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After Voldemort's defeat, Severus and Harry struggle to overcome the shadows he left behind. Sequel to Lily's Charm.
Takes Place: 7th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by waterleaves
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Alcohol Use, Character Death, Profanity, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 39 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 08 Mar 2009 / 23 Apr 2008
Series: Lily's Charm - Challenges: None
Chapters: 39 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 08 Mar 2009 / 23 Apr 2008
Series: Lily's Charm - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Betrayal | 02 Jul 2008 |
| Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed) |
- Ohhhh boy! This is gunna be a biggie! Uttto! I hope they can make it through! Your idea of having them each see what they wanted most was really interesting and amazing. Poor Sirius is about to get his world rocked.. and if Harry's there for that? ohhh boyyy! Good work
Author's Response: Thanks! That was one of the most fun chapters! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :o)
| Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Dancing | 12 Jul 2008 |
| Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed) |
- Oh boy! This is going to get wild! I'm glad that Harry isn't just being blinded to the complicated relationships around him just because Sirius is back. Though I will feel awful if Sirius thinks that Harry doesn't love him anymore or something like that! Haha I just can't wait for a time when Harry has room in his life for all three of those superrr important men! Another good chapter- loved it! I also liked that you had Harry reach the final conclusion on his own- it adds more power to it!
| Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Quaffle | 14 Aug 2008 |
| Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed) |
- Oh baby! Snape is getting ready to snap! Strong chapter! Sirius is causing such harm while he tries to get it together. And Remus! I hope it works out with Tonks! Oh boy this is all intense! Good chapter! Please keep updating!
| Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Impact | 03 Sep 2008 |
| Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed) |
- AW AW AWWWW! Love it! Such a great ending! I love the way Remus is such a good friend to them both! And the scene where Severus thinks Remus is trying to hug him was absolutely beyond hysterical!
Author's Response: Thanks Waterleaves! And thanks for being my 200th reviewers *squashes you with a hug* I do love Remus. He's such a great guy and yeah, Severus being hugged by Remus would be pretty scary for Sev. LOL :oP
| Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Either, Or | 03 Sep 2008 |
| Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed) |
- OH MY GOD! TALK ABOUT A CLIFFIE! THATS INSANE! ahhhhh! wow! I cannot wait for the next installment! I am very veryyy worried now! This is nuts! Ahh update again soon!
| Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Harry's First Holiday | 15 Sep 2008 |
| Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed) |
- HAHAHA! The ending was an absolute riot! I love the way you touched on so many of their issues! this vacation will definitely be jam-packed with emotional revelations I hope. I liked Harry trying to describe the urge to follow Sirius, and the beginning section from the past was so beautiful and gut-wrenching! I really enjoyed baby Harry! Another great piece dear!
| Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Crash | 02 Oct 2008 |
| Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed) |
- I'm sorry for your loss!
Great work on this chapter. I think Harry has a much better understanding of his father's discipline issues now. It was also good for them to realize that there never will be the classic father son discipline situation between them with juvenile grounding and temper tantrums. Great work. The sand castle comments were also really great since readers have seen the other memory from the beach. I also particularly loved Harry's question about if James wanted his own family- stupid me hadn't even considered that!
Hope the muses get back to work fast and make things easy for you!
Author's Response: Thanks Waterleaves. I"m glad you enjoyed the chapter so much. And yep, these two will never be like a regular father and son, and Harry I think, is finally accepting that. It does make what they have any less, so it's okay. It's actually much better, in so many ways. Thanks for reviewing. Oh, and yeah, I enjoyed the sand castle bits and I'm glad you noticed the tie-back to the previous chapter. And James was a great person in the end there, wasn't he? :o)
| Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Pride and Prejudices | 11 Oct 2008 |
| Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed) |
- Aww excellent! I wonder where Harry's going. The entire idea of the box and all the letters is so realistic and great. I love the way Snape and Hedwig have reached an understanding! Excellent update!
| Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: A Serpent's Clothing | 02 Nov 2008 |
| Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed) |
- Aww lovely lovely! I like the way Harry didn't fly off the handle over August and Ginny showed that she can handle herself. Excellent chapter!
| Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Friends and Lovers | 07 Nov 2008 |
| Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed) |
- Wow I love this transition! And such a cliffhanger with Sirius! I can't wait to see how Remus treats Tonks now and if anything has changed. It was also sweet to see Ginny and Hermione protecting Harry and the more mature Harry was acting in the Great Hall compared to the time of his 'possession'. Excellent update! I can't wait to see how everyone settles back in!
Author's Response:
Thanks Waterleaves! I'm glad you liked the chapter. LOL And yeah, I figured it was time for another cliffie. :o) Remus and Tonks certainly do have much to talk about, don't they? Ginny and Hermione are both pretty fierce females, in their own ways. I love them being protective. Thanks so much for the review. I'll update soon, I hope!