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Zarathustra [Contact] Better be Slytherin!
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Fanfiction author for many years - been writing HP fanfiction since 2005. Most of my stuff is posted on FA or FF.net.

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Arms of a Dark Angel by Snapegirl starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 894]
Sickly and neglected by his caregivers, little Harry would not have survived were it not for the mysterious dark angel who watched over him, caring for him when he was sick. Harry never knew his name, until he attended Hogwarts and discovered a certain teacher bore a remarkable resemblance to his savior.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Healer Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 46 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 17 Oct 2008 / 04 Aug 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Heals like Magic
Title: Chapter 27: The Peaceful Glen 11 Sep 2008
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed)
    I love the glen, very nice - and Rellah is a hoot!

    Um, one thing though " It looks small, but it's much bigger on the outside than the inside" Don't you mean it the other way around? As in Wizard Space?

    Just grabbed my attention.

    Keep posting!

    Author's Response: Yes, I need to go and fix that I meant it the other way around!  You'll be seeing more of Rellah too!

Title: Chapter 30: Spirit Kin 17 Sep 2008
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed)
    I really like the imagery in this chappie, well done. Especially with Snape watching over Harry whilst sick. Makes want a snow leopard of my own.

    Author's Response: I want one too! Too bad I could never have one.  Oh well . . .that's why i write stories.  I love when Sev watches Harry sleep, it's so sweet and paternal. 

Title: Chapter 35: Consequences & Conversations 23 Sep 2008
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed)
    The last three Chapters have been quite good. Well done! I really like Boreal, and can possibly see where you are going with this character - hope you do.

    Author's Response: Thanks and I am going to do a lot more with Boreal, he's going to be a friend to Harry.  Great job on your story too, I've just reviewed it!

Title: Chapter 36: Pegasus and Rider 28 Sep 2008
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed)
    Yes! I knew I was right! (doing a happy bonding dance...)

    Excellent chappie!

    Author's Response: Thanks! You're the first one to figure out what was going to happen.  Good for you! *gives a certificate to Flourish & Blotts*

Title: Chapter 37: Birthday Surprises 28 Sep 2008
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed)
    Uh, oh, jealous Ron - that red hair will always get him into those hot spirits! Let's see how fast he holds a grudge in your piece!

    Author's Response: yes it will and it might not be a slong as you think! You'll see!

Title: Chapter 38: A Charmed Life 29 Sep 2008
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed)
    Oh, good speech! Nice and angtsy and to the point.

    Delightful!

    Author's Response:

    So happy you liked it, I wasn't sure if it were too much or not! But I really wanted Harry to tell him off, and show everyone that he's capable of speaking up for himself when he chooses. 


Title: Chapter 41: The Challenge 03 Oct 2008
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed)
    Good thrashing!! But of course Harry is going to fly, and win, as he could never end up indentured to that idiotic stable owner - but I can't wait to see how he trains and the final race! Good reading ahead, I gather.

    Author's Response: Very much so, thanks Zara! The training will present a problem at first, but Sev will figure something out.  he always does.  I can't wait to stick it to O'Shea and his crew of bullies!

Title: Chapter 42: Remembering Lily 07 Oct 2008
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed)
    Yep, lots of kleenex - good job! Like Eileen... I think Lily still held a candle for Sev, despite going to James.

    Author's Response: I like her too, she'll be in a few more scenes before the big race, giving advice to Harry & Sev.  As for Lily & Sev, you'd be right, a part of her would always love him, that was why she trusted him to look after her son.   

Title: Chapter 44: Night Flyer 14 Oct 2008
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed)
    They better win! Great description of the race track and how it is modified for flyers instead of runners.

    Author's Response: Thanks, it was tough trying to think of all that.

Title: Chapter 45: The Skybolt Championship 16 Oct 2008
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed)
    Excellent - You kept me on the edge of my seat, even though I just knew Harry had to win, if only to thwart O'Shea! Sad to see it go soon, but this has been a fun read this summer and fall - thank you!

    Author's Response: Thanks. I really appreciate your comments & hope that you\'ll enjoy my other fics too. But there may be a sequel soon!


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