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A Journey to the Past by Firestar starstarstarstar [Reviews - 28]
Harry must go to the past in order to save his parents and his own lives... But what will happen? Will he get out of this mess alive?

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 31 - Completed: No - Updated: 31 Jan 2005 / 31 Jan 2005
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 26: The Christmas Dance 10 Jul 2006
Reviewer: Serena Snape (Signed)
    While I like your story very much, I can't condone for copying another's work. The scene with Lily and Snape dancing was taken from another fanfiction. I can't remember the title at the moment, but it was about Harry being caught in the fire at the Dursleys and sent to Severus for protection by a goddess. Then he goes in the founder's dimension and comes back. There's a new student at Hogwarts. He changes his name to Sebastien Frostpine I think - and I know that the dance scene was taken from there. Harry and the other student danced together - they were learnt the Art of Dance by the Founders. He was a fire elemental and she a water elemental I think. Or was it the other way around.

Comforts from the Unexpected by Firestar starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 54]
The story begins with a fire at the Dursleys & Harry is locked in his cupboard. Rescued by a spiritual presence, he is sent to stay with a certain Potions Master, bringing in a new range of adventures. Suicide attempts, abuse

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Suicide Themes
Chapters: 43 - Completed: No - Updated: 31 Jan 2006 / 31 Jan 2005
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 27 Aug 2006
Reviewer: Serena Snape (Signed)

    The last part with the dance was taken from another fanfiction! The fanfiction was centred around Severus and Lily though and you just changed the names and the colours of the dress. I can't remember the name of the fanfiction, but I know what I'm talking about.


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 02 Jun 2006
Reviewer: Serena Snape (Signed)
    Yeah, I liked the chapter. :P The only mistakes you made is that you changed Flame's gender from a she to a he and left out a few sentences. ^___^

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 02 Jun 2006
Reviewer: Serena Snape (Signed)
    Ron's are blue I think, Sirius's grey, Remus's grey/amber, Peter's watery blue and James's hazel. :P

Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 03 Jun 2006
Reviewer: Serena Snape (Signed)
    Um, the last part of the chapter is missing. There's the sentence start: Severus sat at the teachers... and then it ends.

Past Featured Story Lack of Faith by Marietsy starstarstarstar [Reviews - 75]
Harry is framed and sent to Azkaban. His friends and the Wizarding World have turned their backs. Five years later Harry escapes and he is mad. With the help of Severus Snape, Harry looks for proof of his innocence. Will he find it in time? Will he be able to find forgiveness for those who betrayed him?

Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 30 - Completed: No - Updated: 10 Jun 2005 / 10 Feb 2005
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 27: Twenty Seven 01 May 2005
Reviewer: Serena Snape (Signed)
    "Oh my god, its Gandalf." This quote is the best! I always have to repeat it aloud when I'm reading the chapter! I love the story and everything! :D

The Painful Guardianship by Dina starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 218]
AU - Finally Snape and Harry get to the “bottom” of things. A Snape adopts Harry Fic. The story starts by the end of POA and takes over from there. Contains spoilers to GOF and Ootp. The series involve spanking of children/teens. If you are not comfortable with this theme. Please do not read.

Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Deaging, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 31 - Completed: No - Updated: 23 Nov 2008 / 15 Jul 2005
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Bats and Dragons 12 Apr 2008
Reviewer: Serena Snape (Signed)
    Yay! I'm so happy you updated! This story is one of my absolute favourites and I was so happy to see you updated. Now if only I could do so as well for my story. XD

His Reflection by sarafyna starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 21]
Nine year old Harry discovers Metamorphagus abilities after a certain haircut. What will happen after he accidentally apparates himself to Snape Manor, looking nothing like Harry Potter, the Boy who Lived?

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 5 - Completed: No - Updated: 24 Jul 2007 / 06 Jul 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 4: Collision 27 Jul 2007
Reviewer: Serena Snape (Signed)
    lol, that last part was hilarious! :D 'A minute later found Severus Snape back in the chair, face in his hands.' That one was brilliant.

Harry and the Unexpected Christmas by teddylonglong starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Someone is in for a surprise on Christmas day, which isn’t really a Christmas surprise.
A family story. Completely AU, partly OOC!

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Child fic, Deaging
Categories: Parental Snape, Fic Fests > #5 Winter
Rated: K - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Dec 2007 / 19 Dec 2007
Series: None - Challenges: Christmas
Title: Chapter 1: Harry and the Unexpected Christmas 25 Feb 2008
Reviewer: Serena Snape (Signed)
    Yay! I love this story! ^____^ I even made a banner for it once I've read it through. Here it is. Hope you like it.



    Author's Response: Wow - thanks for the great banner! I will put into onto my newsgroup page if you don't mind :-)

Harry and the Mystery of Age by teddylonglong starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 105]
Sequel to ‘Harry and the Unexpected Christmas’. Having been de-aged in his sixth year Harry starts again with different priorities, other friends, and unlikely allies. AU, partly OOC, Dumbledore bashing.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Child fic, Deaging, Resorting
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 28 - Completed: No - Updated: 08 Apr 2008 / 28 Dec 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: LIGHT BLUE EYES 25 Feb 2008
Reviewer: Serena Snape (Signed)
    ooo - Tom Riddle as little Harry's godfather. Wonder how he'll take it. ^^

    And isn't it a nice christmas present for Severus to get?

    Author's Response:

    At least it was a real surprise for Christmas ;-)

    Thanks for reading and reviewing!



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