Slytherin!
Sequel to Broken Wings! Harry & Severus quest for the remaining Horcruxes. Can they fulfill the prophecy of Two Hawks Hunting and destroy Voldemort forever? AU, pre-HBP, HBP/DH noncompliant! No slash, mentor/guardian fic!
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character, Creature!fic, Kidnapped
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by kreacher
Rated: T
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Warnings: Character Death, Profanity, Romance/Het, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 63 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 May 2010 / 22 May 2009
Series: Broken Wings - Challenges: None
Chapters: 63 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 May 2010 / 22 May 2009
Series: Broken Wings - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 25: A True Apprentice | 25 Aug 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- harry has learnt to brew potions from the best and with encouragement he should be as good as sev, i think jace should speak to harry about what was overheard and maybe between them they could get hedwig to revel the daggers location and they should keep harry from succuming to the daggers charms, sev will recover and then sev and harry should have a talk about what happened
Author's Response: That's a really good idea and I shall consider it. I have the next chapter posted so you can see what becomes of the dagger. Thank you for all your reviews. Harry has indeed learned from the best in the field. And you're right, he could become Sev's equal in time.
| Title: Chapter 26: Winning Over Hedwig | 28 Aug 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- does a happy dance with snapegirl and buries the big stick
hedwig deserves some owl treats and a mouse
i am glad hedwig managed to trust harry and that harry managed to destroy the dagger and not listen to its manipulations and sev will be ok, but possibly slightly angry with himself aswell as harry
Author's Response:
Thanks!!
She does and I have given her some!
You're right, when Sev recovers further he will be mostly angry at himself for not noticing something was wrong. I have just posted the next part, so please read it.
| Title: Chapter 30: Sojourn | 20 Nov 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- i had the very hungry caterpillar as a child and i brought my honary nephew the book aswell, great chapter, my reviews will be short as i need to catch up on your fics
Author's Response: Aww, that's so cute! That's okay, take your time! I appreciate you reviewing.
| Title: Chapter 31: The Death Eaters Strike Back | 20 Nov 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- is that the same catacombs that sev and harry are going to visit, the chamber of secrets, i have always wondered if there is more than one entrance, if thats the case they will be in deep trouble. the death eaters are getting smarter in what they are doing
Author's Response: Yes it is the same. And Lucius isn't stupid, and Bella might be crazy but she's not dumb either.
| Title: Chapter 32: What Will You Sacrifice? | 20 Nov 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- come on hermione think of a plan to get past the death eaters and outsmart them once again, then maybe dumbles won't have to be sacrificed and maybe sev and harry will destroy the last thingymajig and the magic needed for mouldywarts rebirth will kill him once and for all
Author's Response: That's a good theory. One never knows what will happen. You'll have to keep reading to find out.
| Title: Chapter 33: The Mastery of Fear | 20 Nov 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- does a happy dance with snapegirl before reviewing, but succombs to another bout of happy dancing
now do iu feel sorry for dumbles, well no as he brought this punishment on himself, beleiving the deth eaters, i wouldn't trust them as far as i could throw them, they only think of themselves, buit saying that i think peter may help dumbles somehow and try and redeem himself
Author's Response:
Hahaha!
You're right, Albus made a big mistake, but he did do it for the right reasons.
As for Peter . . .ah, I don't want to ruin the surprise.
| Title: Chapter 34: Dwellers In the Cruicible | 20 Nov 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- well there goes my theory of wormtail redeeming himself, but a dead death eater is a good death eater, but lucius using his wife in a ritual, where she will probably die and i thought he did care a little bit for her
Author's Response: yeah you got that right. Lucius and Narcissa are in this together, she wanted to participate in the ritual.
| Title: Chapter 35: Danger Comes A Callin' | 20 Nov 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- go harry and sev, taunting werewolf death eaters is good and harry should receive 1000 points for his house for doing such a thing. they will get to hogwarts safely.
fingers are crossed
Author's Response: Ooh yes he should! And hopefully they'll make it!
| Title: Chapter 36: Alerting the Order | 20 Nov 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- great chapter 3000 points to harry for killing the werewolf.
remus should have a fight with greyback to avenge him for biting him in the first place
is neville still alive? if so he and sirius should kill bella
i will read anything that you write so that answers that question
what has happened to the snake that is meant to be trying to find sev and harry
Author's Response:
Harry did do a good thing, but he's kind of in shock still.
Yes, i agree with that.
Nev is, but he's not at school, since it's the summer, he's safe at home.
Thanks!
Vera is still out there, slowly but surely trying to get to Harry, she's a small snake though so it'll take her a bit to get to him.
| Title: Chapter 37: Hawks and Phoenixes | 20 Nov 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- well remus definately gets points 3000 for getting fenrir killed and 1500 for such a ingenious way in getting him killed
moody gets 500 for using silver, not very inventive thats why such a low score
tonks making one blind but can still smell his prey 650
kingsley not sure how but 400
hagrid for shooting one and saving minerva 900
crabbe snr lightning bolt and for saving sirius 1100
i should of thought about doing this all the way through
well done vera for finding harry 100 points for being brave
Author's Response: Wow! That's a lot of points being awarded but they're all deserved. Keep going!