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Harry Potter is hearing a voice in his head. It isn't the enemy, it isn't a ghost or even his own conscious... and that isn’t even the main problem. The Dursleys kicked him out, and after Harry's near death experience, Dumbledore feels it is best for Harry to go into hiding, and at the most unlikely place anyone would ever think to look... Snape Manor.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
| 17 Aug 2008
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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sigh. gross idea of a fight w/ snape.
Author's Response: really? i sort of liked it, but hopefully for you i might not use it in the end. im not sure yet... thanks for the review
Title: Chapter 14: Just Like My Dad
| 29 Jul 2008
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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when you mentioned the blond at first i thought it was lucius. having it be tobias was much better.
Author's Response: Thanks, you weren't the first to think that either. I had people freaking out thinking Harry was going to be kidnapped by Lucius, when the truth was I never even thought of doing that to the poor kid. Lucius does make a reappearance in this story, but I won't tell you where, don't want to spoil it!
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Dumbledore's Office
| 05 Jun 2008
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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funny about hedwig being there, but i understand literary license and all that. i like your writing style, flowing and simple without sounds dumbed down or corny, a hard balance to get. seeing the summary gives me hopes for this story- i'm thinking it's a short, sweet, snarry story? i'll have to read to find out, i guess. :))
Title: Chapter 5: Snapshot Five - Hedwig
| 05 Jun 2009
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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aww!! so cute! I thought it was funny that Snape threatened to spank dumbly. he should have gone through on it =P. No, but in all seriousness, it was really cute.
There are many forms of vengeance. It can be just as satisfying to return cruelty with kindness as to return cruelty with equal cruelty...and sometimes it can be more dangerous and more insidious to do so. Faced with an eleven-year-old Harry Potter, Severus Snape has a decision to make: How does he like his vengeance?
Takes Place: 1st Year
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 3
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Completed: No
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Updated: 24 Nov 2008 / 05 May 2008
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - A House for Masks
| 29 May 2008
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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okay, this chapter was really good, as was the last. hopefully you'll update really soon, though, so we can get into the juice of the story
Snape is left dying in the Shrieking Shack after giving Harry his memories convinced that Harry is going to his death. When Snape dies, he is given a chance to send his soul backwards in time seven years to give Harry a chance for a better (and hopefully longer) life. Will switch back and fourth between being Snape centered and Harry centered.
Takes Place: None
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 12
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Completed: No
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Updated: 05 Jun 2009 / 17 May 2008
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue & Chapter 1
| 08 Aug 2008
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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i love the idea of snape going back in time. as a master occlumens, tho, i would think that snape would know better than to say quite as much as he did. maybe mention that harry might have been shielded from the wizarding world, but the entire story he was told? riddiculous. snape would know better. if the story actually got out later, they would either think harry had heard it from snape and was lying, or they would think snape really did know and his concerns for harry weren't genuine.. just saying. you asked for something meaningful, right?
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue & Chapter 1
| 08 Aug 2008
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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I hope harry's in gryffindor. i've read slytherin harry stories and i don't like them as well... tho i don't see that in the warnings so i'm guessing it's not going to happen? malfoy is still going to be a git, after all, and it's not like harry's any different than he was. he didn't want to be in slytherin cuz he didn't want to be w/ malfoy. early black escape would be cool, tho i'd rather harry live w/ snape.
Title: Snape's Second Chance
| 08 Aug 2008
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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it's good. ron and harry and hermione all in slytherin? that's interesting. and no, i don't think it's ever been done before.
Title: Snape's Second Chance
| 08 Aug 2008
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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lol. you don't necessarily need to explain things in your AN's, sometimes the mystery is good. with ron and hermione in slytherin i don't mind that harry is. it's actually kind of interesting.. and perhaps i missed the warning. anyway, "good story. can't wait to read more". i'm assuming i'm allowed to say that after i've given you a meaningful review?
Title: Snape's Second Chance
| 08 Aug 2008
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Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed)
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the bit about harry's 6th year i had to read a couple times before understanding. my mind might be muddled from whatever sickness i have developed (some kind of head cold), but somehow i doubt it... i think you could have made it clearer that was in the last timeline... like, separate the 2 timelines somehow so we know you're not randomly jumping ahead to harry's 6th year
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