Slytherin!
Harry's life is turned around and upside down when a late night visitor from the future tells him the unthinkable. Now he must convince Snape to teach him Occlumency, get along with Draco Malfoy and survive through what Voldemort has planned for him.
Takes Place: 5th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Kidnapped, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by kreacher
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 27 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 23 Jan 2009 / 09 Jan 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 27 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 23 Jan 2009 / 09 Jan 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: House of Black | 01 Oct 2008 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- good chapter, keep up the good work, glad harry and everyone is safe at grimmauld place
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review Kreacher!
| Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Removing The Bond | 09 Oct 2008 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- great chapter, very well written, the standard of your writing is going great now keep it up.
i'm glad harry and draco are free from the bond
Author's Response: (Happy grin) Thank you Kreacher, that's what I'm trying for!
| Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Calm Before the Storm | 27 Oct 2008 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- great chapter, i would like to see draco change sirius into a poodle and have a pink collar :)harry and draco seem to be getting ion alot better aswell
Author's Response: Thank you Kreacher!
| Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Learning of the Prophesy | 08 Nov 2008 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- great chapter, really enjoyed it, pity harry moved at the vital moment when eavesdropping on the malfoys, just as malfoy got to the crucial part, hopefully dumbles wikll tell harry the prophecy
Author's Response:
I'm sure Harry was jumping up and down with the need to know the rest, lol. Luckily--or not since we both know what the phrophesy means--Dumbles told him. Thank you for reviewing!
A near tragedy and a shocking discovery lead two bitter enemies to much soul searching and eventual acceptance of each other. Much angst along the way though. Some Ginny and Harry.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Character Death, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 43 - Completed: No - Updated: 01 Aug 2010 / 14 Jan 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 43 - Completed: No - Updated: 01 Aug 2010 / 14 Jan 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Back to the Burrow | 02 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- what a great story, sorry i havn't reviewed before but i couldn't stop reading, it shows how good this fic is, severus and harry need there heads banging together, it may knock some sense into them and harry going of on his own was a disaster waiting to happen, he never learns does he?
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing now. I'm very glad you found the story and are enjoying it enough to review.
Yes, HArry is very much Sev's son on the stubbornness stakes, that's for sure. Unfortunately, Sev can see that many of Harry's 'bad' traits seem to come directly from HIM. Harry's temper is very much a Sev trait. But Stubbornness can also be good in some circumstances.
Yes, HArry most definitely should not have gone to GH. But he was not entirely aware of what he was doing. It was an instinctual thing after the shocking news he had just recieved. And don't think there won't be a guilt trip there for him as he will blame himself for Remus almost being overcome by the dementors.
Hope to hear from you again.
Lesley
| Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Can We Talk? | 07 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- this is another great chapter, severus has really opened up to harry and i do hope harry sees that and not let his stubborness get in the way
Author's Response:
Well Harry has certainly got a temper and a lot of stubborness buried in that small frame, but IMO, at this point in time, he is entitled to his anger. Se treated him terribly whilst imparting truly devastating news.
But Harry is also very needy, and he is not, in the long run, going to 'cut off his nose to spite his face'.
thank you for the review. Glad you enjoyed it.
Lesley
| Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Have We Reached An Accord? | 23 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- good chapter and very revealing in severuses and harrys relationship, severus is new to this father thing and is bound to make mistakes and harry has to realise that and get to know severus and my guess its dumbledore floo calling them
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review.
Yes, Sev is new to the father thing, but Harry is also new to hte experience of being the son of a living person...a person, no less who has spent years torturing him. It is not going to be an easy transition for either of them, but I don't think it can be expected that Harry is just going to turn around and forget the last five years, especially as it is not going to be possible for Sev to turn into a nice person...at least, not all the time.
HAry wants it to work...but he is very wary. Sev knows this.
As for the floo...you will just have to wait and see.
~Lesley~
| Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Pickled brains and Sauteed Liver. | 22 May 2008 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- great chapter, i know exactly how harry feels, i have had a few hangovers over the years and the world seems all wrong, but they only last a few hours, severus dealt with it the right way, having harry have the symptons rather than pouring a potion down his throat, i hope harry has fun at the burrow
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed the chapter.
Thank you for your review.
~Lesley~
| Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Setback. | 29 Jun 2008 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- that was very well written and very heartfelt, severus has a dangerous job and harry has to learn to accept it as severus has to fill two roles, well three, spy for the order, serve lord mouldywarts and be a father. harry had best think about what he wants and come to his senses preety quickly
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review kreacher. You are so right, HArry does have to learn all of those things, but he has started. He knows that he speaks before he thinks as is evidenced by how guilty he feels about what he said and how he acted.
He knows he has to change. Sev, on the other hand thinks that everything will improve if Harry becomes a child who is basically seen but not heard. He has to realise that there is much more to being a father than saying 'do as I say' not as I do'...or something similar. He thinks his effort finished with him saying I am willing to TRY to be a father to you.
He needs to do more than try. He and Harry have to do this together. And HArry is the one with most to lose.
~Lesley~
| Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Happily Ever After??? | 15 Jul 2008 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- that chapter was brilliant, severus aNd harry finally tried to sort things out, will it last.. i have no idea, i think there will be a few more arguments but they will get through it
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing kreacher. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it so much. And you are right...the path ahead is not going to be free of potholes.
~lesleY~