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| I'm a teen from the U.S. Although I have yet to write my own Snape and Harry piece, I love reading them! My favorites are guardian pieces. I've written a lot of Lily pieces over at fanfiction.net under the name spinningleaves, and I've started to post my own original work at fictionpress.com under the penname waterleaves. Feel free to check them out! [Report This]
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This is a side story in the Playplaces can be dangerous universe. After a long day of play young Harry Potter needs a bath and who has to help him? None other than his care taker Severus Snape, a look into how bath time can be for this pair.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11)
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 07 Sep 2007 / 07 Sep 2007
Series: Playplaces can be Dangerous
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 05 May 2008
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Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed)
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Title: Chapter 1: One More Such Victory
| 28 Apr 2008
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Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed)
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Aww. I like that even though Harry does have some regrets, he also seems to be at peace. Excellent job.
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - More To Come...
| 04 May 2008
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Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed)
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Well done. Interesting premise. Although I'm not sure about the idea that Snape and Harry need to "get together" which you use at the end. Something about the wording just kind of throws it off for me I guess? But good work all around!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. :). I'm going to get a beta eventually to help me word things right. ;). Glad that you enjoyed it overall. :)
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 : Beware the man with chocolate frogs!
| 14 Aug 2008
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Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed)
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Aww very cute. I love the way you have Severus's childhood play so much into the way he treats Harry and the way he wants to be a favor. I hope we'll get to see Harry looking out for his younger sister some day! This is a really adorable story- I love the way you haven't made them so golden family where everyone is perfect and happy all the time! Good work!
Title: Chapter 6: Outtake: When It Alteration Finds
| 16 Aug 2008
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Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed)
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Awww I love it! Great adorable stuff! I really really love this new life for Harry so much! I wish it was a full story so we could see his day to day life! Maybe a scene with Dumbledore trying to manipulate the Harry and Draco, or Harry's first class when he has to dumb down his intelligence so much! I understand that you're busy though- so no pressure! Great stuff!
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Plotting
| 10 May 2008
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Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed)
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I'll be giving a better review once I've read the whole story- but I noticed that you had the trio take out their Charms books but then say how much work they had in transfiguration. This could make sense, but I thought it was a bit weird not to have the professor assigning the large amount just be Flitwick since it's a Charms book. Good chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks, waterleaves! I went in and changed it. I am chuckling that I never even noticed that. I meant to put in Transfiguration. LOL Oh well. And I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story! :o)
Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55: Echoes
| 14 May 2008
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Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed)
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WOW! Such an amazing piece! I can't wait to see what happens from here! Aww a life for Harry with Ginny! That would be amazing! Excellent work- your use of language and the way you craft your sentences is truly remarkable! I'm going to start the sequel right now!
Title: Chapter 8: Birthdays
| 22 Apr 2008
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Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed)
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Aww I love it! You've done so well introducing new characters! The entire extended family has grabbed my attention instead of just Harry and Sev. Nice job! Though I'm still unclear as to if Lucius and Severus have an actual family relation
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad that you like the all of the new characters that I've created - I was a bit worried as to how well they would be accepted. Yes, Lucius and Severus are related but it is very distant. I will see what I can do about getting a copy of the family tree on the internet to help clarify things.
Title: Chapter 10: Meeting The Potters
| 20 Apr 2009
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Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed)
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I utterly adore it! It will be interesting to see Remus and Lily attempting to interact with Severus- especially once they realize who Alex is. Excellent story so far, I love seeing Severus family connections and everyone playing grandparents to Alex. Great stuff!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! It's always so gratifying to hear that people like something you put so much of yourself into. Yes, Remus and Lily's interactions are going to be fun. I'm glad that you like Severus' family, as I really was slightly nervous about how successful they would be!
After the final war, Harry has to make decisions about where he will go and who he will let into his life as he begins to reexamine his judgements about people. This story takes place at the end of the Seventh book, but before the Epilogue. SPOILERS for Deathly Hallows! Interaction with Snape is not in the first few chapters, but he will be a prominent firgure in this story.
Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry)
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Self-harm, Violence
Chapters: 6
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Completed: No
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Updated: 04 Mar 2008 / 01 Dec 2007
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Food
| 27 May 2008
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Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed)
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I really like that you're showing Harry attempting to man up and take a stand for something. This is a much more realistic look at the new wizarding world than the candy-coated one that a lot of people use. Well done!
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