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Whelp II -- The Wrath of Snape by jharad17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 340]
Soon after rescuing 7-year-old Harry from the abusive Dursleys, Severus Snape starts his teaching career at Hogwarts. Harry finds even more ways to surprise his father, the Headmaster, and a school full of students. Snape'll have his hands full, raising and protecting his son.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic, Kidnapped, Snape-meets-Dursleys, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Violence
Chapters: 24 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 17 Oct 2008 / 08 Sep 2007
Series: A Boy Called Whelp - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 17 Jul 2008
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed)
    You've got us worried, now! PLEEZE, can we have another chapter soon, so we can find out what happens with Sirius?!
    (In the meantime, hope your summer's going well!)

Evolution by Twinheart starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 102]
SEQUEL TO EQUILIBIRUM : A mentoring relationship is developing between young wizard Harry Potter and his dour Potions Professor, Severus Snape; but away from Hogwarts, Harry’s life is not all it seems. Summer before Year Two.

Takes Place: 2nd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Evil!Albus, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 17 - Completed: No - Updated: 26 Oct 2008 / 09 Sep 2007
Series: Equilibrium and Evolution - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 21 Aug 2008
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed)
    Oh, if I could give you a "20" for this beautiful, beautifully written chapter, I would.

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 16 Oct 2008
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed)
    Since you'd mentioned Harry's album of pictures hidden under the floorboards in the previous chapter, I was surprised when you didn't include them here. It seemed like Harry should've mentioned it when Snape asked him "Anything else?"
    (By the way--good chapter!)

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 17 Oct 2008
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed)
    Dammit, I had written a LOVELY review, but it got lost somehow, when the evil wizards in the ether mischievously removed my sign-in, and POOF!
    Well, let me give you the "10" you so richly deserve here, and I'll try to reproduce what I'd written.

    I REALLY LOVED the second half especially, with Flitwick and McGonagall! Your throwaway line, "...the rumored sightings of Irma Pince and Argus Filch, reportedly observed sharing a cozy tryst at Madam Puddifoot's the previous weekend", was deliciously funny!
    Who knew the giant squid had such a weakness for toast? Delightful! And I relished the phrase: "...shared the languid task of tossing the treats to the nearest glistening wet tentacle that trembled in squelchy anticipation."
    Delicious writing! Keep it up!

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 26 Oct 2008
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed)
    What an entertaining story! I really enjoy your vision of Snape and Harry. This is coming along quite nicely.
    A very minor correction: It's 'either/or - neither/nor'. So when Snape is asking Harry what disguise he wishes to keep to, 'or' should be changed to 'nor' in: "No one has seen us yet, except for Mercup, of course, and he will neither care nor comment if we change."

One More Such Victory by Branwyn starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 39]
After the Battle of Hogwarts, Harry has one last job to do.

Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: T - Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 15 Sep 2007 / 15 Sep 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: One More Such Victory 25 Jul 2008
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed)
    Oh, I love this story, simply love it. What a wonderful thing to imagine.
    You did it very well. I shall "favorite" this.

Past Featured Story Emerald Eyes by Jade_Sullivan starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 491]
After Harry is caught for exploding a cauldron in 2nd year Potions, Snape insists he keep a firm hand on the boy he must secretly protect. However, he discoveres that there is more to the twelve year old than unruliness and disrespect. Similarly, Harry learns from and gains a new perspective of his professor.

Takes Place: 2nd Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Stern
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Profanity
Chapters: 32 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 17 Jun 2008 / 25 Sep 2007
Series: Emerald Eyes - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 02 May 2008
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed)
    Hurry, hurry, hurry, hurry, hurry, hurry, hurry!! Now that I've finally gotten to your last chapter (with none already waiting), I'm chewing on my fingernails as pitifully as little Harry!
    Seriously? Keep up the good work!

    Author's Response:

    LOL..Poor Harry and his nibbling habits. ;)  I'm so glad you're enjoying my story.  Thanks for sticking through all twenty-eight chapters!  I've got the next chapter planned out and will begin working on it soon! 

    Thanks for taking the time to leave a review!


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 29 Apr 2008
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed)
    I realize you wrote this months ago, so my criticism here is probably moot. Nevertheless, it seemed to me that as Potions Master, Professor Snape would have used the entire chemical name as in "It is only hydrogen peroxide", rather than the more common abbreviational use of just "peroxide". He never forgets his role as teacher--that's what you're showing us here, after all--and I believe he would consider it sloppy and unprofessional not to use its proper name.

    Author's Response: Noted and adjusted.  Thanks for pointing it out!

My Son by Terri starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 117]
Severitus - Snape knows he is Harry’s father, but his desperate attempts to gain custody fail. He vows that he will protect his son, by any means.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Child fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 17 - Completed: No - Updated: 15 Apr 2020 / 04 Nov 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 12 Sep 2008
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed)
    Wow! Great way to show how powerful little Harry--oops--"Rys" IS!

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 12 Sep 2008
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed)
    Damn, this is good! Keep writing--please!


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