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I got annoyed with typing in the 'I am not a robot' codes every time I wanted to review, so I made an acount. Someday, maybe, I will write something.

 

Will beta read though, I'm a horible speller, but I understand grammer and love to nit-pick.

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Everybody's Fool by believeindreamers starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 20]
Harry's EVIL! Harry Potter is presumed dead after a Death Eater attack on the Dursley home. But when Snape is captured, there's something terribly familiar about the Dark Lord's new ally . . .

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Slytherin!Harry, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Character Death, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 08 Aug 2004 / 21 May 2004
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 6: Light in Every Darkness 24 Jul 2010
Reviewer: lokiwolf (Signed)
    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENED!!!!!!!

Freakery by halfblood starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 31]
What if Harry thinks the Dursley's treatment of him is right and he doesn't want to be a freak or go to Hogwarts? What will happen when he gets there and is clearly intent on leaving again asap?

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Resorting, Runaway, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Violence
Chapters: 3 - Completed: No - Updated: 22 Mar 2010 / 30 Jan 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 3: Charms, Transfiguration and Flying. 24 Jul 2010
Reviewer: lokiwolf (Signed)
    This is really interesting! I'd love to see more.

The White Laird of the Mountains by Morgana starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 95]
Severus Snape and Harry Potter think that they know everything about each other. However, when Headmaster Dumbledore persuades his Potions Master to give duelling lessons to the youngest Triwizard Champion, events unfurl which will change both their lives forever. 2010 Challenge Fest entry. Response to the Safe Corridor at Hogwarts Challenge by Jan_AQ.

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Kidnapped
Categories: Fic Fests > #11 Challenge Fest 2010, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Misc > Keepers of the Snitch
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Profanity
Chapters: 12 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Jul 2010 / 16 Jul 2010
Series: None - Challenges: Safe Corridor at Hogwarts
Title: Chapter 12: Ycan Upcyme Eadignesse 24 Jul 2010
Reviewer: lokiwolf (Signed)
    A very good story except for a few small nitpicks. The snake terms and etc had to be explained in author's notes. A story should stand on its own, and not need clarification from its creater in order to make sense. Other then that, grreat job. Very few typos and mistakes, at least that I saw, and fairly good characterization. Ending was a bit crowded, but that's understandable with the plot.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I think the snake-terms can, actually, stand alone if the reader dislocates their mind and thinks like a snake. However, as a matter of policy, I give translations; some people are intellectually lazy, others simply enjoy reading dictionaries lol! I use snake-terms because, as a linguist, I know that, even if one has a direct translation, it is not always immediately understandable; all cultures have idioms, the meanings of which are not immediately clear, and all languages have words which cannot be directly translated (an example is 'miko' which, yes, means 'priestess' but has other, very important connotations which would be lost if 'priestess' were used). As I delved deeply into 'snake culture' in one of my other stories, I thought I'd use the 'snake terms' in this because, actually, a lot of reviewers have told me that they really love my version of parseltongue- until now I've not had a negative response.  

Perception is Everything by Kendra James starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 165]
When Severus Snape is left in charge of Hogwarts over the Christmas break, he is less than pleased to discover Harry will be one of his charges. Events force him to face that Mr. Potter may not be quite what he has assumed all these years.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Master Snape > Apprentice Harry, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 28 - Completed: No - Updated: 30 Sep 2010 / 18 Jul 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 23 Jul 2010
Reviewer: lokiwolf (Signed)
    A bit silly, what with Harry suddenly doing all this studying when it is canon that he doesn't like to. Anyway, nothing really special, but fairly well written. Keep on writing.

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