Slytherin!
"Read Read me a story, pleeaze Dad" drawn for my Never Again story, by artist SnapesYukuai. Picture refers to the incident where Harry brings his stuffed panther Inky to life through accidental magic. This took place just before that.
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Severus Snape thought he had it all.
And then tragedy struck. His wife was dead, two of his son were dead and one was missing.
What he doesn't know is that two of them are alive. What happens when the two sons reunite?
Response to Surviving Sons Challenge
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Creature!fic, Kidnapped, Runaway, Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys, Vampires
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Snapegirl
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 15 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 01 Sep 2011 / 19 Mar 2011
Series: Lost Treasures - Challenges: The Surviving Sons
Chapters: 15 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 01 Sep 2011 / 19 Mar 2011
Series: Lost Treasures - Challenges: The Surviving Sons
| Title: Chapter 8: Premonitions | 26 Apr 2011 |
| Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) |
- This was a great chapter! I'm glad Ginny is okay and that Aubrey saw what was going to happen in time.
Poor Draco! I hope he gets away from Lucius. Oh, and did you know that some words in this chapter are underlined and in different colors, like mask? Is that something that just happened, because it looks weird, almost like it's a hyperlink.
| Title: Chapter 9: Draco's Defection | 26 Apr 2011 |
| Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) |
- Well, so Bella and Lucius are dead. Can't say I'm sorry. But I did think that Narcissa and Draco would have been a little smarter and covered their tracks a bit by hiding his body. It seems like a Slytherin cunning thing to do.
I'm glad they won't be dark anymore but how will they convince the Aurors of that?
| Title: Chapter 13: Secrets Revelations | 29 Aug 2011 |
| Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) |
- Great Job! I really liked how you included Draco here and the potion was cool!
| Title: Chapter 10: Midnight Conversations | 10 Jun 2011 |
| Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) |
- Sorry for not reviewing sooner. I was trying to finish Return to Prince Manor so i could begin to read this chapter, and having a devil of a time doing either with my mother calling me every five minutes and then getting sick.
I'm so glad Cissy's baby is okay. That part was so touching! I also liked how Severus and hazel comforted each other.
I enjoyed seeing that for once Sev bears no guilt for telling the prophecy and that Artemis saved him from himself.
Love this story, keep writing it!
| Title: Chapter 11: New Loves | 30 Jun 2011 |
| Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) |
- Of course they are!
I liked Stella, she seems like a good person to help Ambrosias.
I'm also glad that Hazel is with Severus and hope things don't get too awkward between them. I wonder what Aubrey will think?
| Title: Chapter 12: What Now? | 25 Jul 2011 |
| Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) |
- What a great thing for Draco. I hope all continues to go well with him and Narcissa and the baby. Great job and I'm glad they're all growing closer as a family and healing,
Author's Response:
Thank you Snapegirl! That means alot comming from you!
| Title: Chapter 14: The Ruse is Completed | 29 Aug 2011 |
| Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) |
- Aww1 This chapter was sweet! More please!
Harry would always be Lily's...
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic, Runaway, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape, Misc > All written in Snape's POV
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic, Runaway, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape, Misc > All written in Snape's POV
Rated: K
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 26 Apr 2011 / 26 Apr 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 26 Apr 2011 / 26 Apr 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Her Child | 27 Apr 2011 |
| Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) |
- This was a really sweet story. I liked how you made Severus into a man who actually wanted to be a dad, and it was sad that he thought his dream was dead because Lily was gone.
I really liked the way you described the bath part of this, that was super cute. I love bathtime, it was one of my favorite things to do when I babysat my small nieces and nephews. especially when they invented those crazy color paints and silly soaps. I liked the way you described all the toys and wondered if Harry had a favorite. My niece's favorite was a small rainbow rubber dolphin and her brother's was a squishy squid he got from the aquarium.
I do have a question though, did Sev ever heal Harry's face and arm? Maybe I missed that?
Oh and there's a small typo at the end you might want to fix, you have Harry was not longer her child, it should be 'no' longer.
Loved the end and how Harry accepted Severus as his father. Adorable!
Secrets from the past haunt the present...
Takes Place: 0 - Before Harry is born, 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 0 - Before Harry is born, 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking, Romance/Het
Chapters: 17 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 07 Jul 2011 / 05 Jun 2011
Series: A Time for Everything - Challenges: None
Chapters: 17 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 07 Jul 2011 / 05 Jun 2011
Series: A Time for Everything - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: The Cottage | 06 Jun 2011 |
| Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) |
- This was a good chapter. i liked the idea of this cottage beside the Muggle village. I also liked how Lily and Severus were married and that Severus wanted lots of kids. I agree with Lily, he'd be a good father.
I was surprised that Lily was urging him to a reconciliaton with his father. That's a touchy subject, because obviously Severus was very hurt whenTobias became an alcoholic. I'm assuming Eileen died in that car crash? That's a hell of a thing for a son to forgive his father for. And whle I understand that Lily wants them to be a family again, it's still a very very sore subject. I can see why Severus is reluctant to forgive the man, and even though Tobias is technically paying for his crime, I think Severus will ever feel it's enough, since he took away Eileen from him.
I think Severus should be allowed to make up his own mind if and when he wishes to reconcile, because pushing him to do so will only cause resentment and anger.
It could take years, as I know all too well, since I had a family member who was an alcoholic for years and wrecked his marriage and it took his wife and kids years to trust and reconcile with him after he finally decided to quit the bottle for good.
I liked that Lily is supposed to be a teacher too.
| Title: Chapter 2: It Begins | 06 Jun 2011 |
| Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) |
- Well, this was a most puzzling chapter. How could Harry be James's son when Lily was married to Severus? Did they get divorced? Go under cover or something? I'll bet the meddling old coot in the office had something to do with that.
If Harry is Sev's son, why doesn't Severus remember that? Possibly a Memory Charm?
Lily is alive and in a coma, but why did Petunia get Harry if he's Severus' son?
I have many questions . . . and hope I'll get some answers as the story goes on.
Oh, and one other thing, why does Ron have a broad Cockney accent? It almost reminded me of Eliza Dolittle in My Fair Lady.