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Title: Chapter 1: The Best Man
| 29 Jul 2014
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Reviewer: severusphoenix (Signed)
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A very cute story. I liked the thought that maybe Severus was out there watching.
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
| 30 Jul 2014
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Reviewer: severusphoenix (Signed)
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This was so very awesome. I have some personal experience with bullying. It is something no one deserves to have happen to them.
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five
| 31 Oct 2014
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Reviewer: severusphoenix (Signed)
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An interesting start. Hope you update soon.
Title: Chapter 1: Dark Forest
| 04 Jul 2015
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Reviewer: severusphoenix (Signed)
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Very nice. Short, but includes enough explanation so you know what is happening. Sad, but I can see this happening quite easily.
Dumbledore told Harry that he wanted him to let Slughorn collect him. But Harry soon learns that being collected by Slughorn really means. Will he be able to save himself or will he succumb to the man for the greater good? And what does Severus have to do with it all? Was he too 'collected' by Slughorn and will he be able to save Harry before it's too late?
Takes Place: 6th Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind
Tags: None
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
| 08 Jun 2015
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Reviewer: severusphoenix (Signed)
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You've made me really hate Dumbledore here, not that that is very difficult. It doesn't seem far-fetched that Albus would sacrifice a student for information or to gain an ally, even if the student is molested ... even if its Harry. After all, Harry is going to be sacrificed anyway. Hope Severus is able to help soon. Harry should realize he's a natural ally. It would be nice if the just leave Hogwarts altogether and laugh at Albus from the Caribbean on Sirius' old island or some other nice relaxing place.
When he learns about the Dursleys, Dumbledore forces Snape to adopt Harry. Harry is frightened knowing that Snape and his father were rivals in school, but things are even worse than he had imagined. As Harry learns of the real connection between Snape and his father, the line between good and evil starts to blur. What will Harry do when he learns about how the death eaters started and he finds himself sympathizing with them? Will Snape overcome his horrendous past and give Harry love and support as his world view crumbles around him?
Takes Place: 2nd summer
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Snape flavour: Snape is Desperate
Tags: Adoption, Spying!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 3: A New Plan
| 26 Nov 2014
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Reviewer: severusphoenix (Signed)
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Interested to know where this will go. Hope Severus gets all the help he needs from Sprout ... interesting curve ball adding her in.
Author's Response: My first review for my first fanfiction! Thanks! I don't know why but I always pictured Severus seeking comfort from Professor Sprout after being bullied. Maybe it's because she'd be unbiased since she's a Hufflepuff.
Title: Chapter 2: The School Subdued
| 25 Mar 2015
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Reviewer: severusphoenix (Signed)
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So after stoking the fires of hatred between Slytherin and the other 3 houses and convincing the Gryffindor house that they were always in the right for the past two decades, now Albus is upset that the students followed his lead into folly?
Of course, harry and draco were stupid as well as the others who 'rioted'.
I'm surprised, or maybe not, that Harry took the blame and punishment so meekly. I suppose he's used to not getting to defend himself. It would be interesting to have him demand to have one of the teachers see a pensieve memory of draco trying to crucio him.
Ah, well. Am enjoying the story. Update soon.
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
| 08 Apr 2015
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Reviewer: severusphoenix (Signed)
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Wonderful story, I greatly enjoyed the comradeship that Snape and Harry developed. It really screams "I need a sequel."
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
| 29 Apr 2015
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Reviewer: severusphoenix (Signed)
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very interesting start, hope you continue.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I will. ;) I promise.
Title: Chapter 4: Wish Granted
| 05 Aug 2015
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Reviewer: severusphoenix (Signed)
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A very interesting story. A bit of a different plotline. I've seem 'wish' stories before, but this was shorter and resolved quicker, which is nice sometimes. the interaction between the three men was fun as well.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, and for sharing your thoughts with me. I'm glad that you liked the interaction between the three men. I did not want to write a very long story; I've got several unfinished stories, and didn't want this to become one of those.
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