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Echoes from the Past by Valerie Vancollie starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 73]
Shortly before his fifteenth birthday, Harry receives a letter from the past that alters his entire life. Now it is up to him to reveal the truth to the other whom it concerns. But will he find the courage to do so or will he repeat his mother's mistake and wait until it's too late?

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: T - Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 10 - Completed: No - Updated: 20 May 2007 / 29 Jan 2005
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 8: Mystic Alley 03 Dec 2010
Reviewer: elizzza (Signed)
    Surrey is a County. I do not know why so many (oh no, you are certainly not the only one) seem to take for granted that Surrey is just a village or a small town. “Little Whinging” is supposed to be the town. Saying to the cab driver that you want to get to “Privet Drive in Surrey” could have him driving around ALL of the towns and villages – and there are quite a few of them.

    It is also one of the Home Counties. Which County is regarded as a Home County depends on just when you are placing the story, but as far as I can recall, Surrey has always been one of the Home Counties (which is believed to have started with the itinerant assizes court, i.e. the travelling judges)

    Now, that is a minor criticism. You have a very good story here, and I am definitely enjoying it very much, and hope you will continue. It seems that your last update was in 2007 and I hope this is due only to a writer¨s block and nothing worse. The story is definitely too good to abandon.

Gratitude by Bil starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 32]
Snape tortures Harry. Complete.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Misc
Rated: T - Warnings: Torture, Violence
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Oct 2006 / 16 Oct 2006
Series: None - Challenges: Torture
Title: Chapter 1: Gratitude 30 Mar 2008
Reviewer: elizzza (Signed)
    This one deserves another chapter - as do some of your other stories. Yes, they all quite happily stand alone, but several would do well with more chapters.

Your Mind to Mine by Bil starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 34]
AU. At the Welcoming Feast in PS, Harry’s scar hurt when he looked past Quirrell at Snape. What if there was another reason to that given? Snape gets a glimpse of the real Harry. Abused!Harry.

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 15 Jun 2006 / 15 Jun 2006
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Your Mind to Mine 30 Mar 2008
Reviewer: elizzza (Signed)
    I rather liked this story. Well done

Harry Potter and the Mysterious Metamorphosis by Aeryun starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 84]
Year Seven, SS through HBP compliant (Non Deathly Hallows Compliant) Severitus. Why is Harry's appearance changing? Is he being affected by destroying the Horcruxes in the same manner that Voldemort was while he was creating them? And just why is Snape acting so weird?

Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Alcohol Use, Character Death, Violence
Chapters: 34 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 10 Feb 2009 / 06 May 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 34: Chapter Thirty Four: Full Circle 01 Apr 2011
Reviewer: elizzza (Signed)
    I have enjoyed your story. You do write well and the story is excellent. I would however advise you not to use only your spellchecker, as it does not alert you to things like "starring" (staring), "wondered off" (wandered off), as well as "over heard" (overheard), "how ever" (however) and "some how" (somehow). There are other examples but these were the ones I remember. I sincerely hope you will soon write another story as I liked your writing.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I had several people look through each chapter before I posted, as well as using spellchecker, and I still find mistakes even now. *shrugs*  Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the review.   Aery

Cheating Fate by Bil starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
The aftermath of the final battle: Cheating Fate is possible, but it’s not always a good idea. Severus, Harry, and the consequences of saving the world and a life. Written pre-HBP. Oneshot.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: T - Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 18 May 2007 / 18 May 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Cheating Fate 30 Mar 2008
Reviewer: elizzza (Signed)
    I have now read a few of your stories and I must say I am impressed. This one is excellent too. (I understand why it is your own favourite)

Evolution by Twinheart starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 102]
SEQUEL TO EQUILIBIRUM : A mentoring relationship is developing between young wizard Harry Potter and his dour Potions Professor, Severus Snape; but away from Hogwarts, Harry’s life is not all it seems. Summer before Year Two.

Takes Place: 2nd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Evil!Albus, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 17 - Completed: No - Updated: 26 Oct 2008 / 09 Sep 2007
Series: Equilibrium and Evolution - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 01 Jan 2011
Reviewer: elizzza (Signed)
    I really hope nothing has happened to you. I noticed that you haven't answered any reviews for quite some time but hope that you will eventually be able to write more on this story, which is excellent.

Depths of Darkness by Kristi Lee starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 34]
Dumbledore has organised Harry's life so that he is forced into Gryffindor. What will happen when Harry rocks the boat?

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 5 - Completed: No - Updated: 28 Mar 2009 / 27 Mar 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 19 Feb 2011
Reviewer: elizzza (Signed)
    You have an interesting story here, well worth continuing. I hope you will. I also hope the reason you have stopped for more than a year is only due to a writer's block and nothing more serious.
    Good luck with your continued writing.

Wizard's Luck by Snapegirl starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Harry stumbles over a leprechaun by chance and gets more than he bargained for. A companion piece to my Prince Manor series. AU! sick! Severus

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Alcohol Use
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 17 Mar 2010 / 17 Mar 2010
Series: Prince Manor - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Wizard's Luck 13 Jan 2012
Reviewer: elizzza (Signed)
    Enjoyable

Temporal Guardian by LLALVA starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 24]
During the Summer of Second Year, Molly Weasley express her concerns about Harry returning to his relatives. The school staff has to hear her and a place must be found for Harry.

Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 13 - Completed: No - Updated: 27 Jan 2011 / 03 Apr 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 13 Feb 2011
Reviewer: elizzza (Signed)
    You have a good story here. However, be a bit more careful with spelling and grammar. Words like 'meanwhile' and 'without' should writen as one word, not two. Hope that is helpful

Little Slytherin by Julz starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Third installment of the 'Remember My Last' series, following 'Rain and Lilies', which is the prequel to RML. Harry takes his youngest son to visit the grave of the Bravest Man he ever knew. Please R&R!

Takes Place: 9 - Post Epilogue (middle aged Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Misc > Strictly Canon Universe, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 27 May 2010 / 27 May 2010
Series: Remember My Last - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Little Slytherin 20 Jul 2011
Reviewer: elizzza (Signed)
    Thank you!
    I find myself agreeing with one previous reviewer, who wondered what Snape's pov would be of Al's visits - providing he makes a habit of going back over the years(maybe at Hogsmead visits and later through his aging?). Oh well, it's just a wish .....


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