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I am currently a bookseller for Barnes and Noble, a former teacher of preschool & 7th grade English & an obsessed Severus Snape fan, which is why so many of my stories feature him. 

I love reading other fanfic stories and will leave a review whenever possible and ask you do me the same courtesy. 

neveragainseries2.jpg "Read Read me a story, pleeaze  Dad" drawn for my Never Again story, by artist SnapesYukuai. Picture refers to the incident where Harry brings his stuffed panther Inky to life through accidental magic. This took place just before that.

 

 

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After Harry is caught for exploding a cauldron in 2nd year Potions, Snape insists he keep a firm hand on the boy he must secretly protect. However, he discoveres that there is more to the twelve year old than unruliness and disrespect. Similarly, Harry learns from and gains a new perspective of his professor.

Takes Place: 2nd Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Stern
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Profanity
Chapters: 32 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 17 Jun 2008 / 25 Sep 2007
Series: Emerald Eyes - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 15 Jun 2008
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed)
    Yay! The basilisk is dead! And I love how you made them do it together, and with the traditional method instead of the sword and the diary. Great ending! Will they help to destroy the diary?

    Author's Response: Well, the diary has been destroyed.  But Snape and Dumbledore will discuss how it happened in the final installment.  I had the basilisk scene planned for quite some time, and it was incredibly nerve-wracking to write...lol.  I'm really glad you enjoyed it.  'Together' was just how I wanted them to be for that defeat--each of our boys did his part. ;)  I appreciate your review, Kathy, and I hope you're having a good weekend!

Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 & Epilogue 17 Jun 2008
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed)
    Yay! That was great and I hope harry goes to see Severus over the holidays, they need to spend more time together. I liked the way DD destroyed the diary and everything, and Harry's talk with Sev afterwards was wonderful. They finally seem to have reached an understanding.
    You did an awesome job!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, Kathy!  I've been neglecting my reading and reviewing duties and am just now getting back on track.  Your story is queued up on my list ;)  Congratulations on finishing your sequel, crazy-typin' woman!  LOL. 


Abandoned on the streets, then placed in an orphanage, and finally adopted by a loving woman. Things are finally getting better for young Harry… or are they?

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Child fic, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 22 - Completed: No - Updated: 30 Aug 2008 / 18 Oct 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 27 Feb 2008
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed)
    Hey, i really love this story and i like the way Snape is teaching Harry, even if he thinks he's a Muggle. I wish Harry would tell someone about Connor though, the miserable bastard. I'd love to see hi go a few rounds with Severus or even Harry's grandfather--that former Marine could take him apart.
    And if Cathy knew she'd dump him like a hot potato!

    I have a smiliar type of story posted here with a grown-up Harry and a young wizard who was abused that Severus adopts as his son, if you'd like to check it out.

    Author's Response: One of those characters will get to take a shot or two at Connor when they find out. That won't be for a while though. Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 16 Mar 2008
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed)
    Awesome! Go Sev, I so wanted him to deck the miserable bum! And I'm glad that he still liked Harry once he knew the truth. It makes him a lot more believable, since his prejudice was based on hating an image not a person in the first place.

    Can't wait for the next part. When will Cathy find out the truth about her husband?

    Author's Response: Someone (I wont say who) will get the chance to deck Connor. But that scene, along with Cathy finding out about him wont be until after Harry's first year I think. Thanks for taking the time to review!!

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 30 Mar 2008
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed)
    yes, you wrote another one! Loved the way you had Severus and Harry and Cathy go to Diagon Alley together and how everyone thinks Harry's his son! I laughed at that a lot. Will Sev eventually adopt Harry in this fic like your other ones?

    The goblins and the roller coaster and the conversation with Moody were well done too! I should be updating mine shortly.

    Author's Response:

    If Severus and Cathy get together, then he will adopt Harry. I'm still deciding if I want them together after Connor leaves the picture. Thanks for the review and I shall go check out your latest chapter now!


Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 27 Apr 2008
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed)
    Yay! You updated too! And I loved this chapter! What did Sev do to the Dursleys?? Will we ever know? I loved the buzzer thing, my nephew had one and used it on everyone, nearly gave my mom heart failure! LOL. I like how you have Harry make friends with the twins & stick up for Severus too! And he's a Slytherin too, which is where he belongs!

    Author's Response: Well, I dont exactly know what Sev did to them! I couldn't come up with something unique to do to them so I left that scene out for right now. I'm hoping to mention exactly what happened in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 11 May 2008
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed)
    I liked how you have Harry and Blaise being friends with each other and Harry nearly hexing Malfoy even though it was a bluff. And the twins were hilarious as usual. Loved the end and how Sev is going to find a picture of Lily to give Harry. Aww!

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!


Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 30 May 2008
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed)
    Yes, I really liked it, they'll be sure to think about how horrible they were. I loved the part with Sev in the office too and how he tries to get Harry to talk about his past with Connor. Great job!

    Author's Response: There's more Harry and Sev interaction in the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 28 Jun 2008
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed)
    I thought the whole thing was beautiful! I loved reading about Cathy and hope she gets a clue real soon about Connor. And the part with Sev giving Harry the broom and talking with him about Connor and with the troll was good also. The Quidditch match was well done and I'm not real good at writing them either, which is why I only have one scene with it in HYFP, I don't watch sports and am terrible writing about them. Can't wait for the next one! Will it include some kind of confrontation with Connor over Harry?

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. The next chapter has (finally) been posted too!


Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 05 Aug 2008
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed)
    Nick was awesome, I've wanted to beat the ever loving *** out of Connor since the day he hit Harry. I'm glad Sev came to spend Christmas with them, he needs a surrogate family. The gifts were sweet.

    But it looks like Harry has amnesia. Maybe he needs to see a wizard healer? Update soon!

    Author's Response: I've had that scene in my head for the longest time. I always knew Nick would be the one to get Connor first but Snape will get a chance too- in the chapter I just posted. Thanks for the great review!


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