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Response to my own challenge. Harry and Snape meet in the Hogwart's Kitchens. Why, how and what?
Takes Place: 7th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Misc
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by trust severus spy
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 02 Jul 2007 / 02 Jul 2007
Series: None - Challenges: Hogwart's Kitchens
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 02 Jul 2007 / 02 Jul 2007
Series: None - Challenges: Hogwart's Kitchens
| Title: Chapter 1: Whipped cream and strawberries | 07 May 2008 |
| Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) |
- Rather liked this! As frothy, light & delightful as the ingredients of your title! (You really should correct "recipy" to recipe, though. No offense; somebody else noticed it, too.)
The summer after 5th year, Death Eaters find Harry abandoned in the Dursley house and bring him to Voldemort. Will one particular Death Eater give up his position and his hate to save his enemy's child? Eventual Snape mentors Harry fic.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity, Rape, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 43 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 05 Nov 2007 / 23 Jul 2007
Series: Walk the Shadows - Challenges: None
Chapters: 43 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 05 Nov 2007 / 23 Jul 2007
Series: Walk the Shadows - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 | 28 May 2008 |
| Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) |
- Thank you! for letting Severus save him.
| Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 | 28 May 2008 |
| Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) |
- Inspired last line! You're really good, y'know?
| Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 | 28 May 2008 |
| Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) |
- Well done, well done chapter, indeed.
| Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 | 28 May 2008 |
| Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) |
- I really like the way you delineate Severus' feelings. I like your explanations of his understanding of Harry. Well done.
| Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 | 28 May 2008 |
| Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) |
- You did a really good job depicting "normal" family life for Harry and Severus. Their emotions and responses are very believable. Great work!
| Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 | 28 May 2008 |
| Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) |
- You do SUCH a good job making both Severus and Harry believable. You're quite a wonderful writer!
| Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 | 28 May 2008 |
| Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) |
- You DO have a way with a last line! I LOVE your humor!
| Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 | 26 Jun 2008 |
| Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) |
- Best chapter yet! And they've all been good!
| Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 | 17 Oct 2008 |
| Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) |
- I realize you wrote this some time ago. (Excellent chapter, by the way!)
I have merely a small correction to observe.
The possessive "thy" gets changed to "thine" when used before a word beginning with a vowel. (Same with "my" to "mine".)
So third sentence down AFTER Harry's journal entry, the sentence would more properly read, "Snape looked up, 'Know thyself and know thine enemy'."
(Think of "Mine eyes have seen the glory...")
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! As for the thy/thine: I knew it didn't sound right when I wrote it. Hmph. Thankfully, it's a quick fix. :) Hope you get a chance to finish the story and start the sequel!