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| Happily married for 20 years, this coming October. Two lovely daughters, four lovely grandkids. I always knew Snape was the most interesting character in the series! I love good writing, especially with good spelling and good grammar. [Report This]
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Interesting ending. I liked this story very much.
These lines contain the real magic, psychologically: "Another man's seed," Lily mused. "Your seed. James Potter's wife round and full of Severus Snape's child." Her words were soft and despite her promise of no magic there was a kind of thrill to them that ran along Snape's spine and made him quiver.
You have done a terrific job with this story. I like it VERY much.
I love you for having made Severus cry--and most of all, for having it be believable. This was a very heartfelt chapter. Well done, indeed.
"Where do you get your energy?" "Sausages?" Loved it!
In the phrase "...for just a moment as her image began to fade Snape imagined he saw one other image in the mirror, a lean brown hand that rested on her shoulder. She almost appeared to be laying her cheek to the back of that hand," is the hand supposed to be Severus'? Do tell...
You do Snape-as-Remus quite nicely. It'll be interesting to see how Snape handles himself once he sees Harry's real life with the Dursleys.
As Count Floyd of SCTV would've said, "Pretty scary, eh kids?" Yes, it actually is!
Title: Chapter 29: Long After Midnight
| 12 May 2008
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Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed)
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My God, but you're a hell of a writer! I wept out loud with Harry, unable to stop reading--or crying. You led us readers right through to that sweet, funny ending. Your skills are nothing short of amazing!
Title: Chapter 29: Long After Midnight
| 12 May 2008
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Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed)
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I'd already written a heartfelt review of how truly excellent I found you, your writing, and this chapter. However, I'd neglected to give it the "10" it deserved--so here it is!
Absolutely LOVED the laugh Severus got, imagining making Dudley pee in his pants!
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