Membership status: Member
Title: Chapter 7: Mind Games
| 17 Jan 2009
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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omg... you have to tell me who kaslin is!!! I don't deal well with mysteries and i'm really sick so you should take pity on me and tell me who it is.
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
| 09 Jun 2008
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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i like this story so far... the scene w/ catherine seems nice but maybe a little weird that she asked that right away... but i dunno, sometimes that happens in orphanages...
Author's Response: I'm actually hoping to change that scene a bit to make it more realistic. Thanks for taking the time to review!
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
| 09 Jun 2008
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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i don't like connor.
Author's Response: Me neither. :)
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
| 09 Jun 2008
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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I like the fact that Harry is actually trying out for Seeker instead of just getting the job... I hope Connor gets kicked out of his house soon. I
Author's Response: I too thought it was an interesting twist having Harry try out for a change. As for Connor... who knows. That might happen, it might not. :)
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
| 05 Aug 2008
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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Yay, a review!! Nick is wonderful, since you asked for that specifically. Connor is an ass. Insomnia, huh? I didn't see that one coming. Not a lot of Snape action in this one, even if he was over for xmas... Hope he's more prominent in the next one. I heart this story!! ~Cait
Author's Response: My latest chapter is finally up and Snape is in it more than the last chapter. Thanks for reviewing!
After the Dobby incident at the beginning of the second book, Harry runs away, and Snape kidnaps him. In an old-fashioned house with no comforts and a huge black dog, Harry finds himself at Snape's mercy as Snape plays mind games and makes Harry live through different scenarios. Though Snape seems crazy and psychotic, Harry begins to see reasons behind Snape's sporadic behavior. There is corporal punishment, but it is different from what I've written before. This is a Mean!Snape story for the most part. If you're looking for a cuddly story, go elsewhere please.
Takes Place: 2nd summer
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Snape flavour: Snape is Cruel, Snape is Mean
Tags: Kidnapped, Runaway
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Hurt
| 18 Jul 2008
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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awesome. please update soon
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Alone
| 25 Jan 2009
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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this story is so sad!!! i love it, of course, but it's so sad
AU. This is a Snape mentor Harry kind of story. It starts with Harry's summer vacation before his Second Year as Snape comes across something that breaks all delusions about the boy's home-life. Please don't flame. I really appreciate constructive criticism but no flames. Please!
Takes Place: 2nd summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 6
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Completed: No
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Updated: 01 May 2009 / 08 Nov 2007
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
| 02 Mar 2008
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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I think it would probably be prudent for you to know that most people put thoughts in itallics rather than single quotes. It makes it easier to distinguish the thoughts from the rest of the story. Single quotes can easily be missed.
Title: Chapter 13: Cry XIII
| 09 Aug 2008
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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this story is very dark. it is more chilling than the fluff i usually read. i am intrigued. have you ever heard of a happy ending?
Harry receives a very special gift on his 16th birthday that leads him to the help he needs...Snape is finding respite from his growing pressures and discovers one in need of help. Despite himself, he finds he CAN grow close to another living being. Only..."everything would've been so much simpler if it'd actually been a cat"...
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Creature!fic, Kidnapped, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15- No Man's Land
| 08 Nov 2008
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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ugh... i hate your cliff hangers, jsuk... love the plot, though. hope you post another chapter soon; i might die of need
Author's Response: that's the parazdox: I hate cliffies in other's stories, and I just can't help but put one in every chapter ! That's it, I'm evil ;-)
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