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Happily married for 20 years, this coming October. Two lovely daughters, four lovely grandkids. I always knew Snape was the most interesting character in the series! I love good writing, especially with good spelling and good grammar. [Report This]
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My favorite lines: "I wonder if you have to do something brave.."
Snape: "Something else, you mean?"
Perfect chapter.
Oh, what a wonderful chapter! Made me weep, with Severus'--with THEIR--breakthrough. Slowly, painfully, however clumsily it may happen, it's wonderful to see it. Thank you.
Thank you SO much for these chapters. It's really nice you've been able to write some more--we've missed your excellent work! Thank you, again!
Excellent chapter! Keep on keepin' on!
"Umbridge's meowing hellhole of an office"--great phrase!
"Well, Harry, that sounds more like Snape being a teacher than anything else," Harry says. "Why did his reaction surprise you?"
I think you meant not for Harry, but for HERMIONE to be the person speaking here. It's 61 lines up from the bottom.
Glad to help.
Oh, what a beautiful chapter. You have outdone yourself with this depiction of growth and communication with both of them. A touching, deeply moving chapter. One of your best ever. Thank you. I'd give you a "20" if I could.
This is so beautiful. Painful, yet painfully beautiful. I'm glad I lost touch with your story and just reread the last three chapters tonight. Thank you for not having abandoned this story; thank you for writing it with such depth of feeling. Another "10" for you!
Great ending! I love that photo of the four of them: it's the cherry atop the sundae. Thanks for all your work, it was a really good story, and thanks for having finished it.
Great ending! I love that photo of the four of them: it's the cherry atop the sundae. Thanks for all your work, it was a really good story, and thanks for having finished it.
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