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Thirteen-year-old Harry is forced into the body of another Harry in a parallel world, where Snape adopted him years ago. And Snape is enraged to discover that his son has been replaced by a stranger. In our world, Snape discovers a new Harry--one who sees him as a father he never wanted to be. Each Harry must learn to survive in a strange new world, and search for a way home.

Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 24 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 02 Feb 2011 / 20 Dec 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Unspoken Words 02 Feb 2011
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed)
    OK - so I am all chocked up by this chapter!! Thank you so much for giving us this look at 2 wonderful Snapes and 2 wonderful Harrys. I feel the cautious hope that OUR two have at the end of this story. How wonderful that Snape is finally able to ask Harry POTTER for help!

    I will be rereading from the beginning again, to savor the whole experience again - my box of tissues at my elbow!!!

    Author's Response:

    How nice that you're going to reread it!  That's wonderful.  Here's to good reading, and plentiful boxes of tissues:  IK IK 

     

    :)


When Severus Snape finds a certain brat-who-lived out after curfew the year after Voldemort's return, it starts a chain of events that he wouldn't have imagined in his wildest dreams. Or nightmares.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Torture
Chapters: 52 - Completed: No - Updated: 27 Oct 2011 / 29 Dec 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: In the Middle of the Night 12 Apr 2009
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed)
    Yayyy! An update!!!! (chapter 42!) This is one of the first stories I found and bookmarked when I started reading HP/SS fanfic - to celebrate I am going to do a reread and leave you squeeeing reviews, as I should have the first time I read!

    I love the Harry you are giving us in this story! I am not so sure JKR would have given us a Harry/Slytherin comfort moment, but that would be because she never presented us with a Slytherin who wasn't a despicable, semi-literate Death Eater in training. I loved how he talked to Micah, and I really love how Snape stayed quiet and just listened. He heard a little about Harry's homelife although believing is going to be hard I am sure!

Title: Chapter 3: Through the Jungle of Doubt 12 Apr 2009
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed)
    Our boys in Brazil!!! This whole part of the story in the jungle is fascinating! I enjoy seeing them learn to work together to stay alive. Having Snape's perspective on the adventure is a special treat - I like seeing through Harry's eyes but my favorite view is through Snape's. You do a wonderful job giving us the Potions Master, in character and snarky as always!!

Title: Chapter 5: I Know I'm Searching for Something 13 Apr 2009
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed)
    I am enjoying these chapters so much - the excitement of the Wyrsa hunting our 2 wizards and their attempts to stop them (like rotten fruit will work!) I also like the gradual sharing that is going on - Harry talking a bit about his family and growing up with the Dursleys. Snape is still not quite understanding what he is hearing, but he will eventually figure it out!

Title: Chapter 7: That It Can Only Be Seen 13 Apr 2009
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed)
    I love these jungle chapters!!! Imagining walking on the massive tree limbs up in the crowns of the trees is such fun! Your descriptions are very evocative. I am glad, of course, that our boys have found some civilization - I do think Snape needs a break from chatty teenage Gryffindors!

Title: Chapter 8: By the Eyes of the Blind 13 Apr 2009
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed)
    Ahhhh... things are starting to become clear to the brilliant spy... finally. Such an emotional occlumency session for both of them. I hope they can forgive each other very quickly!

    I have to tell you I am also enjoying your description of the poison/antidote work Snape is doing. Being a liberal arts type of person I have NO IDEA if what you are presenting as the steps for determining an antidote are true, but it sure seems like the way to go about it!!!

    A great chapter!

Title: Chapter 10: I'm Not Sure about a Life After This 13 Apr 2009
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed)
    Our Potions Master comes through, hooray!!! Not only for poor Pedro, but for Harry as well. I am so happy that they have come to an understanding of sorts during this jungle trek. Keeping the understanding once back in Hogwarts WILL be difficult I am sure!

Title: Chapter 11: God Knows I've Never Been a Spiritual Man 13 Apr 2009
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed)
    I like your Moody so very much! He is more than just a figure of fun - he is competent, experienced, and sharp. He and Snape would have issues, understandably, but I can see them respecting each others different capabilities.

    I also liked that you gave the Auror a reason that was understandable for his actions. There must have been any number of fighters for the side of light who had to deal with those they felt were responsible for the deaths of family members - and there would probably have been terrible retribution at times. This is a much more realistic presentation of the horrors of war and terrorism.

    Great chapter - not fluffy, but meaty!

Title: Chapter 14: In the Middle of the Night 14 Apr 2009
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed)
    I enjoy Snape's and Minerva's relationship in your story. She has more of a sense of humor than you usually see, and she treats him more like a valued colleague. Their exchange was quite fun to read!


    I like how IC you keep Snape in this story, and yet allow him to begin to sympathize with Harry!

Title: Chapter 16: Through the Desert of Truth 14 Apr 2009
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed)
    Things are hopping for our boys, even at Hogwarts! I like that Severus has a sneaking regard for Hagrid - that he can appreciate Hagrid's big heart is a good sign. Now if only he could find out what Harry is doing - know Harry it will turn out to be far more dangerous than it originally looked!


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