Slytherin!
Sequel to Broken Wings! Harry & Severus quest for the remaining Horcruxes. Can they fulfill the prophecy of Two Hawks Hunting and destroy Voldemort forever? AU, pre-HBP, HBP/DH noncompliant! No slash, mentor/guardian fic!
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character, Creature!fic, Kidnapped
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by kreacher
Rated: T
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Warnings: Character Death, Profanity, Romance/Het, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 63 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 May 2010 / 22 May 2009
Series: Broken Wings - Challenges: None
Chapters: 63 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 May 2010 / 22 May 2009
Series: Broken Wings - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 13: That Which Is Hidden | 19 Jul 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- this chapter was awesome, trees that move, kind of creepy, beware in forests and woods, you never know if a tree is following your every move.
now how many casualties do we have, sev, harry and hedwig, well i hope they al;l get well soon and find the next hor.. well i mean thingymabob
Author's Response:
Yeah, especially in THAT one!
Uh yeah all three have been injured.
They have the next forbidden object, now Darkmoon has to help them destroy it.
Check out the next chapter to see what happens.
| Title: Chapter 14: The Request | 04 Aug 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- do i detect abit of romance in the air between harry and meadowsweet, its kind of cute, so glad that the dark evil curse has been eradicated and that they are welcome in to the fold, but the task of convincing fudge will not be a easy one and with the werewolves still roaming the area they arn't safe safe there
Author's Response:
Oh yes, you do!
No and that will be a tough thing to convince Fudge to not only admit he was wrong but admit it in the forst place.
True and soon they will have to leave.
Thanks for reviewing!
| Title: Chapter 15: Herbology Lessons | 04 Aug 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- great to see the crabbes, i can't quite picture vincent on a horse, he doesn't seem the type, but would like to know more of there family, marietta will be good for him and his sister seems sort of a cool person.
its all raging hormones down in the woods
Author's Response:
well it was a pony, years ago, and he hasn't ridden since then. You'll learn more about the Crabbes and Marietta's family too.
Oh yes, it sure is, LOL!
| Title: Chapter 16: Pursuit | 04 Aug 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- sev is right about harry putting meadowsweet to the back of his mind and carry on with the quest. great fight from warrier and hedwig, saw them of but they have returned with werewolve in tow, it doesn't look good, espescially in the middle of rome
Author's Response:
Yes, in order to defeat Voldy for the last time, he has to stay focused and distractions can be deadly.
No, but at least they are under cover.
If you read the next part you'll see how they manage to get out of it.
| Title: Chapter 17: Decoy | 05 Aug 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- i knew hedwig could do it, she is one hell of a good owl, hands hedwig some owl treats, though i was the teensiest bit worried about her and the course of action she chose
Author's Response:
hedwig thanks you!
But she knew what she was doing. She's such a sweet and brave girl.
I've just updated this so you can read about their new adventures.
| Title: Chapter 18: Growing Up Tom Riddle | 12 Aug 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- tom tom tom was really evil back then, i always knew he wasn't nice but not evil evil, it was abit eerie but learning about toms past will help them in the long run.
trelawney freaks me out with her predictions
i hope harry has nice dreams and is well rested for his lessons in the morning
Author's Response:
Yes, for then they will know his weaknesses and how to destroy him once and for all.
LOL1 She should, that's what a seer does.
You'll see what happens next and it's going to be a bumpy ride.
Author's Response:
Yes, for then they will know his weaknesses and how to destroy him once and for all.
LOL1 She should, that's what a seer does.
You'll see what happens next and it's going to be a bumpy ride.
| Title: Chapter 19: Orphanage on the Hill | 12 Aug 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- you are more eviler than mouldywarts with your cliffhangers.
hedwigs story was a brave one, she is a most couragouus owl, the curses harry has learned will help him with death eaters and the like but they don't seem to be helping with the inferi, good luck to sev and harrykins
Author's Response:
ooh, that's cruel! Now I have to leave you with another one!
She is and she'll be helping harry and Severus more as they go on.
Yes and they can help with the inferi if he casts them properly, as you'll see when you read the next part.
| Title: Chapter 20: Where the Dead Walk | 12 Aug 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- wow the fight was great with the inferi, i thought sev was going to get injured, poor harry being cut from the dagger and being put under its spell. well they are safe for a while, well until the werewolves catch up to them
Author's Response: Sev might get injured yet, so don't stop worrying. yes, those werewolves are a danger to them and so is that dagger. I should have the next chapter posted soon!
| Title: Chapter 23: Potion Master's Peril | 25 Aug 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- noooo you can't kill sev of, you can't do that to me, you are a nice author, not a horrible one, keep sev alive, as i will find out where you live and hunt you down with a big stick, hehehehe won't really.
well i'm glad hedwig has alot of sense and took the dagger before harry did anything else with it
Author's Response: Okay, I won't kill Sev . . .I don't want to be a horrible author. Or be killed either.
| Title: Chapter 24: Witherspoon's Rescue | 25 Aug 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- well at leat sev is in good hands and i hope that harry will help sev survive and that hedwig helps harry, and that grace can get all of the potion ingredients, remember the big stick
Author's Response: I do remember . . .and harry will do his best to help Severus, he doesn't want him to die either. Grace is very determined and she also wishes to help Severus. hedwig must be made to trust Harry somehow . . .I'm just not sure how yet.