Slytherin!
Sequel to Broken Wings! Harry & Severus quest for the remaining Horcruxes. Can they fulfill the prophecy of Two Hawks Hunting and destroy Voldemort forever? AU, pre-HBP, HBP/DH noncompliant! No slash, mentor/guardian fic!
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character, Creature!fic, Kidnapped
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by kreacher
Rated: T
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Warnings: Character Death, Profanity, Romance/Het, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 63 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 May 2010 / 22 May 2009
Series: Broken Wings - Challenges: None
Chapters: 63 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 May 2010 / 22 May 2009
Series: Broken Wings - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 38: Rebirth | 20 Nov 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- well no points to award this chapter i think moukldywarts is weakened as dumbles gave his magic away willingly and for the love of the children still locked up.
the order will get there but there will be a battle or two
Author's Response: Oh yes you're dead on with that predicition.
| Title: Chapter 39: And A Familiar Shall Lead Them | 20 Nov 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- dioes a happy dance and awards points hope you are keeping score
hermione 100 for a unique idea about toothpaste
vincent 4000 points for killing death eaters
400 points for using a croissbow
marietta 300 points for acting
susan 200 points for sleep spell and 50 points for aquiring a wand
hagrid 250 points for keeping watch
well done everyone in your battling and acting skills
well will dumbles survive if he does i hope he changes his ways
Author's Response: Woohoo! Love the point system! So cool!
| Title: Chapter 40: The Last Horcrux | 20 Nov 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- well lots of points to award
crabbe snr 1000 for killing d.e.
kingsley 1500 for a very well placed blundering curse
carrow 1 pt for killing twin with shredding hex
minerva 1600 bolt killing carrow
molly 700 for a great backhand and 100 points for incarcerus charm
crabbe jnr 400 for shooting d.e.
marietta 300 for slippery hex
sev 1000 for killing d.e. 500 pts for saving hermione 300 for seprasempra 400 for luring nagini
bill 500 for stunning werewolf
sirius 300 blasting hex
harry 2000 for destroying horcrux
bring it on mouldywarts
Author's Response: Yay! Maybe I should post a scoreboard? You could be the score keeper! :D
| Title: Chapter 41: " . . .and teach death to die." | 20 Nov 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- great battle and i think that harry and sev deserve 10,000 poits each because i couldbn't tear my eyes away from the battle, such a great fight aswell
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I agree!
| Title: Chapter 42: Victory's Price | 20 Nov 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- harrys back, harrys back, i'm so happy that sev and sasha managed it anjd harry is happy again
dumbles has lost his magic, how will he survive without it, but he has his lemon drops
Author's Response:
Yes and Harry really is happy now that he knows how much he's loved.
Albus will manage . . .his lemon drops will help him through magic withdrawal, LOL!
| Title: Chapter 43: Remorse & Reconciliation | 20 Nov 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- well i'm going to have a guess that sev is going to adopt harry, so harry belongs somewhere or make him a apprentice in potions
i think sev would make a great headmaster, i know its like following book 7 but that was forced upon him then sev has a cool head in a crisis and he is fair, i would choose him as head.
bumblebee ridge sounds a nice place for dumbles to recupperate, send molly around with some cookbooks
| Title: Chapter 44: Of Fathers and Sons | 20 Nov 2009 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- yay i get 75 house points, go slytherin
great chapter, very good advice from his friends, good old remus for talking sense to sirius, someone needed to and no it wasn't boring.
get well soon
| Title: Chapter 46: Home To Spinner's End | 17 Feb 2010 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- well that was great, i love what harry did to his room, they do have l;ovely meals in your fics and it always makes me hungry.
i have been to skegness and built a sandcastle on the beach
if harry doesn't get to fudge can I?
Author's Response:
LOL! I wish I could send you some over the net.
Really, cool!
Yeah, you're welcome to kill him. Before I do.
| Title: Chapter 47: The New Headmaster | 17 Feb 2010 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- with albuses predicament, get him books on muggle appliances and plenty of cookery books and the new classes and teachers will be great for hogwarts in general. harry in time will learn to cope better with his phobias, though i can't talk i can't cope with my phobia of 8 legged monsters, though i did broom one to death the other day and squash one with a big book
Author's Response:
Yeah that sounds good. Albus could use the help.
Yeah eventually he'll get them under control.
Ahh spiders!!! I hate them!! They can make me run out of a room screaming.
| Title: Chapter 48: Those Mysterious Muggle Ways | 28 Feb 2010 |
| Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) |
- that was great, albus is getting into a pickle with all the muggle contraptions, i'm like albus and never seperate my washing but so far nothing has ever run.
he should go to a big book store like waterstones and get some d.i.y books and cooking books and possibly some gardening books, maybe he should take up a hobby such as golf, now that would be interesting to watch.
i hope dumbles manages to convince fudge to meet harry