep it going for a long time, thank you so much for sharing!
Author's Response: Thank you :), and yeah I'm counting on it. This one is supposed to be a prequel to a story I have in mind, which will start two years after Voldemort is defeated.. So yeah, this will probably go on for a while longer. :)
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