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Title: Chapter 12: Cup of Wonders
| 13 Aug 2009
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Reviewer: MilkaZen (Signed)
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Since it's a fae cup, shouldn't they be able to unbind harry from the tournament?
Very nice chapter. I like the story of the cup ^_^
thnak you
Author's Response: No, because there are certain rules that even the fae have to follow, and given the way the wizards used the cup in the tournament, as a binder of contracts, there's no way they can un do it Much as they would like to. Thanks, I'm so glad you liked it! BTW I've updated my other story, Two hawks Hunting also.
Title: Chapter 16: A New Dueling Club
| 11 Sep 2009
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Reviewer: MilkaZen (Signed)
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The detention was well found lol and i like this improved dueling club lol
Thanks
Author's Response: You're welcome! The dueling club will be meeting again soon!
Title: Chapter 10: In the Forest of the Night
| 26 Jun 2009
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Reviewer: MilkaZen (Signed)
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Well, if the wolfens seem to hate wizards i have the feeling that they hate werewolves more lol so i guess if Harry and Severus explain things well it should be ok ^_^
Thanks for the chapter ^_^
Author's Response: Yup they definitely need to talk with Darkmoon and his buddies in order to make sure the wolfen don't attack them. Or Hedwig. They really detest werewolves though, you'll see why. You're welcome!
Title: Chapter 15: Herbology Lessons
| 25 Jul 2009
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Reviewer: MilkaZen (Signed)
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It was nice to get some news about Vince ^_^
Thank you
Author's Response: You're welcome! He'll be appearing more later.
Title: Chapter 22: Fallen
| 15 Aug 2009
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Reviewer: MilkaZen (Signed)
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I might forgive you for the horrible cliffie but you better find a way for Severus to live :p
Thanks for the chapter and now I will wait for the next one with even less patience lol
Author's Response: I will try and write really fast so you can find out what happens.
Title: Chapter 24: Witherspoon's Rescue
| 21 Aug 2009
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Reviewer: MilkaZen (Signed)
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I'm sure that with such an incentive Harry will brew the Curse Dissolving Poton perfectly lol I think that the most he will be able to do is to convince Hedwig to drop the dagger in the potion lol
Thanks
Author's Response: Oh yes, he will prove himself next chapter. Hedwig will require a good deal of convincing given what the dagger has done to harry.
Title: Chapter 25: A True Apprentice
| 24 Aug 2009
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Reviewer: MilkaZen (Signed)
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I think the best way about it is to ask Hedwig to drop the dagger in the potion lol
Thanks for the chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and your idea!
Title: Chapter 26: Winning Over Hedwig
| 27 Aug 2009
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Reviewer: MilkaZen (Signed)
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Well, I was right in saying that Hedwig would suggest to drop the dagger in the potion herself ^_^
That was beautifully wrote.
Thanks.
Author's Response: You were, and that was a great guess. Thanks and hope you'll enjoy the next part i have posted.
Title: Chapter 28: A Reader's Advice
| 06 Sep 2009
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Reviewer: MilkaZen (Signed)
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Just the talk or something about a ritual too?
Thanks for the chapter. I hope the talk goes without too much hurt ^_^
Author's Response: No, the ritual will be in there. That's a major part of the next chappie. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 29: The Ritual of Renewal
| 07 Sep 2009
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Reviewer: MilkaZen (Signed)
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Well done!
Thanks.
Author's Response: You're welcome. Glad you're enjoying it!
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