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Fanfiction author for many years - been writing HP fanfiction since 2005. Most of my stuff is posted on FA or FF.net.

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Prequel to Never Again. After the death of her husband, Lily Potter must begin her life anew, along with her son, Harry. Can they find comfort and solace with Master Healer Severus Snape? Or will old wounds from past and present keep them apart?

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Stepfather Snape, Healer Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Character Death, Physical Punishment Spanking, Profanity, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 31 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 29 Nov 2008 / 03 Jul 2008
Series: Never Again! - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 26: Seeking A Miracle 21 Nov 2008
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed)
    Thanks, I needed that Kleenex and chocolate...

    Author's Response: I know, I needed them too while I was writing.

Title: Chapter 27: Unwelcome News 22 Nov 2008
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed)
    From the mouths of babes...

    Excellent!

    Author's Response: I just loved that part, I felt a little comic relief was needed to balance the tragic tone to follow.

Title: Chapter 28: Downward Spiral 26 Nov 2008
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed)
    Girl, I'm going through boxes of kleenex here!

    And now we come to Inky...

    Author's Response: Me too! And you're right . . .Inky comes next! Hooray!

Title: Chapter 30: Where Shadows Go 28 Nov 2008
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed)
    Well done! A very good way to go - may it be so for all of us!

    Author's Response: That was in my mind as I was writing, my mom always said if she was going to go, she'd pray it be in her sleep and without any pain, not suffering from canacer or whatever.  I have to say i agree. Make it quick, if at all possible.  Hope you like the final chapter, it's posted now!

Title: Chapter 31: My Heart Will Go On 30 Nov 2008
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed)
    Waaaahhhhhh!!!!!!! Ok, get the point! Brilliant writing. See you soon.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I know this one was tough to read, but now you can read the sequels and be happy again.

Sickly and neglected by his caregivers, little Harry would not have survived were it not for the mysterious dark angel who watched over him, caring for him when he was sick. Harry never knew his name, until he attended Hogwarts and discovered a certain teacher bore a remarkable resemblance to his savior.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Healer Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 46 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 17 Oct 2008 / 04 Aug 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Heals like Magic
Title: Chapter 19: Antidote 04 Sep 2008
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed)
    Really liked MM in this one, and Sev. Good idea of the ring - Moss agate is a traditional poison detector, good one!

    Author's Response: You're right, I had to do some research on gemstones and their healing properties in order to select the right stone for Sev's ring.  I like protective Minerva, she really cares a lot for Sev and Harry and is not afraid to show it! Hope you like the next part, it's just been posted now!

Title: Chapter 20: Catspaw 05 Sep 2008
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed)
    Ah, Neville - good one! Should have seen that one coming, although it also could have been Percy.

    Keep it up!

    Author's Response: yes, it could have, but I felt Neville was more believable.  I should be posting the next chapter shortly.

Title: Chapter 23: Stairway to Heaven 07 Sep 2008
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed)
    Excellent! Ok, I LOVED the Moldy-Voldy reference, hee hee! and the stairway, and Minnie and Sev, you go girl! I'm sniffing away...

    Author's Response: Here's a tissue . . .so glad you liked it and there's more to come.

Title: Chapter 24: Snape's Bargain 09 Sep 2008
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed)
    As always, excellent! You're just cranking it out, aren't you? Keep 'em coming.

    Author's Response: I had a lot of time to write while I was away on vacation.  it was very peaceful and quiet by the lake in the Pocono mountains.

Title: Chapter 25: Farewell Feast 09 Sep 2008
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed)
    Eau de cephalopod is not a fragrance I wish to advertise... I loved this line! I've made soap the old fashioned way, many times - it's a lot cheaper and better for you than the commercial stuff - you got the feel of the process just right! It is a right stinky business.

    I loved the bitin the Great Hall - go Harry! When I first rad this scene in canon back in '97 I was so incensed for the Slytherins and always felt that Snape's true hatred of Harry really took off from that point. The kid had stolen his cup! Before that, I think he just looked at Harry as another annoyance that had to be tolerated.

    Great Chapter!

    Author's Response:

    I saw soap being made at a demonstration in a colonial style village once and have read about it, but never tried making it myself.  So I'm glad I captured the feeling right, I love handmade soaps, however.  People don't realize how much work it is though, which was why I had Sev use it as a punishment.  And the squid ink too.

    I always felt that part at the end was horridly unfair, too, after all the Slytherins had worked hard academically to win all those points and to have their cup snatched out from under their noses by three kids who had broken all the rules and then were rewarded for it was just terrible.  Plus, the cup was intended as an academic reward and also for good conduct, and what the three had done had nothing to do with academics or good conduct, just with being heroes.  yes, they saved the school, but if Dumbledore wanted to reward them he should have done so privately, not given them points towards the cup.  That was just blatant favoritism and you're right, I think that was when Snape started to hate Harry, since he seemed to get away with everything, just like James had.

    I'm glad you enjoyed my version of events.



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