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After Harry cast the Sectumsempra spell on Malfoy in HBP, Snape sees it as his responsibility to make Harry feel the consequences. Will what follows change their relationship? The Story starts in the bathroom directly after the curse hit Malfoy and Snape rushed in and healed him. This version is written from Snape's perspective.

Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Misc > All written in Snape's POV
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 13 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 06 Mar 2009 / 30 Sep 2008
Series: Sectumsempra - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: Punishment 04 Oct 2008
Reviewer: jflame (Signed)
    Ouch, 10 strokes! I cant take more than 8, least Harry got to keep his bum covered. Still a good fic though, well done.

    Author's Response: Thanks for your feedback. It sounds as though you have experienced a caning yourself, you have my sympathies! Luckily I never have but I have heard it hurts A LOT!

When Harry and his new, pretty neighbor are rescued from Privet Drive on the eve of a Death Eater attack, Severus becomes Harry's reluctant guardian and healer in the weeks following. Old prejudices are challenged as Harry's new friend casts her own spell over Hogwarts' Potions Master.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 28 - Completed: No - Updated: 06 Dec 2008 / 10 Oct 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 04 Dec 2008
Reviewer: jflame (Signed)
    Wow! What have you done to Severus? He actually retrived Pumpkin? Aww thats sweet.
    As for that mental image of Erin over Severus' knee, mmmm I hope that there are plans for that to actually happen. She is a bit of a brat.
    I'm going to keep reading now, I can't believe you put up so many chapters in one night. Well done.

    Author's Response:

    Severus does have a heart lurking beneath those black robes..it is encased in ice though. The ice is beginning to crack and Sev is a tad out of his depth with Erin.

    Put yourself in Erin's shoes. I think you would be a bit of a brat as well if you were thrust into the unbelievable. Especially if the person charged with helping you come to terms with things was so very nasty all the time.

    Lesley


Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 04 Dec 2008
Reviewer: jflame (Signed)
    Umm how exactly can I comment when all words excape me. Wow!

    Author's Response:

    You are too, too kind. But thank you.

    Lesley


Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 04 Dec 2008
Reviewer: jflame (Signed)
    Well that was certainly eluminating. I kinda guessed that Dumbledore would offer Erin the Muggle studies position. I'm not normally one to guess in advance but if I may? Perhaps Severus and Erin tie the knot and obtain leagal gaurdianship of Harry?
    How does Hedwig feel about Harry spending so much time with Pumpkin anyway? Once again I say well done.

    Author's Response:

    Glad you are enjoying the story. I don't imagine Hedwig would be too thrilled if she actually encountered Pumpkin, but that's not very likely. She's around Crookshanks in canon and Crookshanks is often seen snuggling up to HArry. Hedwig isn't exactly a cuddly pet, is she?

    You'll have to wait and see what happens with our three major characters, I'm afraid.

    Thanks for your review.

    Lesley


Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 05 Dec 2008
Reviewer: jflame (Signed)
    I have been told that I made a mistake with the Frogs and I hope it was not on this fic or any fic for that matter.
    I love this fic, it's well pucker. And I'm amazed that you can write so fast.

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 05 Dec 2008
Reviewer: jflame (Signed)
    I have been told that I made a mistake with the Frogs and I hope it was not on this fic or any fic for that matter.
    I love this fic, it's well pucker. And I'm amazed that you can write so fast.

    Author's Response:

    Don't worry about the mistake. But I wonder if you realise that the rating is up to ten. And that equates to the five frogs that show up next to the chapter. IE: if you want to give a story four frogs, you would rate it at eight. Don't ask me why...stupid system.

    Glad you like the fic though. And I am sorry to say, I can't write as fast as you are imaging I can write. I have written up to chapter 28 of this story. But I did not start posting here until quite recently. Therefore I had a big backlog of chapters to put up.

    Lesley


Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 07 Dec 2008
Reviewer: jflame (Signed)
    I don't believe it. You've stumped me again.
    I might not have a handle on the frogs yet but I think this could be one of the best fic's I have ever read. Mine does not even scratch the surface of this. Well done.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your lovely compliment. I'm really glad that you're still enjoying the story. Thank you for reviewing and letting me know.

    Lesley


Written for the Spellcast Hallowe'en Challenge with Les Dowich. Telling a spooky story to the First-years, Harry unleashes something totally unexpected. Now Featured as the first story on the Spellcast Podcast Hallowe'en show.

Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Fic Fests > #3 Halloween, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 31 Oct 2008 / 31 Oct 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Halloween
Title: Chapter 1: The Legend of Sleepy... Hogwarts? 31 Oct 2008
Reviewer: jflame (Signed)
    That was bloody brilliant! Well written and great suspense. Just right for all hallows. Thanks.

Sev’s partner goes on vacation, Harry volunteers to dogsit, and the puppy from hell is unleashed in Snape’s home. Told from Harry’s POV!

Takes place after Mother’s Day.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Profanity
Chapters: 8 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 Dec 2008 / 18 Nov 2008
Series: Never Again! - Challenges: Puppy Challenge
Title: Chapter 8: Remus to the Rescue 03 Dec 2008
Reviewer: jflame (Signed)
    Oh wow. That was great. I can't remember when I've giggled so much. I wonder what Tobias would have done with Summer?
    My dog, Cleo once jumped off of a cliff after a butterfly and fell 12ft onto rocks. Merlin knows how she survived but she lived to give me more heart attacks. It seems that dogs like children are a test. I f you survive with your sanity intact then you'll be ok. Great job.

    Author's Response:

    Uh . . .if she had chewed his new leather boots, he'd have made a rug out of her.  Either that or dropped her off at the nearest pound.

    Your dog sounds like my Rocky, who was upstairs in my nephew's bedroom and he had left the window open and there was no screen.  The beagle jumped onto his desk, out the window, chased a ssquirrel across the roof and jumped off after it.  We all thought he was dead.  But turned out he was stunned and got up after ten seconds and ran off after the squirrel baying his fool head off. No broken bones, nada. God really does look out for idiot animals and lost children.


A series of snap-shots that make the Snapes a family.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Child fic, Sibling Addition
Categories: Parental Snape > Stepfather Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Alcohol Use, Profanity, Romance/Het
Chapters: 29 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 11 Nov 2014 / 18 Nov 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 19 Nov 2008
Reviewer: jflame (Signed)
    Oooh this sounds like fun. It's very catchy, well done

    Author's Response: Thanks. 


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