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Title: Chapter 36: I Walk Down Every Evening and Stand On the Shore
| 11 Feb 2008
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Reviewer: Emilie D (Signed)
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I'm enjoying this story very much. I hope you're still writing like mad, because I'd love a speedy update. Thanks!
Title: Chapter 37: I Try to Cross to the Opposite Side
| 22 Feb 2008
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Reviewer: Emilie D (Signed)
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What a lovely surprise to find a new chapter to your story. I really enjoyed it, as usual. The only thing that seems to be going well for Snape at the moment is that the rabbit is no longer living in his cauldron. His interactions with the Hogwarts staff make for hilarious reading. He gets no respect and is treated like a wayward child. No wonder he's in a perpetual snit!
Keep on writing, I'm waiting to see what you come up with next.
Title: Chapter 38: So I Can Finally Find
| 07 Mar 2008
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Reviewer: Emilie D (Signed)
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Harry's life is turned around and upside down when a late night visitor from the future tells him the unthinkable. Now he must convince Snape to teach him Occlumency, get along with Draco Malfoy and survive through what Voldemort has planned for him.
Takes Place: 5th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Kidnapped, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: The Reward of Giving
| 23 Feb 2008
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Reviewer: Emilie D (Signed)
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Fascinating chapter! I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next.
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Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: The Great Escape
| 22 Feb 2008
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Reviewer: Emilie D (Signed)
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Please don't beg for reviews. You don't need to, because this is a very, very good story.
The characters seem to be excellently in character and I love the interaction between Harry and Snape. Snape's reaction to fatherhood was outstandingly funny. I should have reviewed that chapter when I read it, but I kept speed reading straight through to see what would happen next.
The only thing that squicks me a bit is the Ginny/Harry groping, and descriptions of her slender young nubileness. It's quite in character for teenagers, but I guess I share Snape's curmudgeonly-ness and find the details of teen love a bit… nauseating. Sorry.
But, that's a minor personal irritant to me and certainly won't stop me from reading the rest of your story. You have a good plot going and I'm looking forward to seeing what you have in store for us in Godric's Hollow.
Nice work!
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind word Emilie. I am glad you think I shouldn't need to beg for reviews, but my plea has certainly had a positive result. I have had more than twice the number of reviews for this chapter as I have for any other. I am sorry you don't care for the physical side of the romance, such as it has been but I want to be as realistic as possible. Don't worry though, it will never be a major feature of the story. I hope I can continue to please you and I will update as soon as posible. Lesley
After Harry talks to Dumbledore in Deathly Hallows, he takes a little detour to Spinner’s End, back before it was Snape’s house, back when it belonged to a woman named Eileen Prince. Snape couldn’t be angrier that Harry is his father.
Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry)
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Reverse Roles > Parental Harry
Rated: T
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Warnings: Alcohol Use
Chapters: 31
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 28 Sep 2008 / 15 Jan 2008
Series: No Difference
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 15: A Chance Discovery
| 08 Feb 2008
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Reviewer: Emilie D (Signed)
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I really, really liked this one.
Author's Response: you're welcome, I'm glad you liked it.
Title: Chapter 17: Wicked Stepmother
| 22 Feb 2008
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Reviewer: Emilie D (Signed)
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Great chapter. Your Ginny is splendidly obnoxious, and the fact that Harry doesn't enjoy covering for her little crimes is delicious.
Seeing Snape and Harry finding themselves on the same side in their deception, hating it but unable to escape, delights me.
Please keep writing. This story is awesome and I'm eagerly waiting for more.
Author's Response: Thank you! As I said in an earlier review, Harry’s starting to feel for Lily and Remus… I love putting those two in an uncomfortable position, he same one, preferably.
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
| 22 Feb 2008
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Reviewer: Emilie D (Signed)
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I can't wait to see the meeting of Harry and Snape.Write fast!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I think I'm going to begin the next chapter today. We'll see how it goes.
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
| 25 Feb 2008
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Reviewer: Emilie D (Signed)
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I loved this chapter. It's perfectly believable to me that Harry would be stricken by this news and uncertain how to act. Prince Hall can't be what he expected… I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you find Harry believable here. I know I would be very uncertain how to act in his position. No, Prince Hall isn't what he expected, and I'll try to update as soon as I can, but I do need to finish the next chapter for "Potions Professor" first.
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
| 28 Mar 2008
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Reviewer: Emilie D (Signed)
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More!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working on it!
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