Sequel to "Harry's First Detention" - read that first, please!
Takes Place: 1st Year
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
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Membership status: Member
Reviews by LuKat
Sequel to "Harry's First Detention" - read that first, please!
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 64 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 21 Nov 2009 / 24 Sep 2008 Series: Harry's First Detention - Challenges: None
Great chapter!
This cannot be good for Harry and his Da!
(Too distraught to write anything else!!)
Fabulous chapter!!
I know you are busy now with your daughter, as it should be. Only the best to you and your family! I hope you will in the future work on your writing again - you do have the talent! Thanks again for a wonderful year of Harry and Severus enjoyment! COMPLETE. Family isn't everything, as Harry, Snape, and Draco discover in this sequel to A Year Like None Other. How will a mysterious mirror and a surprising new relationship affect a father and his two sons?
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Adoption, Slytherin!Harry, SuperPower! Harry Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Character Death, Self-harm
Chapters: 24 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 21 Dec 2008 / 21 Dec 2008 Series: A Year Like None Other - Challenges: None
I love this series. Your take on Snape and Harry are just spot on - there are, of course, the differences based on your Snape backstory compared to canon, but even so it is really just an AU difference, not OOC. I have to admit to not staying with stories where Draco becomes a main sympathetic character - except for this series. You have made his transition and growth seem very plausible and natural. I am willing to follow him in your story where other stories of his redemption - whether from the very beginning or later on - just irk me! I hope you understand that the fact that I prefer your Harry voice to the Draco voice probably stems from this pretty universal dislike I have of Draco presented in the Potterverse (and a lot of other fanfic.) After all, you have made him very like canon Draco and some of his thoughts and actions are still irritating to me! A part of me also selfishly wants Harry to have Snape ALL TO HIMSELF - but I can see that to Harry having a brother he can trust and rely on is just as important as finally having a father. In this case I am glad that Harry now has what he wants and needs! I am glad also that over the Summer Hermione and Ron have come around to Snape as Harry's dad, and are getting adjusted to Draco as Harry's brother. Their support and caring for Harry in the past were so important to him, and I am glad to see that they are willing to adjust because he is happy where he is and with the family he finally has. Such a great story, and a wonderful series!! I am now following AYLNO, and so very happy that you are filling that with new, interesting characters and plot! Thanks for many hours of great reading (and rereading!) |
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