Slytherin!
Sequel to Broken Wings! Harry & Severus quest for the remaining Horcruxes. Can they fulfill the prophecy of Two Hawks Hunting and destroy Voldemort forever? AU, pre-HBP, HBP/DH noncompliant! No slash, mentor/guardian fic!
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character, Creature!fic, Kidnapped
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by kreacher
Rated: T
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Warnings: Character Death, Profanity, Romance/Het, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 63 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 May 2010 / 22 May 2009
Series: Broken Wings - Challenges: None
Chapters: 63 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 May 2010 / 22 May 2009
Series: Broken Wings - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 2: Restless Spirits and Retribution | 29 May 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- cheers dumbles for his ingenious spell, he has sort of redeemed himself. well done sev, harry and the riddles for dealing with the horcrux, i hope when the horcruxes are destroyed they will find some peace somewhere
Author's Response: Yes, even Albus has his moments. That is what everyone is aiming for, but whether or not it will happen . . .
| Title: Chapter 3: A Riddle Wrapped In A Conundrum | 02 Jun 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- well mouldywarts is getting very creative in shielding his thingymajigs, i can't say the word incase the dark lord is watching and blows up my computer.
i hope sev can solve the book before harry goes completely insane
Author's Response: Yes that's for sure. Gotta watch him, he's a wicked thing and always looking for ways to destroy Harry's supporters. I'll tell Sev to charm your computer so he can't blow it up. :) He put one on mine after the first story in this series.
| Title: Chapter 4: Stormy Weather | 02 Jun 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- punishments for harry, i can be fairly creative
1 scrub the whole house from top to bottom with a bucket of water and a tooth brush
2 not talk to anyone for three hours
3 make harry write assignments about every potion he has ever made, use the textbooks harry found in the attic
4 reviewer runs away very fast from harry
can't review anymore as harry is trying to kill reviewer
Author's Response:
Wow those are some punishments.
Run away really fast, because I don't think Harry is in a forgiving mood.
| Title: Chapter 6: On Edge | 12 Jun 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- the previous chap and this one were fantastic, the punishments harry devised for himself were awesome and sevs way of getting harry to come to them were great, well done on them for destroying the thingymajig and good old hedwig for helping.
sirius and remus are having lots of fun messing about in the park
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I was hoping you'd like them, and harry will make a great dad, I think. You'll see more of Hedwig next chapter too!
Yes, they are and I have just updated by the way!
| Title: Chapter 7: Hawks At Play | 17 Jun 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- that was a great chapter, not much excitement but sev and harry in bird form made me smile at their silly antics. harry i must congratulate for his teriffic owl scores and if the toad wasn't dead i would kill her for giving harry a D
Author's Response: Yes, it was needed after all the angst and action of the previous ones. Harry did wonderful and I'd kill her all over again just for you, kreacher! :D
| Title: Chapter 8: A Long Way Away | 17 Jun 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- that was great, there was a little mistake, the french use the euro now not the franc, i think only people who live in europe will only catch on to that. i have had snails and they are lovely.
sev was great when harry was ill, i had the flu in my teens and i felt bloomin awful for a week, so i did feel for harry.
i want some of that soup they had, its sounds really nice
Author's Response:
Yes they do now, but not back in 1995, when this takes place. Me too, I really like them.
Oh yes, and now there's an even more dangerous flu going around, the swine flu, I heard on the radio that a kid died from it in NJ, where I come from. Horrible!
That chicken and wild rice soup is based upon a real soup they serve at B&N cafe where I work, it tastes heavenly and I wish they sold it to us, I'd buy ten pouches of it.
Now I'm starving, LOL!
| Title: Chapter 9: A Wicked Gathering | 19 Jul 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- sorry i havn't read in a long while but been away and catching up on fan fic, why does everyone seem to know i will be away from a comp and all decide to update at the same time.
snape and harry had better watch out now that there secret is out, i wish them all the luck in the world, they need some liquid luck, but they will be flying mostly and maybe there eye sight will be better when in bird form
Author's Response:
Uh . . .because we want to drive you crazy? LOL!
Yes, they will need some but they already have a head start. Fly, hawks, fly!
So glad you came back to read more!
| Title: Chapter 10: In the Forest of the Night | 19 Jul 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- i think the wolfen are friendly, they are just protecting there territory, once they have found out that sev and harry arn't going to attack them all should be well, maybe they could attack fenrir and his motley crew instead. get one over on malfoy and co. i do hope they get the thingymabob
Author's Response: They are very much protecting what is theirs and they sure hate Fenrir and co. You'll find out why next chapter.
| Title: Chapter 11: Sylvanor's Children | 19 Jul 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- great chapter, gl;ad that the werewolves got chased away but they are still out there somewhere. sev and harry need all the help they can get from the wolfen, they seem a very nice pack once they had overcome there initial suspiscions, a great ally to have. the ministry should be ashamed of themselves, making them live in a forest but they seem to be doing alright. hedwig will be ok, she's a fighter that owl
Author's Response:
Oh yes, don;t count them out yet. They'll be back!!
yes they are really good allies to have in a fight or as friends.
The Ministry is filled with dunderheads and ostriches.
She sure is!
| Title: Chapter 12: Mist and Shadows | 19 Jul 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- great chapter, good to see whats happening elsewhere in the world, grimmauld place did need redecorating and i'm pleasedc that sirius is doing something constructive with his time.
Author's Response: Yeah I figured everyone was wondering what on earth happened to Siri now and he is starting to mature finally and get himself together.