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Harry is eight years old and is sent to live with Snape. Will Snape ever lighten up enough to notice Harry's problems? Abused!Harry, Guardian!Severus, No slash.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11)
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Child fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by BladesoftheValkyrie
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect
Chapters: 21 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 Aug 2009 / 20 Aug 2006
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 21 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 Aug 2009 / 20 Aug 2006
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen | 19 Jul 2008 |
| Reviewer: BladesoftheValkyrie (Signed) |
- Wow! I usually try to stay away from sad stories, but this one has definitely captured my attention. I'm completely in love with your portrayal of Harry and Snape, and I want so very badly to see them work everything out. Keep up the fantastic work! :)
After the demise of Voldemort, Harry accidentally time travels to the Marauders' time, spends some time there, spends a lot of time in the hospital wing, and changes the time line to finally find his own family. Completely AU.
Beta-ed by Breannatala, Re-post of the Original story (revised version)
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Resorting, Time Travel
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Beta-ed by Breannatala, Re-post of the Original story (revised version)
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Resorting, Time Travel
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 34 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 04 Oct 2007 / 04 Oct 2007
Series: The Changed Time Line - Challenges: None
Chapters: 34 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 04 Oct 2007 / 04 Oct 2007
Series: The Changed Time Line - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Prologue | 20 Jul 2008 |
| Reviewer: BladesoftheValkyrie (Signed) |
- You're betas seem to have done a fine job with spelling and grammatical errors, but I think they should help you rephrase some parts in your story. At the beginning of this chapter you used the term "brain battle" and I can think of several ways to say the same thing in a less awkward manner (such as mental battle, or even going into more detail and discussing occlumency). Some of Snape's dialog seems a little out of character as well. I realize you are not a native speaker, but that's what betas are for! :) Other than that, I think you have a good idea, and the fact that you finished such an epic story deserves recognition.
Harry receives a very special gift on his 16th birthday that leads him to the help he needs...Snape is finding respite from his growing pressures and discovers one in need of help. Despite himself, he finds he CAN grow close to another living being. Only..."everything would've been so much simpler if it'd actually been a cat"...
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Creature!fic, Kidnapped, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Creature!fic, Kidnapped, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 51 - Completed: No - Updated: 23 Dec 2010 / 09 Dec 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 51 - Completed: No - Updated: 23 Dec 2010 / 09 Dec 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10- Take it easy | 19 Jul 2008 |
| Reviewer: BladesoftheValkyrie (Signed) |
- Sadly, I cannot read French. :( I would love to read more of this, however! It is very interesting, and I find myself caught up in the story. Is there any chance of more of it becoming available in English in the near future? :)
Author's Response: thank you ! I'd like to say 'yes', but I've got no news of my translator so far... but well the chapter 34 will soon be available in French ;-p
| Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11- What soul, Severus ? | 02 Aug 2008 |
| Reviewer: BladesoftheValkyrie (Signed) |
- Another awesome chapter! The ending was especially touching, and I was happy to see that the Order would risk so much to rescue Severus if it became necessary. Keep up the fabulous work! ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you ! Harry was quite relieved too ;-)
| Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19-That Night | 03 Dec 2008 |
| Reviewer: BladesoftheValkyrie (Signed) |
- You didn't lose me! I still get very excited every time I see an update notice in my inbox, and I am looking forward to seeing where you go with this. I'm practially drooling at the thought of another 20 chapters. ^_^ Keep up the fantastic work!
Author's Response: I'm glad I didn't ! I'm working on chapter 40 right now, but I'll have to write faster if I want to actually have a christmas chapter for christmas... believe it or not, chapter 40 is still in september ! times is soooo slow !
| Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21-Dancing In the Haze | 22 Dec 2008 |
| Reviewer: BladesoftheValkyrie (Signed) |
- Dun dun dun...
Great work! Keep it up! ^_^
Author's Response: thank you ;-)
I wasn’t supposed to survive but I did and I opened my eyes to the last person on earth I wanted to see. And when I did he asked me if I wouldn’t survive for my son. And I never expected what came afterwards.
Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Child fic, Deaging, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Child fic, Deaging, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 5 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 08 Feb 2008 / 07 Feb 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 5 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 08 Feb 2008 / 07 Feb 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 5: Growing up | 19 Jul 2008 |
| Reviewer: BladesoftheValkyrie (Signed) |
- Very interesting! I don't think I've ever read a DH compliant pre-epilogue story before, and I really liked it. The last line really got to me, though - fantastic work!
Author's Response: Thanks! I am glad you had fun!
Harry has come into his inheritance. It is not all that he has hoped for.
Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic, Creature!fic, Deaging, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic, Creature!fic, Deaging, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 21 - Completed: No - Updated: 12 Nov 2008 / 01 Apr 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 21 - Completed: No - Updated: 12 Nov 2008 / 01 Apr 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 16: Hogwarts at Last | 18 Jul 2008 |
| Reviewer: BladesoftheValkyrie (Signed) |
- So, this fic is pretty much composed of awesome, down to its electrons. Can I look forward to sequel in the near future? I absolutely loved everything about it and would very much love to find out what happens next. Keep up the fantastic work! ^_^
| Title: Chapter 17: Welcoming Feast | 19 Jul 2008 |
| Reviewer: BladesoftheValkyrie (Signed) |
- An update already! *is excited* This was another great chapter! I love Lavender's reaction to Harry and Ginny's instinct to pick him up - priceless. ^_^ Keep up the fantastic work!
| Title: Chapter 18: Friends | 23 Jul 2008 |
| Reviewer: BladesoftheValkyrie (Signed) |
- Another amazing chapter - feel the love! ^_^