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Sequel to "Harry's First Detention" - read that first, please!

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 64 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 21 Nov 2009 / 24 Sep 2008
Series: Harry's First Detention - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56 22 Nov 2009
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed)
    I love Luna here! She understands so much better than anyone else - ya gotta lover her! Nice touch having the Ravenclaw ghost go to a Ravenclaw to reveal the horcrux.

    Great chapter!

Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57 22 Nov 2009
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed)
    I am so happy that Harry now officially has a Da!! As usual they look at the same event and initially see it two very different ways - nice to see that it doesn't take quite so long for them to get past these misunderstnadings! Bring on the party!!

Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58 22 Nov 2009
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed)
    Two horcruxes in one chapter - they are certainly on a roll! I have to admit to a certain fondness for Kreacher - he is nothing if not unswerving in his loyalty. Good thing the Pastry Guy didn't realize this and take advantage of him!

Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59 22 Nov 2009
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed)
    Ahhhh Lucius, what a mess you have made...

    This cannot be good for Harry and his Da!

Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60 22 Nov 2009
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed)
    Noooo!!!!

    (Too distraught to write anything else!!)

Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61 22 Nov 2009
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed)
    I am so glad the rescue squad is on the way, in spite of knowing that Harry died. Having the house elves help is inspired! Sure hope those little guys have a chance at the Dark Lord(ess).

Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62 22 Nov 2009
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed)
    Thank you! Thank you! I should have known you would not permanently kill Harry off, but without all the Hallows I could'nt figure out how he would be able to return!!! His time with his folks was just right - and you actually got me liking James, which doesn't happen in too many fics (I am such a Snape fan!)

Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63 22 Nov 2009
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed)
    Such an exciting chapter - and a great battle! I couldn't help smiling throught most of it - particularly the scene with Harry passing around his folks greetings to every one!

    Fabulous chapter!!

Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64 22 Nov 2009
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed)
    I LOVE this story - humor, angst, evil pastry guys, snarky Da's... it has it all!!!

    I know you are busy now with your daughter, as it should be. Only the best to you and your family! I hope you will in the future work on your writing again - you do have the talent! Thanks again for a wonderful year of Harry and Severus enjoyment!

COMPLETE. Family isn't everything, as Harry, Snape, and Draco discover in this sequel to A Year Like None Other. How will a mysterious mirror and a surprising new relationship affect a father and his two sons?

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Slytherin!Harry, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Character Death, Self-harm
Chapters: 24 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 21 Dec 2008 / 21 Dec 2008
Series: A Year Like None Other - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 24: Aftermath 02 Feb 2009
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed)
    Thank you for bringing this story over here - my third read was so much easier with the type face here!

    I love this series. Your take on Snape and Harry are just spot on - there are, of course, the differences based on your Snape backstory compared to canon, but even so it is really just an AU difference, not OOC.

    I have to admit to not staying with stories where Draco becomes a main sympathetic character - except for this series. You have made his transition and growth seem very plausible and natural. I am willing to follow him in your story where other stories of his redemption - whether from the very beginning or later on - just irk me!
    I hope you understand that the fact that I prefer your Harry voice to the Draco voice probably stems from this pretty universal dislike I have of Draco presented in the Potterverse (and a lot of other fanfic.) After all, you have made him very like canon Draco and some of his thoughts and actions are still irritating to me! A part of me also selfishly wants Harry to have Snape ALL TO HIMSELF - but I can see that to Harry having a brother he can trust and rely on is just as important as finally having a father. In this case I am glad that Harry now has what he wants and needs!

    I am glad also that over the Summer Hermione and Ron have come around to Snape as Harry's dad, and are getting adjusted to Draco as Harry's brother. Their support and caring for Harry in the past were so important to him, and I am glad to see that they are willing to adjust because he is happy where he is and with the family he finally has.

    Such a great story, and a wonderful series!! I am now following AYLNO, and so very happy that you are filling that with new, interesting characters and plot! Thanks for many hours of great reading (and rereading!)


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