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All Harry wants is a place where he fits in. Eleven years old and fresh of the train from Kings Cross, Harry is not going to listen to 'House politics' how ever hard Draco and Ron try to persuade him.... As far as he's concerned he's just Harry Potter, the Boy Who Wants A Chance.
Takes Place: 1st Year
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by waterleaves
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 03 Dec 2007 / 03 Dec 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 03 Dec 2007 / 03 Dec 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: As Long As You're Mine. | 28 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed) |
- Haha this will definitely be interesting! Harry's sneaky then he gets credit for- and I'd love to see Snape try to handle him!
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Following the 7th book Severus Snape is very much alive on the Christmas after his youngest grandson starts Hogwarts. In fact, he's spending that Christmas at the Burrow with his son and grandchildren plus the entire Weasley clan.
Takes Place: 9 - Post Epilogue (middle aged Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape, Misc > All written in Snape's POV
Takes Place: 9 - Post Epilogue (middle aged Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape, Misc > All written in Snape's POV
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 14 Dec 2007 / 14 Dec 2007
Series: None - Challenges: Christmas
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 14 Dec 2007 / 14 Dec 2007
Series: None - Challenges: Christmas
| Title: Chapter 1: Following Tradition | 09 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed) |
- Awww adorable all around. I love that you didn't step too far into making it sugary sweet, but it was still deeply meaningful and touching. Well done! Slight error though at the very end- "my favorite gift His being here." just a typo where you added in an H. Excellent work!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Thirteen-year-old Harry is forced into the body of another Harry in a parallel world, where Snape adopted him years ago. And Snape is enraged to discover that his son has been replaced by a stranger. In our world, Snape discovers a new Harry--one who sees him as a father he never wanted to be. Each Harry must learn to survive in a strange new world, and search for a way home.
Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 24 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 02 Feb 2011 / 20 Dec 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 24 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 02 Feb 2011 / 20 Dec 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Unannounced | 29 May 2008 |
| Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed) |
- Aww. Fantastic! Absolutely amazing story! Haha especially now that I understand the meaning of the title! And wow its just the little details that are so striking, like the bubblefruit and then having it be the tree in other Harry's yard. So many great things! I don't know how you're keeping all the differences between the world's straight! Please keep writing- you have me hooked!
Author's Response:
I have no idea how I keep it all straight, either. :D I just thought about it so much before I started writing that it's like a little world set up in my head. I can pop in and visit whenever I need to remember where everything is. ;)
| Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: The Promises of Slytherins | 12 Jul 2008 |
| Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed) |
- OH WOW! Intense! But.. it will also be rather sad when they get sent back. At least for this Harry! I'm sure this is going to get interesting! Good stuff!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Speculating on what will happen next, eh? I'm afraid I can't comment on that—but I'm glad you've enjoyed everything so far! :)
| Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Summer's End | 17 Aug 2008 |
| Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed) |
- Awww Severus! This is going to be hard! There's something so adorable about the way that Harry is a little climber! Great update!
Author's Response:
I enjoy that about Harry, too. I can't remember how I came up with that, now. But it suits him. :)
A drabble (a fic that is 100 words). Snape suspects a terrible fate.
Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Misc > All written in Snape's POV
Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Misc > All written in Snape's POV
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 09 Jan 2008 / 09 Jan 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 09 Jan 2008 / 09 Jan 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: A Timely Drabble | 11 Apr 2008 |
| Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed) |
- Haha! Wasn't sure where this was going. Way to paint a clear picture in only 100 words!
Author's Response:
Thank you! It's been a while since I've written anything that short. (I used to only write very short stories, but then I discovered the joy of longer stories and novels.) It was fun to try it again.
A near tragedy and a shocking discovery lead two bitter enemies to much soul searching and eventual acceptance of each other. Much angst along the way though. Some Ginny and Harry.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Character Death, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 43 - Completed: No - Updated: 01 Aug 2010 / 14 Jan 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 43 - Completed: No - Updated: 01 Aug 2010 / 14 Jan 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Severus Snape and the Foolish Old Man. | 16 Jun 2008 |
| Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed) |
- Oh trust me! You still have my attention! A good chapter! It was really funny to see an event happening that also happened in the other books, yet things were going on so differently behind the scenes with Harry's presence. Good work- please keep writing! I hope to see a lot of Harry/ Severus interaction this time!
Author's Response:
It is really lovely gwtting all thesereviews from hitherto unknown readers. Thak you waterleaves, it is lovely to know that you have been reading and enjoying the story.
I don't really know what the problem is. I have pelnty of hits, but compared to a lot of stories out there, my reviews are practically non-existent. So I am becoming a little paranoid. But the reviews for this chapter have definitely picked up.
Don't worry, Harry refuses to stay behind the scenes for vey long. He'll be back.
~Lesley~
| Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Setback. | 02 Jul 2008 |
| Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed) |
- Two minor typos I saw-
‘fool's rush in where angel's fear to tread' persona' I think you mean fools and angels without the apostrophe.
And again here- Kid's mouthed off all the time. I think you just wanted the plural without the apostrophe
Theres also something weird about the formatting here, so that I'm not sure if this is actually intended to be dialogue or not because it doesn't have quotation marks >>Time apart from me might enable you to ponder the future with me as your father. You don't appear to be willing to separate the past from the present.
Author's Response:
You are right of course. Unfortunately, I don't pick everything up when I reread the chapter. And the last was dialogue. Sorry.
But apart from pointing out the mistakes, did you enjoy the chapter?
~Lesley~
| Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Setback. | 05 Jul 2008 |
| Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed) |
- Waterleaves again! I'm sorry you had to worry if I liked it- my review originally had another mini paragraph underneath that said that I loved it and just general things that I thought were awesome! No idea how it didn't get included into my real review!
Anyway- killer little cliffhanger! I hope Snape handles it with grace and is veryyy reassuring even if he is still semi-furious. I like the idea that Snape isn't just trying to be mean to Harry or something, he genuinely needs Harry to realize whether he wants this relationship or not. And Harry's struggles over using the floo-box gift! Awww soo heartwarming and classic Harry! Great stuff- can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for getting back to me and reassuring me that you liked the chapter. I am glad.
Sorry about the cliffie.
Lesley~
| Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Ginny's Dilemma. | 16 Aug 2008 |
| Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed) |
- Ohhh Harry don't you see? Haha I love this scene and the way all the Weasleys are so eager to defend Harry. I cant wait for him and Ginny to work it out- and of course it's nice for someone else to have an embarrassing relative other than Harry for once!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. The Weasley's would defend Harry to the hilt. After all, Mrs Weasley said the summer before that Harry was as good as a son to her.And I am sure Arthur feels the same.
Never fear, I am sure that HArry will be able to calm Ginny down. And though Muriel is an obnoxious old bat, she still doesn't top Petunia and Vernon. Muriel hasn't beaten her neice and nephews. She just doesn't know when to shut her mouth.
Hope to hear from you again,
~LesleY~