Slytherin!
Sequel to "Harry's First Detention" - read that first, please!
Takes Place: 1st Year
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by LuKat
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 64 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 21 Nov 2009 / 24 Sep 2008
Series: Harry's First Detention - Challenges: None
Chapters: 64 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 21 Nov 2009 / 24 Sep 2008
Series: Harry's First Detention - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46 | 29 Jun 2009 |
| Reviewer: LuKat (Signed) |
- I love Minerva in this story! She is stern on the outside, but a bit of a marshmallow on this inside at times. I also like hearing her thoughts on Snape the student - the image of him chewing his quills absentmindedly is so endearing! Her "detention" with Harry is just perfect!
| Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47 | 11 Jul 2009 |
| Reviewer: LuKat (Signed) |
- How wise of Severus to tote along potions for all sorts of conditions - one for calming enraged wizards, and one for indigestion!!! Harry was wise to decide to go to Snape before cutting up his hand anymore - I love how there is such trust there now!!
I loved how you worked in Umbridge, and her final depature into the story!
| Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48 | 11 Jul 2009 |
| Reviewer: LuKat (Signed) |
- Things are always exciting around Harry, aren't they?!?! If it isn't deranged DADA teachers we have sneeky house elves and now voices!!! Poor Severus, he can't cut a break this year, can he?!
| Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49 | 11 Jul 2009 |
| Reviewer: LuKat (Signed) |
- How fun that Harry and Snape have really slid into the parent/child relationship, right down to the non-stop whining to get something from the Dad!!! Harry must feel really comfortable with Snape to be so cheeky. I think the professor had better watch out, his reputation is going to be destroyed if he isn't careful!
I also like the image of Voldie gnashing his incorporeal teeth!!! Of course, now we have to worry about a certain snake maybe biting a certain Potions Master (please don't make me cry like I did when I read DH!!!)
Loved this chappie!
| Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50 | 11 Jul 2009 |
| Reviewer: LuKat (Signed) |
- Foolish snake, thinking Harry would let anyone hurt his Da!!! Thank you for NOT making me cry, like DH did! I am glad to see that Old Voldie has fewer and fewer helpers left now. It would be nice, of course, for Harry to have Voldie dispatched soon so he can enjoy the rest of his Hogwarts schooling without the annual near death experience!
Great chapter!
| Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51 | 12 Jul 2009 |
| Reviewer: LuKat (Signed) |
- How different the Horcrux hunt will be this time, with Albus and Minerva doing it! Somehow I imagine that Severus will still find himself dealing with one or two of them, because he will be with that trouble magnet Harry!
As always, I loved the heart to heart that Harry and his Da had. Snape's plan for Harry to have lessons all summer certainly is evil - and yet he knows just how to present it so that Harry is now wild to begin. Slytherin cunning wins again!
I can't wait to see where you imagination takes us next!
| Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52 | 21 Nov 2009 |
| Reviewer: LuKat (Signed) |
- I love watching Snape out Slytherin a Slytherin!!! He is certainly drawing a tight circle of protection around his brat! I laughed out loud at the scene he walked into at Hogwarts when he finally got home - I can just imagine the huge amounts of junk food strewn about - with a dish or two of veggies for Hermione!
I am glad that you are bringing all of the story over to P&S - I have read it on fanfic already, but like the type face and size here so much better. I like to reread it here again and again!!
| Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53 | 22 Nov 2009 |
| Reviewer: LuKat (Signed) |
- I liked seeing Brunhilde and her nephews - and I really liked that she "reassured" the Professor about wanting to see him some more!!! Of course, Kreacher will do an excellent job at keeping the Dursleys on their toes - and that really does not bother me!
Here is hoping that Harry's rest of summer is fun, but not quite as exciting as this!
| Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54 | 22 Nov 2009 |
| Reviewer: LuKat (Signed) |
- Cute little black puppy ripping away at the Potion's Master pants and robe - could only be Sirius! I love how the adults are acting more like kids than the kids - Severus teaching Harry new hexes, Remus pretending not to see what Harry is doing, and Sirius loving having a mini-Marauder. Thank goodness Minerva is around to get all the boys to toe the line!
Great chapter!
| Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55 | 22 Nov 2009 |
| Reviewer: LuKat (Signed) |
- Someday I would LOVE to read a blow by blow description of the 6th year/Sirius match up!! I am happy that Minerva and Dumbledore are out and about getting rid of horcruxes, but the Resurrection Stone was very important in canon - and now I am a bit afraid for our Harry!!